Hm... Part Two... Maybe?
Now now, don't be such a tease :'D!
Tegami is Captain Slow, just like the author.
Tegami's utterly slow, a lot of my testers, and DarkSpartan commented about his slowness. XD At least he put the pieces together at the end.
I wanted the story to give focus on how the characters handle the situation instead of the big realization of the sickness. I don't think I highlighted that well though, ehe... ._.;; (How Sayaka handles it... Going from bitter and unaccepting to resolute about making the right decisions, Tegami just wanting to be there despite being Captain Slow
Actually, I did notice that change, it was very nice to see! I don't think you did it badly, but maybe make the focus a little more clear next time yes ^^.
I'm glad you liked the characters.
Thought Sayaka would end up turning off readers because she might be bratty and stuff... And the crazy parents.. O_O
Nah, I liked their personalities! They were all very interesting and it's not unrealistic for someone (especially teenagers) to be like that haha. Also, even though he was slow, I think Tegami was a kind and hard working guy - sooo cute :')!
Waah, I'm super elated that someone gets it a lot. :,)
Wanted to avoid the pitfalls of "sickness-drama" like in sad movies.
Thanks a lot for playing, and I'm glad to know you enjoyed.
Also glad I did okay for my first time XD