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Topic review - Ah! Peku [NaNoRenMo 2012] - UPLOADED
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  Post subject:  Re: Ah! Peku [NaNoRenMo 2012]  Reply with quote
gas wrote:
Hi NB9!
As usual your characters are so alive :D and your concepts bright!
Good work!


Thanks gas! :) Good luck on your project too! Looks great so far ^^
Post Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2012 10:49 am
  Post subject:  Re: Ah! Peku [NaNoRenMo 2012]  Reply with quote
Hi NB9!
As usual your characters are so alive :D and your concepts bright!
Good work!
Post Posted: Thu Mar 08, 2012 2:35 pm
  Post subject:  Re: Ah! Peku [NaNoRenMo 2012]  Reply with quote
NickelBuckle9 wrote:
..You're working on NanoLife, right? That one really caught my eye. I've been meaning to comment on your thread for a while now, but I kept getting distracted. Your game seems very interesting too, and I love the gui you posted. (I think that's the right term). I'm really looking forward to your project being finished! ^_^


Aww, thank you so much! I'll do my very best not to disappoint you! I'm looking forward to April where we can try out each other's projects ^^.
Post Posted: Wed Mar 07, 2012 10:53 pm
  Post subject:  Re: Ah! Peku [NaNoRenMo 2012]  Reply with quote
Anna wrote:
Wow, the projects just keep on coming!

As for yours, I really like the way you draw people and their descriptions are fun too. It gives them a lot of character with just two sentences. Your synopsis sounds fun too!

Good luck!


Thank you!

..You're working on NanoLife, right? That one really caught my eye. I've been meaning to comment on your thread for a while now, but I kept getting distracted. Your game seems very interesting too, and I love the gui you posted. (I think that's the right term). I'm really looking forward to your project being finished! ^_^
Post Posted: Wed Mar 07, 2012 9:52 pm
  Post subject:  Re: Ah! Peku [NaNoRenMo 2012]  Reply with quote
Wow, the projects just keep on coming!

As for yours, I really like the way you draw people and their descriptions are fun too. It gives them a lot of character with just two sentences. Your synopsis sounds fun too!

Good luck!
Post Posted: Wed Mar 07, 2012 9:47 pm
  Post subject:  Ah! Peku [NaNoRenMo 2012] - UPLOADED  Reply with quote
STATUS:

Well, here's my NaNoRenMo attempt!

...unfortunately, I wasn't able to finish, and thus it's a failed challenge I suppose. However, it's still worth checking out, and you could consider this version a demo.

Here's what it's missing:
--- Crafting system
--- Home Decoration
--- Happiness/Hunger degeneration
--- Health renewal
--- Only 50% of the quests functioning
--- Ending animations
--- Most of the story...

I know that probably sounds like a lot, but it's really not too bad. I did manage to complete some really cool features such as the battle system and exploration system, so please check it out!

I'm kinda glad I didn't rush to finish adding the story, because I think it's a great tale to be told, and why give away the ending without all the details?

I'll keep working on this and polish everything up and hopefully finish the real thing soon!

Here's the link to download it:
http://nickel-buckle-9.deviantart.com/a ... -293513876

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The fairytale adventure about the bird that fell off the moon.
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A hazy little town in the middle of a valley never sees much excitement. Most people live their lives quietly, surrounded by the thick, peaceful forest. However, one night there's a meteor shower, and before there's time to think, something hits the ground hard right in front of your house. It turns out to be an egg.

As you play the story, the egg hatches and a beautiful bird emerges unlike anyone has ever seen. As it turns out, the bird was knocked off the moon and fell to earth, and it wants to fly back. Can you help it grow up big and strong so it can fly back, or will you get distracted and let fate have its path?

UPDATE! The backgrounds are done! Here are a few examples. I still haven't decided whether or not I want to keep it black and white or add color.

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LASS - Working part time at the market, this clerk is quite a bit ditzy, clumsy, and air headed.
Maybe she's intentionally aloof, but then again, I seriously doubt it.

FRIEND - This is your best friend. His sarcasm can sometimes get the best of him,
but you've known him long enough that you can tell when he's joking...right?

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GYPSY - This is the gypsy that lives in the woods. I can't say too much about her,
but while everyone thinks she's a crazy woman,
sometimes she turns out to be the one making the most sense.

MAN - This fine gentleman really knows a thing or two about, well, pretty much everything.
However, he's not the type of guy that gives charity.
If you want his help, you'll have to pay.
Post Posted: Wed Mar 07, 2012 9:37 pm

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