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[size=150][b]Update![/b][/size] The game is now complete! :D I'd like to thank everyone who gave feedback and support, really means a lot to me! ^_^

Edit: New link upped with some corrections applied

[size=150][b]Completed Games section thread: [/b][/size][url]http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?f=11&t=14603[/url]

[quote="teacup"]Looks like this will be a cute game. I especially like the main menu. ^-^
The CG is funny, too XD {I think it looks pretty good, don't be so hard on yourself!}
Good luck finishing this![/quote]

Thank you!
I'm glad the CG's funny, was hoping it didn't look awkward or anything. :>
Hoping for a release by Saturday. ^^

Looks like this will be a cute game. I especially like the main menu. ^-^
The CG is funny, too XD {I think it looks pretty good, don't be so hard on yourself!}
Good luck finishing this!

[quote="tuna_sushi"]I've been stalking this thread for some time now :p
The story sounds cute :3

About the textbox : The brownish-papery textbox is much better than the pink one. It really connects with the whole "letter" thing

Good luck on your project! :D
[size=85]I'm not good at giving good advice, so I'm sorry I don't have anything helpful to say ;p ;p[/size][/quote]

Thank you! :) ^//^ I'm glad the textbox's good now. ^^


[b][size=150]Update! [/size][/b]:) CGs are done now, just need some final fixes and final testing. ^_^

Screenshot

[img]http://i.imgur.com/LIk2c.png[/img]

[size=50] I'm bad at drawing people running... and grass... ;_; orz[/size]

I've been stalking this thread for some time now :p
The story sounds cute :3

About the textbox : The brownish-papery textbox is much better than the pink one. It really connects with the whole "letter" thing

Good luck on your project! :D
[size=85]I'm not good at giving good advice, so I'm sorry I don't have anything helpful to say ;p ;p[/size]

[quote="Ziassan"]Oh, using the letter is a good idea, you could even use not a color but a part of the picture as transparent background of the textbox ? Text of your game would like this be written "on a letter" hum~[/quote]

^_^ hm... I'm trying out if I can give the textbox a bit of a paperish feel - similar to the one on the main menu. Light, sandy brown definitely harmonizes better than the pink OvO

[quote="Ziassan"](and about music, apart from the track you asked me, will you include others things ?)[/quote]

Yeah. :) Got some music from TAM and Incompetech too. ^^

EDIT: New textbox! :)

[img]http://i.imgur.com/Oi5Wj.jpg[/img]

Oh, using the letter is a good idea, you could even use not a color but a part of the picture as transparent background of the textbox ? Text of your game would like this be written "on a letter" hum~

(and about music, apart from the track you asked me, will you include others things ?)

Thanks, everyone! Sorry, wasn't able to reply to some, but I really appreciate your input and opinion. :)


[quote="Ziassan"]Hmm, sprites are nice, have you others expressions ?

About your screen, I think probably the slighty pink of the text box is in my opinion a bit strange on this "real" color background, a more neutral ton could be better. Like I don't know, something into the belt of Sayaka and her top.
Same thing for the name color, I don't know how are the colors in the rest of the game, but on this screenshoot a duller color may also give more harmony (like the red in shadow from her shoulders).

Anyway, good luck to end your project in time~[/quote]

Thank you for the input! :) Looking at it again... Yeah, the pink and the textbox is a bit...off. I'll try something like the paper of the letter in the main menu. :D

And yeah, there are other expressions. ^_^

Hmm, sprites are nice, have you others expressions ?

About your screen, I think probably the slighty pink of the text box is in my opinion a bit strange on this "real" color background, a more neutral ton could be better. Like I don't know, something into the belt of Sayaka and her top.
Same thing for the name color, I don't know how are the colors in the rest of the game, but on this screenshoot a duller color may also give more harmony (like the red in shadow from her shoulders).

Anyway, good luck to end your project in time~

Progress update: Final proofreading/some revisions done! :) Testing has also gone underway. Just need to finish the CGs (since the demo had placeholders), polish up everything, and fix the errors some testers specified. :)

Screenshot:

[img]http://i.imgur.com/UJjkb.jpg[/img]

Sorry for the small size... figured having the 800X600 screenshot would be a bit bulky in the thread...
Any feedback on the screenshot? Like textbox, font, or just anything. :P

The background is Celianna's. :3

This looks cute! I think I'll have a go at it when it's complete.

Progress update! :)

Sprites are all done! BGs are almost done (photographs courtesy of Celianna). After BGs, I'll tackle CGs.
Music and SFX have been assembled, and there's also a textbox now.
Steadily making progress. Awesome. :)

Sprite redone:

[img]http://i.imgur.com/aZclW.png[/img]

Sayaka's not as grumpy here ^^

[img]http://i.imgur.com/cZStq.png[/img]

I wonder where Tegami gets all that energy. I can use some of it too. =.=

Great idea for the menu, and it looks beautiful. Good job!

Sorry for the double post, but I'd like to update with the picture of the main menu! :D

[img]http://i.imgur.com/Wh4jY.jpg[/img]

Sorry if it's a bit small, it's a preview image. ^^;;

Since Main Menu is done, and proofreading, it's off to art! :D

[quote="Aurehan"]:DDDD~~ I'm excited for this one! It looks so cute~~! <3
Andyourartiscutetoo<3 Good luck finishing~~![/quote]

Thank you very much ^///^. Good luck on your project too! It's also looking cute. OvO

[quote="Anna"]This is so cute and promising and it's a KN too <3! Please, please, please finish this - I'm looking forward to it a lot![/quote]

Thank you! <3 I'm also looking forward to Nanolife. I especially love the GUI (the MMOish concept). Your concept art is adorable. :)