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For this Christmas, I am here to present you with a short visual novel.

Name: EVE
Game Genre: Romance
Game Rating: PG-13( Animated Gore)

That's it for now. Enjoy, and have a Merry Christmas.

Edit2: EVE is now available in RAA. Thanks, Ren.
Edit: Latest version is EVE-1.0. Please re-download for those who have the older versions.

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「通りすがりのメーカだ。覚えとけ。」

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Winter shard

WIP: Hyperion(Trace unknown), ?????(Progressing)

I'm not gonna go into my usual evaluation rant, because I can sum up my feelings easily this time.

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My common sense is tingling!
Woah! I actually have a website now.

First of all, congratulations on your release.

Yesterday I couldn't fall asleep and found this new game, so it was really a nice surprise, I took it and played it.

And I do have a few problems with it, well, maybe just one, really. Often the CG graphics never use the top third of the screen, and sometimes the textbox effectively covers the people's mouth or other important features - which could be helped simply by enlarging the pictures.

That's just about it. I suppose beyond this, if someone has a problem with the game, it's probably because he has a problem with the whole spontaneous mini-vn concept, or indeed a "project in X days" approach.

Anyway, I played in one session, all paths, and when I got all of them and went through memories, I instinctively

So really, I had the perfect playthrough, and let's just say for the record it was 4:42 a.m when I finished the game, when...

It was brilliant, a nice story and a surprising effect on me personally, I absolutely enjoyed every minute, I just felt I was in the right mood and state of mind. Thank you, this one I will really remember.

Latest version, EVE-1.0 released. Please re-download for those who owned the older version.

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@Komitsuku


@mikey:

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WIP: Hyperion(Trace unknown), ?????(Progressing)

It was really great, I have to say ... and with added "unsettling points" (I forgot this before) given the fact that It's scary I tell you!!

Anyway, if that would really be a coincidence, I'd probably be creeped out. But this way, I just really enjoyed it, it was like someone has written it just for me.

Nicely done. I rather liked the ending, but I've always been a fan of the bittersweet end. Thank you.

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@mikey:


@sake-bento:

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「通りすがりのメーカだ。覚えとけ。」

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Winter shard

WIP: Hyperion(Trace unknown), ?????(Progressing)

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"It is not the critic who counts; not the man who points out how the strong man stumbles, or where the doer of deeds could have done them better. The credit belongs to the man who is actually in the arena, whose face in marred by dust and sweat and blood; who strives valiantly; who errs, who comes short again and again, because there is no effort without error and shortcoming" - Theodore Roosevelt

I liked it very much, just like Sake-Bento I love bitter-sweet endings, too :3
I was wondering, could we add this to the archives?

Thanks again for the experience, I hope you saw the sketch on irc!

I actually fully finished it last night and it made me realize I should not give a negative critique until I've played the whole thing ^^;...

@PyTom:


@Ren:


@Monele:

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WIP: Hyperion(Trace unknown), ?????(Progressing)

Just have to say... I really like this type of story with its bittersweet one true ending. At first, I hated how I seemed to keep getting nothing but bad ends. That is, until I realized that they were all actually bits and pieces of the whole story.

The main plot itself is quite simple, but not without it's little twists; and that's why it's perfect for a short game like this. I like the little bits of "game" that was put into this, making the player have to work a little for the true ending.

Nothing much more to be said, execpt my congratulations to the author (and his proofreader too... I guess ).

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How do you make your games? I see. Thank you for the prompt replies, but it is my considered opinion that you're doing it wrong inefficiently because I am a perfushenal professional. Do it my way this way and we can all ascend VN Nirvana together while allowing me to stroke my ego you will improve much faster. Also, please don't forget to thank me for this constructive critique or I will cry and bore you to death respond appropriately with a tl;dr rant discourse of epic adequately lengthy proportions. - Sarcasm Veiled in Euphemism: Secrets of Forum Civility by lordcloudx (Coming soon to an online ebook near you.)

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At first I was "wth? Merry Christmas?!?!" o_0;




Two of your mp3s are in 48kHz instead of 44,1kHz, causing aliasing artefacts!

@lordcloudx:


@mugenjohncel:


@Jo'ogn:

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WIP: Hyperion(Trace unknown), ?????(Progressing)