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No unread posts General Writing FAQs and Resources

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CheeryMoya

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rabcor View the latest post

No unread posts Research tips about Japan.

Funchal99

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Tue Sep 23, 2014 4:20 pm

Funchal99 View the latest post

No unread posts Request for a Critique...on a small segment of story

Dread Lord

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Tue Sep 23, 2014 12:18 pm

fleet View the latest post

No unread posts Attachment(s) Four ways to write a great story

sasquatchii

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Tue Sep 23, 2014 11:53 am

breadslam View the latest post

No unread posts Attachment(s) Advice on Writing Narrative in VNs

OokamiKasumi

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Tue Sep 23, 2014 2:58 am

OokamiKasumi View the latest post

No unread posts Dealing With Multiple Internal Dialogues

Shou

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Mon Sep 22, 2014 10:54 pm

Ammeh View the latest post

No unread posts Romance VNs/Dating Sims are dubious manipulation games?

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rainbowcascade

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Sun Sep 21, 2014 9:19 pm

Ammeh View the latest post

No unread posts Word overuse

MetaFrosty

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Sun Sep 21, 2014 12:39 pm

Lexer View the latest post

No unread posts Proper Love Interest Balance in a Dating Game?

AmericaTheBeautiful

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Sun Sep 21, 2014 10:42 am

gekiganwing View the latest post

No unread posts Visual Novel- Third Person or First Person with POV Changes

dmasterxd

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Sat Sep 20, 2014 10:28 pm

Mad Harlequin View the latest post

No unread posts How to Add Depth to Character

Lucy1212

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Sat Sep 20, 2014 7:54 pm

breadslam View the latest post

No unread posts Level of logic/realism in a VN

meiri

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Sat Sep 20, 2014 7:12 pm

breadslam View the latest post

No unread posts Attachment(s) How do you plan a VN?

Anastylos

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Sat Sep 20, 2014 10:38 am

Rara View the latest post

No unread posts Attachment(s) Could anyone help me to come up with some character's quotes

Appota

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Thu Sep 18, 2014 10:07 pm

Appota View the latest post

No unread posts Attachment(s) Critique on the Visual Novel I'm Working On

Lucy1212

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Thu Sep 18, 2014 7:26 am

sasquatchii View the latest post

No unread posts How to handle player interaction.

Vin Howard

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Wed Sep 17, 2014 4:07 pm

Catalyst Edge Gaming View the latest post

No unread posts Re-writes

daijinahito

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Tue Sep 16, 2014 10:15 pm

Lexer View the latest post

No unread posts Is it safe/legal to do this: rename and release unpaid story

DaFool

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Tue Sep 16, 2014 12:57 pm

Aurélie View the latest post

No unread posts How do I write a strong beginning?

PhoenixStardust

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Mon Sep 15, 2014 5:32 pm

SundownKid View the latest post

No unread posts Making a game more interactive?

Morhighan

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Sun Sep 14, 2014 1:04 pm

Mirrowdothack View the latest post

No unread posts When making OCs and their backstory just....

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kisa

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Sun Sep 14, 2014 12:45 pm

BarabiSama View the latest post

No unread posts Writing in a journal-like style?

sonorousgem

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Fri Sep 12, 2014 11:58 pm

Vin Howard View the latest post

No unread posts Need Critique on Lethal Love Scene (A Tad Mature)

pocoscon

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Wed Sep 03, 2014 11:41 pm

pocoscon View the latest post

No unread posts BL game seme-uke ratio?

Zelda0909

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Mon Sep 01, 2014 4:38 pm

Chocopyro View the latest post

No unread posts Non-native english speaker needs critique

Aviala

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Mon Sep 01, 2014 3:57 am

cuttlefish View the latest post

No unread posts Past vs Present. Which one?

