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PostPosted: Sun Aug 14, 2011 3:27 am 
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...Struggling. To breathe. Laughing. Too much...

That, was excellent. Everything about it was absolutely perfect. There isn't really much else I could say. I laughed all the way through it and your were spot on with the funny bits.
GUI wonderful, writing wonderful, art wonderful (seriously, I love your style and you have improved since Lucky Rabbit Reflex.) I demand chapter 2.

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 14, 2011 5:06 am 
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 14, 2011 5:25 am 
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I love his usage of romantic imagery!

"... going to tear all the classmates apart to have you to myself..."
" ... a succulent leg of lamb...."
"...own personal brand of meow meow"

THIS IS HILARIOUS. DO PLEASE CONTINUE. :D

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 27, 2011 5:01 am 
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Oh. My. Lord.

That was BEAUTIFUL.

I mean, Twilight practically makes fun of itself, so bravo to you for making a hilarious little parody here.

My favorite recurring jokes included the heroine's reference to her "brown-hairedness" (which was turned into pretty much every part of speech I could recognize.) Also gems such as:
"I didn't follow."
"Angel: I don't follow."
GOD. KILL ME.

Please tell me Quilete is a pun on Quaaluds (anti-anxiety medication). Because that's ALL I could say when I read that. I kept thinking Jason (or Jordan) was from the Quaaluds tribe and it cracked me up immensely.

"I pondered on whether any of my other classmates knew how to read."

THANK YOU. <3 That was loooveely.


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PostPosted: Sat Aug 27, 2011 9:29 am 
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Thanks, guys! :D

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Please tell me Quilete is a pun on Quaaluds (anti-anxiety medication). Because that's ALL I could say when I read that. I kept thinking Jason (or Jordan) was from the Quaaluds tribe and it cracked me up immensely.

Quileute is actually the name of the tribe in the book (and in real life, I think) but I'm totally going to pretend that was intentional, hoho~ ;)

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 27, 2011 12:05 pm 
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chensterrain wrote:
Thanks, guys! :D

PrettySammy09 wrote:
Please tell me Quilete is a pun on Quaaluds (anti-anxiety medication). Because that's ALL I could say when I read that. I kept thinking Jason (or Jordan) was from the Quaaluds tribe and it cracked me up immensely.

Quileute is actually the name of the tribe in the book (and in real life, I think) but I'm totally going to pretend that was intentional, hoho~ ;)


Oh wow, shows how much I know about Twilight. (Read the first hundred pages and called it a day...) xD


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PostPosted: Sun Aug 28, 2011 7:19 pm 
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Pffffff XD Hahahahahaha! Tall glass of chocolate milk... xD this was hilarious. I watched the movies at least, so I was better able to appreciate this >:3 I can now say something good about Twilight! It makes for good parodies!


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PostPosted: Mon Aug 29, 2011 5:44 pm 
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I love you.
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 30, 2011 10:14 pm 
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This is delightfully awful, though it does lose some of the magic for being intentional. It's a wonderful piece, and I can't play it for long stretches without frequent breaks to laugh. My ribs curse you


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PostPosted: Tue Aug 30, 2011 11:55 pm 
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Dying. From stomach pain. Too... much... laughter... GAHAHAHA
This is awesome.


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PostPosted: Wed Aug 31, 2011 1:56 am 
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I died.

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 31, 2011 12:18 pm 
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Oh Lord. That was the funniest thing I have ever played. xD
CHAPTER 2! PLEASE!

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 31, 2011 5:14 pm 
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This made my evening. Bloody brilliant <3

Exceptionally well written, and the art and GUI is lovely.

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 01, 2011 5:02 pm 
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First- This is BRILL. I am not a fan of twilight, but a parody of a parody hell yes :D
Second- I like Jared.
Rhirs- Lucky Rabbit was great! I really liked Rhett

Thanks for making these awesome things, I'm in the process of making a game too, but text-based or rpg maker since I cannot draw
But these things inspire me to keep working!


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PostPosted: Sat Sep 03, 2011 5:04 pm 
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Um my computer doesn't allow me to download zip files, is there another way I can download this?


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