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PostPosted: Sun Apr 15, 2012 5:20 pm 
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SilverxBlue wrote:
I still can't get over their names when you first meet the guys. "Weird looking chicken"... "WTF"... "Puppy with Heat", seriously, I still find myself giggling when I remember it.
What?! How did I miss Gervase's?! >x< He's my absolute favorite.
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My God... Words cannot describe how much I love this VN. It was truly an awesome piece of work and I found myself liking all the characters. XD I totally started laughing out loud from the very beginning.

My favorite guy has got to be Gervase... His first interactions with Os and some of his lines were just made out of pure win.

Anyway, awesome job, really. That's all I can really say. :D
I completely and utterly agree with everything said in the above quote.
Seriously, Clua, you are my go to girl for brilliantly written, impossibly beutifull, totally hillarious, otome horror VNs. ^___^b

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 15, 2012 9:21 pm 
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I played through and got all of the endings!
I would have to say that Corvus and Gervase are my favorite XD Although I love the kiss CG with Corvus! I got kinda aggrivated when I couldn't get any happy endings, so I just used your walkthrough......Now I feel like a cheater.........But, anyway, I really love this! It's the best I've played in a while. EVen the bad endings were enjoyable. (Especially Vosges's)..............................Would you mind if I wrote a fanfiction for this?
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PostPosted: Sun Apr 15, 2012 9:41 pm 
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@clua: I love both child Os designs, don't make me choose omg. I think the eyeball necklace idea is great.

@cya: That gif is so ridiculously cute. Revolving eyes ftw

@moya:

Re: the poop vs shit issue. Personally, I think it's pretty realistic for people to alternate between curse words of different severity. Like, I personally use damn, shit, fuck, etc. pretty interchangeably. I debated with myself whether or not to change all his feces references to "poop", but then I liked the way "eat shit" sounded. It just felt right at that point because of the context. It was a moment where he was directly rejecting a proposition Os/Corvus was making. Shit feels more direct than poop, and helped get the point across with more impact, so that's what I went with. I agree that it does seem a little inconsistent though... will reread and discuss with clua when revising the script.

At some point, I considered replacing "poop" with "poopies" to up the cute/weird/ridiculous factor, you know, to complement the awesomely quirky feel that clua's art has, but then I decided the word would draw too much unnecessary attention to itself.

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 15, 2012 11:08 pm 
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Nastalgia's always good. xD also the new sketches look cool.

....WAH mini-corvus! he's adorable ;v;

XD He is so small I think I might change the textbox a little on that part, becase almost everyone will have an small sprite

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@clua: Yep! Go ahead and blog it. Unpolished as it is, it's yours now. XD When I said I'd work on it I meant I should start drawing. What you have right now is chicken scratch on a colour palette; I haven't actually done anything yet. Er. OTL
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(Lol Im totally drawing something for Tonight XD)

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Aaaanyway. I think the current sprite for Os is fine, though if I were to pitch in, I'd say you should add a necklace with a humongous eyeball to it and call it Os' first prize of war. ( ̄ー ̄)


wee Im posting it then!!
The eyeball necklace is a wonderful idea XD but at the point where that part starts she doesnt have any!(She will have!)
Also, her neck is fine hehe but just for a little while ;_;


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I hope you like it. I'm still pretty new to GIFs, but it was fun to do~

T-THIS!! ohh gosh ;____________________________;
the EYEBALLS! are moving ºqº!! and she looks so preety...also I like how you draw the legs for your chibis XDD
thank you so much!! Even if you are new to gifs(lol when I was new to gifs I couldnt do this kind of things!)
its very pretty!! Can I post it on my blog?(Sorry for always asking but I think It would be un polite to upload
drawings without permission orz)

SilverxBlue wrote:
My God... Words cannot describe how much I love this VN. It was truly an awesome piece of work and I found myself liking all the characters. XD I totally started laughing out loud from the very beginning.

I still can't get over their names when you first meet the guys. "Weird looking chicken"... "WTF"... "Puppy with Heat", seriously, I still find myself giggling when I remember it.


My favorite guy has got to be Gervase... His first interactions with Os and some of his lines were just made out of pure win, but the ending I liked the most was that of Lilja's.

