After my first VN project failed due to the lack of an artist, I decided to do something with a minimal approach and a very short length to at least finish one project before attempting something bigger.
The result is "The meadow"
It is a very short story about well what it is you may decide for yourself.
Because of the shortness I decided to include two languages, English of course and German my first language.
All distribution versions in one zip
I hope you enjoy it and I hope I didn't make some major blunder while translating the text to English.
[Short] The Meadow
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Re: [Short] The Meadow
Good for you ^^. Setbacks like that can be really tough to get through.
I played the game and I liked the way it was minimalistic. I did notice a few errors but not many. All in all it was a nice piece. If you come out with more I'll play those too.
I played the game and I liked the way it was minimalistic. I did notice a few errors but not many. All in all it was a nice piece. If you come out with more I'll play those too.
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Re: [Short] The Meadow
Minimalistic and clocking in at less than a minute of read time, I find this more suited to something like a deviantART post with a single image though you won't get that white fade transition. Another possibility is a video clip including a German narrator and Eng subs, etc., though that may take a little more effort.
The initial language selection sounds a little awkward. "Select one of the following languages:" might work be better.
The initial language selection sounds a little awkward. "Select one of the following languages:" might work be better.
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