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pocoscon

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Sun Aug 31, 2014 2:04 pm

Zootower View the latest post

No unread posts Writing trans characters and other genders in dating games

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avocadro

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Thu Aug 28, 2014 11:41 am

Eight Rooks View the latest post

No unread posts The Curse of Unusual Yet Significant Names

Caveat Lector

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Wed Aug 20, 2014 12:39 pm

EndlessOcean View the latest post

No unread posts Super effective writing tips from Pixar

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ktalkimist

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Wed Aug 20, 2014 7:57 am

theSardonyx View the latest post

No unread posts Ellipses Use

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meiri

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Wed Aug 20, 2014 7:25 am

theSardonyx View the latest post

No unread posts Method Writing

Diamonit

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Sun Aug 17, 2014 3:16 pm

Diamonit View the latest post

No unread posts Polite Speech

konett

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Fri Aug 15, 2014 6:39 am

Applegate View the latest post

No unread posts Let's get rid of DEAD WORDS

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Snowflower

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Fri Aug 15, 2014 6:29 am

Applegate View the latest post

No unread posts Research help- Medical/Psychological advancement

Rossfellow

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Tue Aug 12, 2014 8:37 pm

sempersapiens View the latest post

No unread posts Critique on a short part of my story

Akarui_Tsubasa

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Tue Aug 12, 2014 11:46 am

Akarui_Tsubasa View the latest post

No unread posts Opinions needed about intro and references

Tsuyuri

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Tue Aug 12, 2014 8:13 am

cuttlefish View the latest post

No unread posts Please, critique my prologue

Chibi Subaru

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Mon Aug 11, 2014 5:26 am

Mad Harlequin View the latest post

No unread posts Would like a critique on scene

Sleipnir56

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Sun Aug 10, 2014 12:51 am

Sleipnir56 View the latest post

No unread posts Three writing tips you shoudn't listen to

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Taleweaver

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Sat Aug 09, 2014 12:49 pm

Mad Harlequin View the latest post

No unread posts The secret rules of adjective order

Taleweaver

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Fri Aug 08, 2014 2:30 pm

Mad Harlequin View the latest post

No unread posts In need of constructive criticism

Fenrir34

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Thu Aug 07, 2014 8:02 pm

Fenrir34 View the latest post

No unread posts Would love some critique

laiktail

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Wed Aug 06, 2014 8:45 pm

Mad Harlequin View the latest post

No unread posts Need Some Serious Writing Help Here! (How to show/not tell)

dmasterxd

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Tue Aug 05, 2014 2:29 am

Dread Lord View the latest post

No unread posts Honest Critiques Sought for Dialogue

Pox Tea

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Mon Aug 04, 2014 11:13 pm

Mad Harlequin View the latest post

No unread posts Need some constructive criticism

hydroninja9

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Mon Aug 04, 2014 12:05 am

Mad Harlequin View the latest post

No unread posts Pitfalls and what you've learnt about writing

laiktail

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Thu Jul 24, 2014 12:09 am

Mad Harlequin View the latest post

No unread posts Continouos information about the lore, or revelation at end?

NekoNutchi

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Wed Jul 23, 2014 8:45 pm

Chocopyro View the latest post

No unread posts Could I get some critique of part of my intro, please?

leCiel

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Wed Jul 23, 2014 6:51 pm

Mad Harlequin View the latest post

No unread posts Looking for constructive criticism on a short scene

sempersapiens

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Tue Jul 22, 2014 8:04 pm

Mad Harlequin View the latest post

No unread posts Honest Critiques, Please ( :

daijinahito

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Sun Jul 20, 2014 9:37 am

ArachneJericho View the latest post

No unread posts Bun's Oven [Critique Welcomed] [7/18]

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Hazel-Bun

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Sat Jul 19, 2014 12:07 am

Hazel-Bun View the latest post

No unread posts Naming a project?

lemonokashi

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Fri Jul 18, 2014 12:59 am

sempersapiens View the latest post

No unread posts Amount of realistic profanity in VNs

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aphosphene

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Wed Jul 16, 2014 1:39 pm

Le Hewitt View the latest post

No unread posts CmapTools - A Program for Branching Path Stories

Katy133

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Mon Jul 14, 2014 4:14 am

DerWanderer View the latest post

No unread posts title options

Jasper Beauclair

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Fri Jul 11, 2014 11:33 am

Ran08 View the latest post

No unread posts Favorite writing books?

ArachneJericho

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Thu Jul 10, 2014 3:42 pm

Mad Harlequin View the latest post

No unread posts Should the adverb rule apply to dialogues too?

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Gambit74

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Thu Jul 10, 2014 3:36 pm

SundownKid View the latest post

No unread posts A "Message"?

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Laniessa

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Sat Jul 05, 2014 10:32 am

SecretWeaponCoffee View the latest post

No unread posts In need of some feedback/tips

Gambit74

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Gambit74 View the latest post

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