Anyway, awesome job, really. That's all I can really say. :D


XD Why Lilja?
Its because of the fanservice right? :_; everybody is after his body!! haha Im joking of course! I enjoyed making Lilja! Im glad you liked his final also!

Thank you so much for playing!! Im very glad you enjoyed it ;D


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SilverxBlue wrote:
I still can't get over their names when you first meet the guys. "Weird looking chicken"... "WTF"... "Puppy with Heat", seriously, I still find myself giggling when I remember it.
What?! How did I miss Gervase's?! >x< He's my absolute favorite.
SilverxBlue wrote:
My God... Words cannot describe how much I love this VN. It was truly an awesome piece of work and I found myself liking all the characters. XD I totally started laughing out loud from the very beginning.

My favorite guy has got to be Gervase... His first interactions with Os and some of his lines were just made out of pure win.

Anyway, awesome job, really. That's all I can really say. :D
I completely and utterly agree with everything said in the above quote.
Seriously, Clua, you are my go to girl for brilliantly written, impossibly beutifull, totally hillarious, otome horror VNs. ^___^b

Thank you so much!! But also I think Anarchy should be prized haha I mean she didnt also edited the script killing my horrible grammar mistakes, she also added some parts to the story and dialogues, the script was greatly enhanced because of her.
And not even mention the prog! I was dying everyday a little because of that--orz

Teki10 wrote:
I played through and got all of the endings!
I would have to say that Corvus and Gervase are my favorite XD Although I love the kiss CG with Corvus! I got kinda aggrivated when I couldn't get any happy endings, so I just used your walkthrough......Now I feel like a cheater.........But, anyway, I really love this! It's the best I've played in a while. EVen the bad endings were enjoyable. (Especially Vosges's)..............................Would you mind if I wrote a fanfiction for this?
:D


ahahha well this sort of developer always search for faqs/cheats and such lol...Dont feel bad! I mean its not that we have all the time to do this kind of stuff! Also is totally understandable because some parts of the game were not clear enough to tell which route you were following...OMG fanfiction?? Yes you can! I would love to see that!
Thank you so much for playing!


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@clua: I love both child Os designs, don't make me choose omg. I think the eyeball necklace idea is great.

@cya: That gif is so ridiculously cute. Revolving eyes ftw

@moya:

Re: the poop vs shit issue. Personally, I think it's pretty realistic for people to alternate between curse words of different severity. Like, I personally use damn, shit, fuck, etc. pretty interchangeably. I debated with myself whether or not to change all his feces references to "poop", but then I liked the way "eat shit" sounded. It just felt right at that point because of the context. It was a moment where he was directly rejecting a proposition Os/Corvus was making. Shit feels more direct than poop, and helped get the point across with more impact, so that's what I went with. I agree that it does seem a little inconsistent though... will reread and discuss with clua when revising the script.

At some point, I considered replacing "poop" with "poopies" to up the cute/weird/ridiculous factor, you know, to complement the awesomely quirky feel that clua's art has, but then I decided the word would draw too much unnecessary attention to itself.


I though poop sounded cute! XD poopies sounds tooo cute lol maybe fitted to pup gervase
maybe I have a wrong idea for what the translation of poop is...in spanish i could say poop is "caca" and shit is "mierda"
caca sounds very offensive and not even cute lol, but poop sounds...nice(wow all this talk wtf)

ahaha...

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 15, 2012 11:32 pm 
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@clua Hahaha XD When I finish it I' ll link you to it. Can't say it'll be the best, but I'll try! :)


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PostPosted: Mon Apr 16, 2012 6:58 am 
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clua wrote:
I hope you like it. I'm still pretty new to GIFs, but it was fun to do~
T-THIS!! ohh gosh ;____________________________;
the EYEBALLS! are moving ºqº!! and she looks so preety...also I like how you draw the legs for your chibis XDD
thank you so much!! Even if you are new to gifs(lol when I was new to gifs I couldnt do this kind of things!)
its very pretty!! Can I post it on my blog?(Sorry for always asking but I think It would be un polite to upload
drawings without permission orz)


Sure, go for it ^_^ I was going to make all the eyeballs move, but then I decided to start off a bit smaller since I'm new to it. I was trying to figure out how to get her to look like she is breathing, but that was a bit hard too. I need to study up on it a bit more XD

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PostPosted: Fri Apr 20, 2012 8:57 pm 
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hi!! I'm new her... I really love that the knife of traitor

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 21, 2012 2:46 am 
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I loved this. So bizarre and cute. Love the coloring and the art in general.

