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- Mon Apr 07, 2014 12:59 am
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Phersu's Writing Desk (Accepts Prompts/Requests/Criticism)
- Replies: 9
- Views: 1846
Re: Phersu's Writing Desk (Accepts Prompts/Requests/Criticis
Just a little intro. ~~~~~~~ Born in Darkness, Wreathed in Shadows, Cradled by the Night. Prelude I - The Silent My name is Simon the Silent. My first memory is of a dark room. The only light was from the moon, filtered through the dirty glass of a window. I made no noise as I came to. I was a silen...
- Sat Mar 15, 2014 12:22 am
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Phersu's Writing Desk (Accepts Prompts/Requests/Criticism)
- Replies: 9
- Views: 1846
Re: Phersu's Writing Desk (Accepts Prompts/Requests/Criticis
'I was made for him, He for me, But life ain't so sweet, To leave us be.' Let's start from the top. Girl meets boy. Or boy meets girl. Doesn't really matter who meets who first. They fall in love. Ah, love at first sight, because they are literally made for each other. Boy and girl stick together th...
- Wed Mar 12, 2014 5:18 pm
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Good Endings, Bad Endings, True Endings, False Endings
- Replies: 34
- Views: 6960
Re: Good Endings, Bad Endings, True Endings, False Endings
True route is important for sequels, so you know which route the sequel takes off after. I prefer the Maji Koi routes, however, because they aren't really named per say as true or such.
- Mon Mar 10, 2014 9:56 pm
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Phersu's Writing Desk (Accepts Prompts/Requests/Criticism)
- Replies: 9
- Views: 1846
Re: Phersu's Writing Desk (Accepts Prompts/Requests/Criticis
A Normal Kind of Man. One of my favorite characters in fiction is Misogi Kumagawa from Medaka Box. Why? Because he is a self-described loser, who never wins anything. He agrees that he isn't smart, strong, handsome, cute, lucky or pretty, and yet he wants to beat people like that. He has two abilit...
- Sat Mar 08, 2014 10:55 pm
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Phersu's Writing Desk (Accepts Prompts/Requests/Criticism)
- Replies: 9
- Views: 1846
Re: Phersu's Writing Desk (Accepts Prompts/Requests/Criticis
Getting kind of lonely. Here's another unfinished. Yume no Sekai A baby girl dreams. There exist a place, a world, in which we all visit at some point. A world that exists merely because humanity wills it to be. A world without limits or boundaries. Endless. Nothing isn't possible here. A young girl...
- Sat Feb 15, 2014 11:26 pm
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Phersu's Writing Desk (Accepts Prompts/Requests/Criticism)
- Replies: 9
- Views: 1846
Re: Phersu's Writing Desk (Accepts Prompts/Requests/Criticis
Sci-fi short. "My completely secret space diary, entry 187. This will be my final entry. We.....I am currently in an unknown star system. Weapon systems are un-operational. Worm-hole drive is currently in the process of activating. Life support is failing. Oxygen is limited. There are no longer...
- Fri Feb 14, 2014 8:17 pm
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: I need help creating a writing style
- Replies: 13
- Views: 1659
Re: I need help creating a writing style
I think the way you're writing now will work well for a visual novel, so I don't see really a need to change it. Authors style of writing varies greatly, and it wouldn't be odd if you were able to recognize a stories author just because you had previously read some of their work. Its something that ...
- Mon Feb 10, 2014 12:40 am
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Phersu's Writing Desk (Accepts Prompts/Requests/Criticism)
- Replies: 9
- Views: 1846
Re: Phersu's Writing Desk (Accepts Prompts/Requests/Criticis
Well, someone wanted me to write a dark romance story. Here's what I actually wrote. Twisted Choice. If you had to kill the person you loved to save somebody, would you? Probably not, right? I mean, you don't care about this other random person. What if you had to kill her to save more than one pers...
- Mon Feb 10, 2014 12:19 am
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Phersu's Writing Desk (Accepts Prompts/Requests/Criticism)
- Replies: 9
- Views: 1846
Re: Phersu's Writing Desk (Accepts Prompts/Requests/Criticis
Now for a bit of a romance short. Well, sort of. I'm only posting the beginning for now. The Zero Confidence Man/The Zero Luck Woman Let me start by saying that I have no confidence. I can truthfully claim to be a man with no confidence in myself. Of course, there a lot of people like that out there...
- Sat Feb 08, 2014 9:51 pm
- Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
- Topic: Recruiting For Two Projects [Unpaid For Now]
- Replies: 21
- Views: 2055
Re: Recruiting For Two Projects [Unpaid For Now]
Well, I might be able to assist with either job as a writer. Send me a pm if you're interested in my help, I suppose.
- Tue Feb 04, 2014 1:58 am
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Phersu's Writing Desk (Accepts Prompts/Requests/Criticism)
- Replies: 9
- Views: 1846
Re: Phersu's Writing Desk (Accepts Prompts/Requests/Criticis
Allegorical short.~ Guy was a rather odd man. Most would label him as insane, really. He wandered during the day, and he wandered during the night. Darkness did little to impede his progress as he continued to walk. The sun didn’t do any better in trying to blind him from his destination. It couldn’...
- Mon Feb 03, 2014 12:24 am
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Phersu's Writing Desk (Accepts Prompts/Requests/Criticism)
- Replies: 9
- Views: 1846
Phersu's Writing Desk (Accepts Prompts/Requests/Criticism)
Hello.~ My name is Phersu, but I go by Su, Kouki, Joseph, or Grimm. I'm a writer, as well as a student. Basically, I'm making this thread for a few things. First, I'll be posting some of my new shorts here. My older ones, which I don't feel like copy and pasting, can be found here http://www.crunchy...
Re: Guestbook
Hello. I'm Phersu. As for a name, you can call me Su, Kouki, Joseph or Grimm. Yeah, I've got a lot of names. I'm a writer who is learning piano and Japanese. My interests job wise are psychiatry and English. Currently, I'm a student.
- Mon Feb 03, 2014 12:09 am
- Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
- Topic: Writing a Blind Protagonist
- Replies: 14
- Views: 3175
Re: Writing a Blind Protagonist
One thing, for the visual part, you might want to show what the protagonist thinks things look like. Perhaps not what they actually are, but as to what he perceives them to be.
- Mon Jan 27, 2014 12:34 pm
- Forum: Old Threads (– September 2014)
- Topic: Flowers on the Dance Floor: Looking for Co-Writer [Closed]
- Replies: 7
- Views: 1354
Re: Flowers on the Dance Floor: Looking for Co-Writer [Paid]
If you're still looking, I'm interested.