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#1 Post by **sake-bento** » Mon Jan 28, 2008 5:50 pm

Hopefully this works. I tested the Windows version on two different machines, but a friend of mine said it didn't work for her, so erm...yeah. ^_^;;

This is a really short linear story that I did in the course of a week just so I could say I finished something. It's not impressive or groundbreaking, but hopefully you'll find it cute. ^_^;;

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Edit: RAA Mirror
Edit: Slovak Translation

Vatina · #2 Post by **Vatina** » Mon Jan 28, 2008 6:26 pm

I really like the character art in this short story

I was also very surprised when I realised that the girl was voiced. I think the voicing was done well ^^

But yeah, the story is really short... I felt it ended very abruptly. But it sounds like you most of all were trying to see what you could do, and if you could finish it, so that makes sense.

Nice ^^

Cybeat · #3 Post by **Cybeat** » Mon Jan 28, 2008 9:09 pm

Nice voice acting. I voice act too, but the quality's not too good. What did you use?

#4 Post by **sake-bento** » Mon Jan 28, 2008 9:32 pm

For recording voices (and sound effects) I use Audacity and a Logitech USB mic. Nothing fancy, but it gets the job done. I'm glad you liked her voice. ^-^ Now that I've done this, I'm really hoping to do something a lot better, but I didn't want to leap into creating something without a little bit of practice first.

DaFool · #5 Post by **DaFool** » Tue Jan 29, 2008 1:36 am

I enjoyed it, especially the writing. You have talent as a solo team. Now I just need to find me some headphones so I can listen to your voice and music properly...

Samu-kun · #6 Post by **Samu-kun** » Tue Jan 29, 2008 2:14 am

Wow, the voice acting in this work is phenominal. It's better than 90% of what I've heard in most commercial anime dubs. It's the first time I've ever felt like the English language just felt totally natural instead of forced like in alot of anime dubs. The character sprites of the girl was very cute too. ^_^ *gives thumbs up*

#7 Post by **sake-bento** » Tue Jan 29, 2008 9:39 pm

Ah, wow. I'm flattered that you enjoyed the voice work so much. Voice acting has been a hobby of mine for awhile, so I'm glad all the years of practice are helping. XD

mikey · #8 Post by **mikey** » Wed Jan 30, 2008 3:12 am

I haven't played this game yet, but if appropriate, may we mirror this at the Ren'Ai Archive? (http://www.renai.us)?
EDIT: Never mind, I read the general permission on your DA page

Alessio · #9 Post by **Alessio** » Wed Jan 30, 2008 4:14 am

Can't download...

The bandwidth or page view limit for this site has been exceeded and the page cannot be viewed at this time. Once the site is below the limit, it will once again begin serving as normal.

yummy · #10 Post by **yummy** » Wed Jan 30, 2008 5:25 am

That's a nice little story you made there. Your script is quite good and I particularly like the fact you voiced it. Somehow, she made me feel like a character you could find in contemporary-fantasy VNs, just like in Kanon or Air (that's why the story touched my Key fanboy zone). I think she's very cute *^ω^*

I think there are some character misplacement (why put her on the right side along all the script?) but oh well, that's not the most important part (or is it?).
As it's your first game, it's some kind of achievement, right?

I'm looking forward for your future games (if you plan to make some more)!

#11 Post by **sake-bento** » Wed Jan 30, 2008 8:45 pm

Alessio wrote:Can't download...
The bandwidth or page view limit for this site has been exceeded and the page cannot be viewed at this time. Once the site is below the limit, it will once again begin serving as normal.

Which version would you like? I'll put it on a file server like MegaUpload.

yummy, I put her on the side because I could. I don't think I really had a reason for that. ^_^;; And I'm currently planning out a much longer game with multiple storylines. I've got most of the scenario planned already as well as the character designs for the three lead girls. Once I get some test code running, I'll post it in the WIP forum.

Alessio · #12 Post by **Alessio** » Thu Jan 31, 2008 9:08 am

The Windows version, please.

#13 Post by **sake-bento** » Thu Jan 31, 2008 12:10 pm

Megaupload (Windows)

The Windows version is also available for download at my deviantART account.

mikey · #14 Post by **mikey** » Thu Jan 31, 2008 2:06 pm

All versions are now also available on the RAA:
http://www.renai.us/game/ripples.shtml

Mirielle · #15 Post by **Mirielle** » Fri Feb 01, 2008 9:13 am

Wow, that was a really lovely and cute story! Very pretty art and you're a very good voice actor as well! Your voice seems so familiar, but I just can't seem to place it...

Really well done on the voicing though, very natural and it really brought out her character! All in all, a really good VN!

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