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 21, 2012 10:16 am 
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Teki10 wrote:
@clua Hahaha XD When I finish it I' ll link you to it. Can't say it'll be the best, but I'll try! :)

I can't wait!! It will very special to me hehe

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I hope you like it. I'm still pretty new to GIFs, but it was fun to do~
T-THIS!! ohh gosh ;____________________________;
the EYEBALLS! are moving ºqº!! and she looks so preety...also I like how you draw the legs for your chibis XDD
thank you so much!! Even if you are new to gifs(lol when I was new to gifs I couldnt do this kind of things!)
its very pretty!! Can I post it on my blog?(Sorry for always asking but I think It would be un polite to upload
drawings without permission orz)


Sure, go for it ^_^ I was going to make all the eyeballs move, but then I decided to start off a bit smaller since I'm new to it. I was trying to figure out how to get her to look like she is breathing, but that was a bit hard too. I need to study up on it a bit more XD


Ahaha-that would be awesome!!
Maybe you would like to try flash also? since its more confortable to animate there. I was trying this
Its nice work animation there also(and exports swf)
By the way I upload it to my blog
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hi!! I'm new her...

Hello! Welcome to the forums XD
But maybe you would like to present yourself on this thread instead

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I loved this. So bizarre and cute. Love the coloring and the art in general.

Thank you so much for playing!! Im very glad you liked it!

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 21, 2012 1:14 pm 
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I`ve registered just to say I like this game very much. The story is intresting, the characters are simply adorable, all of them. Hmm… my favorite one is Gervase. He looks manly (such a rare phenomenon nowadays ಠ_ಠ) and he had his cute moments. And Os. She`s… she`s special.
The perverted puppy deserves more love! I saw no fanart with him :’( so I decided to change it.
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Well… I`m looking forward for your next game, clua.


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PostPosted: Sat Apr 21, 2012 9:19 pm 
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Merula O wrote:
I`ve registered just to say I like this game very much. The story is intresting, the characters are simply adorable, all of them. Hmm… my favorite one is Gervase. He looks manly (such a rare phenomenon nowadays ಠ_ಠ) and he had his cute moments. And Os. She`s… she`s special.
The perverted puppy deserves more love! I saw no fanart with him :’( so I decided to change it.
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Well… I`m looking forward for your next game, clua.


Ohh Im very glad you liked the game haha...Im still very surprised of how many people played it and liked it!
Im very flattered also that you register here to post it ;_;
ººººººqºººººº!! Your drawing is so cool! I like how they both look and also they are hugging XD
You added a ball and a wip lol that sounds like the type of discipline that Os would have on Gervase haha.
And I totally love the detail on his boots! Since I havent shown the lower part of his sprite, I like to see what
other people think that may look like ahaha

Thank you so much It made my day..You are very talented ;_;!!
Can I post it on my dev blog?Let me know if I can!

And I understand what you are trying to say with the guys...I agree even if my drawings are not the best example of it haha

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 22, 2012 5:28 am 
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Oh, thank you! Of course you can post it on your dev blog.


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PostPosted: Mon Apr 23, 2012 2:09 am 
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Can some help me get vosges good ending ever time play the game get he's bad ending.


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PostPosted: Mon Apr 23, 2012 9:48 pm 
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Merula O wrote:
Oh, thank you! Of course you can post it on your dev blog.

Thank you! :D

Cain0425 wrote:
Can some help me get vosges good ending ever time play the game get he's bad ending.


D: The walktrough I posted doesn't work?
let me quote it if you didn't find it
Vosges>Pat him>Tell that he is cute>Ask what would make him happy>Do NOT forgive Corvus>go to basement


Hope it works! If not, tell me!

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 24, 2012 10:07 am 
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I love this VN, very charming art and unique characters. I especially like Lilja's half-craziness xD

Corvus is freaking hot though


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