...I should have known this would not have been my kind of game. Sigh, oh well... Maybe it's because I'm an old, jaded, and cynical 21 year old.
To start with, I congratulate you on this game and it seems rather impressive. I don't hate it, not at all, but I do have two issues that I would like to bring up. I think it is wonderful you managed to complete this and I am quite happy for you despite not enjoying the game as much as I could have.The good parts first!
The chibi art is utterly ADORABLE. I honestly wished that I could have seen more of it.
The animations. THE ANIMATIONS. THESE ANIMATIONS. They are spectacular! The entire game is so wonderfully animated I love it!
The UI is adorable, simple, and I love the side portrait of Eimi. I am a sucker for side portrats. I like that the text box also looks like a piece of paper, nice touch given the love letter plot!
I'm not a fan of stock music usually, but the ones you chose I enjoyed.
The endings were really really sweet.Middle ground, I feel no strong way positively or negativelty.
I looked at your main site and it says this game is 20 minutes... it took me longer than that to read it though. Huh.
Normal sprite art, specially the gag stuff, isn't my cup of tea, but it's nice.
Eimi is... not... my kind of main character. Just not for me.The... not so good?
I was able to guess every twist from the get to. Maybe it was from all my younger years reading shoujo manga, maybe that was on purpose, maybe I should have expected it all, but that rubbed me the wrong way personally.
Typos... I... I'm sorry. I started screencapping typos as I fount them. By the time I got to 30 I gave up... This is my only major complaint they are everywhere hon... But, on the bright side, almost all of them seemed to be missing punctuation or capitalization, though there were a few tense issues and misspellings. They didn't make the game unreadable, simply distracting to me.
"Heroin", since that's an old typo I see often, is the one that caught my eye first.
And there is a glitch that reveals Henri's name before it is told to us.
The game isn't bad, I suppose, but it is certainly not in my tastes. I'm glad that others here could enjoy it more than I could.