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When Liam and Jamie are outside the jewelry store and he says she looks like Gracie. The word fiancee has some funky little "n" in it.

I liked the characters..though I'm mad at Gracie for just leaving like that...And right as I started getting really into the story it ended ;-;

Gracie leaves.

Don't tell Liam though eh?

I liked Liam's personality. He only had a couple of lines in the whole thing but didn't feel completely flat because of it.

I agree with RemnantDream; Jamie is pretty selfish. In a way, that's a good thing, though! Characters have to have flaws, and to me it was an interesting idea that she tried to justify how her actions as being 'For Grace and Liam' whereas all she's really doing is setting everyone up for an extremely painful fall in order to avoid telling Liam about Grace. In the end, it felt to me her actions helped her more than they would help the other two! This kind of drama is the kind that very much benefits from complicated, imperfect characters so I'm looking forward to see where you take her next

On the other hand, Grace's didn't really make much sense. It just doesn't make much sense that someone would abandoned their childhood sweetheart so suddenly, without even trying to overcome the obstacle, etc. The only conclusion I could come to that was that maybe their relationship had become strained on Grace's side or something- but Grace had such a small role there was no real indication. Equally, Jamie jumped to a very extreme conclusion- "I'll pretend to be Grace"- very quickly; she didn't even wait to try and talk to her sister again, or give her time to calm down and see if she's coming back- though maybe that's a little bit of her selfishness coming through again... You could say her wish has come true, in a way?

I suppose I should have put how long the time lapse between scenes were so you all knew how long he'd been in hospital xD I suppose Grace knew about how much Jamie liked him and how long, so she felt like she'd always taken everything away from her sister since she was the "better" twin in the family. Grace probably felt like it was a chance for her to do something and perhaps she'd always been trying to find a way to make it up to Jamie and a long relationship can mean that sometimes the love wanes after a while - which was happening to Grace.
Jamie - I have to say she's my favourite character. She's selfish, but she tries to justify her actions by saying it's for her sister and Liam. It was fun making her up and I like how I had fun creating her really. However, she does blame herself and lot so she decides abruptly that in order to save Grace and Liam's relationship she has to pretend to be Grace since Liam loves her so much. And she's one of the traditional "if-the-one-I-love-is-happy-then-so-am-I" type of person.