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Farewell, Bunny Boy : A Visual Novel by @oppibella A short story about a cute bunny town far away from the rest of the world around them, and a cute bunny boy wanting to experience more. He leaves behind his calm life and loved ones for one of mystery and adventure. https://36.media.tumblr.com/d773...

I think you'll benefit from finding a skilled editor. The text is riddled with problems, including lots of sentence fragments, but for a first project, this was still a good effort. I'm definitely looking forward to reading about Bunny Boy's adventures outside of Peachberry! :) Ahh thank you!! Ah y...

Farewell, Bunny Boy : A Visual Novel by @oppibella A short story about a cute bunny town far away from the rest of the world around them, and a cute bunny boy wanting to experience more. He leaves behind his calm life and loved ones for one of mystery and adventure. https://36.media.tumblr.com/d773...