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by OokamiKasumi
Wed May 27, 2015 10:26 am
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: So, you want a Critique? [Rant]
Replies: 52
Views: 6798

Re: So, you want a Critique? [Rant]

I don't think it's a terrible idea to say, as a person with a valued opinion, "Can you give me feedback on your overall experience with this and anything else that will make the nearly completed project better?" I'm Not saying that you shouldn't ask for " feedback on your overall exp...
by OokamiKasumi
Sat May 02, 2015 4:14 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: What Would You Want in a Detective VN?
Replies: 12
Views: 1948

Re: What Would You Want in a Detective VN?

Read about the rules of fairplay mysteries. If you decide those rules are not for you, decide how to indicate to the readers what rules they should be using instead. Mystery readers will be very angry if they expect a fair mystery and don't get one. THIS, absolutely. The Rules of Fair Play In 1930,...
by OokamiKasumi
Fri May 01, 2015 4:37 pm
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: The Walk [Psych][NaNoWinter 2015]
Replies: 74
Views: 32352

Re: The Walk [Psych][NaNoWinter 2015]

I had a ton of fun with this game, great job!! I'm glad you enjoyed it! I've come across these Jungian type analysis things-- in one of my lectures, our professor took us through something like this. This was a lot more in depth, though! Great job. Thank you. I first ran across the test while I was...
by OokamiKasumi
Sun Apr 19, 2015 9:53 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: The Walk [Psych][NaNoWinter 2015]
Replies: 74
Views: 32352

Re: The Walk [Psych][NaNoWinter 2015]

This game was gorgeous. Thanks to you, I've got to know my thoughts and my mind better. I'm thrilled you enjoyed the game! I thought it would be a few obvious answer questions or "choose from the underneath symbols", so it made quite an impression on me when in the beginning the backgroun...
by OokamiKasumi
Sat Apr 18, 2015 12:36 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: The Walk [Psych][NaNoWinter 2015]
Replies: 74
Views: 32352

Re: The Walk [Psych][NaNoWinter 2015]

Ladyalexia wrote:Love this game. It was. Also it pinpoint at most things.
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
by OokamiKasumi
Fri Apr 10, 2015 8:40 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Which kind of genre?
Replies: 6
Views: 1261

Re: Which kind of genre?

I'm expected to write four stories for my visual novel, but I'm having a hard time deciding what kind of genre should I choose for my first story. I know this is a weird question, but I need suggestions: -If you were to play my visual novel, would you like the first story to be a sci-fi comedy or a...
by OokamiKasumi
Sun Apr 05, 2015 6:40 am
Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
Topic: Is it possible to make an assessment quiz on Ren'py?
Replies: 4
Views: 1168

Re: Is it possible to make an assessment quiz on Ren'py?

I know it's possible to make quizes and games, but instead of "yes/no" questions, I was wondering if it'd be possible to make questions like... "what's your favorite color?" and "what sign are you?" then in the end, have a result based off the choices you make. sorry, ...
by OokamiKasumi
Wed Mar 25, 2015 1:01 am
Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
Topic: Customizing the namebox
Replies: 6
Views: 2781

Re: Customizing the namebox

Hi there! Thanks a lot for the very specific help! Right now I get the follow error when I try running the game after placing that piece of text in the right spot (with the right spacing) in options.rpy: File "game/options.rpy", line 131: invalid syntax style say_label: First, swap the co...
by OokamiKasumi
Mon Mar 23, 2015 9:21 pm
Forum: Ren'Py Questions and Announcements
Topic: Customizing the namebox
Replies: 6
Views: 2781

Re: Customizing the namebox

. . . I want my namebox to be a different from my regular textbox (they are using two different PNG files and have different margins/padding etc. The problem is I don't know where in the script I should customize the namebox. And then once I've customized that namebox, will I have to use something ...
by OokamiKasumi
Mon Mar 23, 2015 2:10 am
Forum: General Discussion
Topic: What was your first VN made like?
Replies: 30
Views: 4767

Re: What was your first VN made like?

I made a practice VN.... today. Just to learn the program. I got a good Idea how it works... sortive.... off topic. . . . So what was yours like? My first completed VN was Torrey & the Vampire R-18!!! , an adult kinetic story using doctored images from MorgueFiles and other free image places. B...
by OokamiKasumi
Sun Mar 22, 2015 11:25 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: How to write characters that people love in a short time?
Replies: 12
Views: 5067

Re: How to write characters that people love in a short time

Simplest way? There's a formula for creating character sympathy. Use a combination of the nine following ingredients. You need at least 5 of them. Using 6-7 of them is best. (Taken and paraphrased from Eric Edson's The Story Solution - seriously, go buy it.) Excellent advice. (Adding to notes.) -- ...
by OokamiKasumi
Sat Mar 21, 2015 10:52 pm
Forum: Asset Creation: Writing
Topic: Improving romance in games with rivalry and respect
Replies: 3
Views: 1531

Re: Improving romance in games with rivalry and respect

I really like his model for building a comedic romantic relationship. -- It's very different from the typical (boring) stat-building style; by simply saying what the character wants to hear, or outright bribery with dates and gifts. However, it would be quite challenging to create this, mainly becau...
by OokamiKasumi
Sat Mar 21, 2015 1:50 am
Forum: WiP: NaNoRenO
Topic: The Last Hunt [Huntress/Magic Horse]
Replies: 18
Views: 4428

Re: The Last Hunt [Huntress/Magic Horse]

This story sounds and looks awesome so far!
-- I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with it. ♥
by OokamiKasumi
Sat Mar 21, 2015 1:44 am
Forum: Completed Games
Topic: The Walk [Psych][NaNoWinter 2015]
Replies: 74
Views: 32352

Re: The Walk [Psychological][NaNoWinter 2015]

Okay, so I don't know if you still remember or not, but I've actually made the review . . . and I hope you like it. http://ernestalice15.tumblr.com/tagged/visual%20novel I'm honored that you took the time to review my little game, and I did indeed enjoy reading it! -- I'm thrilled that you enjoyed ...
by OokamiKasumi
Mon Mar 16, 2015 8:26 pm
Forum: Creator Discussion
Topic: How to Plan?
Replies: 9
Views: 1490

Re: How to Plan?

If you want to plan out a visual novel, there are a great many posts that cover this. You can find them if you use the search box. (It's at the bottom of Creator Discussion page.) search: multi path game Path structures: -- http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?f=4&t=16825&hilit=mul...