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bakufu
 Post subject: Love Sniper
PostPosted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 9:42 am 
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This is the first Ren'py game I made.

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A comedy visual novel about a boy who tried to win his crush's heart.

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Playtime: 10 min
Possible Endings: 13
Ages: All
Language: Japanese

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 Post subject: Re: Love Sniper
PostPosted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 10:31 am 
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Congrats for your first post on lemma bakufu~~!
*This is bakufu from suisen that helped me a lot in testing the Japanese version of my game. Her games are sweet too ^^.

I haven't got all endings within the game. As far I still can't get other than bad ending lol.
But they're funny ^^.

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 Post subject: Re: Love Sniper
PostPosted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 11:15 am 
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From the look of the guy at the second screenshot, it does look funny.
Can't play it though. T_T
*curses inability to learn Japanese quickly*

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 Post subject: Re: Love Sniper
PostPosted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 1:43 pm 
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SilverxBlue wrote:
From the look of the guy at the second screenshot, it does look funny.
Can't play it though. T_T
*curses inability to learn Japanese quickly*


Unfortunately I have the same problem of not knowing enough Japanese to even attempt understanding a VN. The art style looks good though. Any plans for translating it into other languages?
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Chu-3
 Post subject: Re: Love Sniper
PostPosted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 2:11 pm 
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Hear it bakufu? LOL

Actually I'm talking with her now about translating her games. But we need a more specific plan for it. And I'll need a proofreader too, that can work fast. (since my english is really rough).

Hope that this works well so I'll be able to make collaboration with more circles, and provide the games to you. Of course on the contrary, I'm also thinking to translate English VN to Japanese. :D Please note that we're still discussing about it. :)

And for you who can understand Japanese, just feel free to try it! :D

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 Post subject: Re: Love Sniper
PostPosted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 11:01 pm 
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Yeah, if English isn't your first language, having a native speaker read it over for you would be a really good idea. ;)

On topic, I can't read that, but the art is cute and may play it regardless, just for that.

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 Post subject: Re: Love Sniper
PostPosted: Sat Jul 09, 2011 1:49 am 
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Okay then, I just mailed bakufu and we might translate the game soon~~. Thanks for all people that has already offered the proofread ^^; I never thought I would get so many proofread offers after posted about the translation plan.

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 Post subject: Re: Love Sniper
PostPosted: Sat Jul 09, 2011 9:45 am 
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My Japanese reading isn't up to level but I'm giving the game a go anyways.

Maybe it would be worthwhile to make a version without Kanji?

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 Post subject: Re: Love Sniper
PostPosted: Thu Jul 14, 2011 2:27 pm 
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The art looks lovely and fun!
(...I'm another one of the people who will have to wait for the english translation, though...^^)

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 Post subject: Re: Love Sniper
PostPosted: Thu Jul 14, 2011 3:20 pm 
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I just finished the translatiONNNNN deshi!!! *hand it to sakebento for proofreading
I hope you can understand it well though, my english is pretty bad. ><

Wakarimashi, wakarimashi ♪

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 Post subject: Re: Love Sniper
PostPosted: Thu Jul 14, 2011 5:08 pm 
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OOOooooh translation! Looking forward to it :)
Wishful thinking here, but it might be cool to have the other language in those Ren'Py clicky notes or whatever in the game so that it can be like a bilingual VN to help people with Japanese/English :)

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 Post subject: Re: Love Sniper
PostPosted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 12:35 am 
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@.@ I don't know if there's a way to do that.
I might advise her so but, can anyone tell me how to do it first?

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 Post subject: Re: Love Sniper
PostPosted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 2:09 am 
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lol at the title screen xD Awesome it was funny. :) But can't deny the fact that it has
an ecchi side Dx I mean, the girls' skirts were way too short I actually need to wonder why I can't see their panties or does this imply they don't wear any!? *sounds perverted, but I'm a girl so no, I'm not imagining the ecchi stuff*

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 Post subject: Re: Love Sniper
PostPosted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 2:40 am 
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This game looks interesting.
I'm looking forward to the translated version.
I wonder if Japanese school really allow super short skirt...

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 Post subject: Re: Love Sniper
PostPosted: Fri Jul 15, 2011 2:43 am 
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don't know they allow it or not but, I did see a lot of students there wear it lmao.
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have you get noriko or ageha end? at least at ageha end you'll see the girl in swimsuit. and for bl lover.... just get aoba end.... DESHI!

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