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Whew, I finished!
A small VN with 7 endings to test out different features of Ren'Py xD
It was finished in about one week and barely has a real story behind it but I would be glad if someone takes the time to check it out! ^^
The Plot (or something like that)
This city I live in is colorful and dazzling. But it is also grey. So grey.
...
Almost as grey as the people who live there.
I do not whish to be one of them. Certainly not.
And that's why I will leave this place.

You can download it here

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Der Tod ist der seligste Traum.
So lass mich den Todesengel sein
-Georg Büchner

I love how customised and professional-looking everything is! Your artwork is really wonderful.

I've gotta admit... I've only played through once, but I didn't really have much of an idea as to what was actually going on...


The premise seems really interesting, though, so I'll definitely give it another shot. Well done!

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Thank you very much!^^

And about the actual story... I basically started writing out of the blue, so yeah xD

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Der Tod ist der seligste Traum.
So lass mich den Todesengel sein
-Georg Büchner

OMG _every_ _single_ _item_ is freakin' customized here.

Good job!

Played the German version. Short but beautiful. I got endings 6, 3, 1 in that order. Not sure if I'll go back for the other endings. Ending 6 was by far the most satisfying.

Minor quibble: the save/load screen is so that dark it's difficult to see the boundaries of the empty slots.

A really great game, I had fun playing it. The story was kind of deep also, which I liked. I got all endings except for 5. I got them in this order - 6, 1, 4, 2, 7, 3. My favorite must have been 1.

Fun little game - thanks! I got endings 6, 3, 4, 5, 2, 1. I also am impressed at how customised all the bits of the interface are: if it weren't for the contents (as opposed to the presentation) of the prefs and load/save screens, I wouldn't know it was a Ren'Py game at all. Very impressive. Interesting storyline too. It wasn't clear what choice would lead where, but for a short thing like this that doesn't really matter. Thanks for the game!

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In development (progress slow but ongoing):
Elven Relations 2: Mermaid Liaisons: Story 96% done, script 75% done, character art 95% done, event CGs 60% done, backgrounds 50% done, customisation 0% done; demo available

Played! Definitely an interesting game. It has something of an other worldy feel to it. I would have liked for more of it to be pieced together, but I still enjoyed it. I like the art and all the customization that went into this as well. Thank you for sharing. ^-^

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I played it yesterday (got three different endings) and really liked it :3 Short and lovely.
I loved the interface customization, and the title screen was awfully cute <3 Great music choice too!
Thanks for sharing

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Awesome.... I liked all of it... kinda reminds me of that little bunny tale in Chobits

As well as the city i used to live in

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This game is awesome ! And what for a coincidence that you are German, too, no XD?
Artwork, UI and Story are great, but when I got the endings of the "bad endings" this music was quite scary XD!

@ Tomoko: in WIRKLICHKEIT sind hier ALLE deutsch... wir tun nur so als wenn wir Amis wären damit unsere Welteroberungspläne nich so auffallen

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xDD Okay okay bei manchen steht das ja da und ihr hattet doch irgendwo hier ein Thema über die praktisch nicht existierende deutsche VN-Szene gemacht oder XD?

But I think we should go back to talking English XD I know how it feels like if you can't understand anything lol

Consider me another part of the "non-existant German-language visual novel community". It's a fact: if you want your games to be played by a larger audience, you have to create them in English. (Or Japanese...)

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Oh great, another one ! Hi ^_^
Someday there will be a German audience, I believe XD As you said it's quite an advantage being able to speak/write English. I can't count the times I borrowed Japanese learning books from the library without opening the first page lol.
How is it with Korean audience btw? I am South Korean so this could be interesting too.

But maybe we should discuss this somewhere else ^^" Sorry