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Hi everyone, I managed to get pretty much everything done that I wanted to do with this game without going overboard. Hope you get something positive out of it should you feel like giving it a try. You can download it at this link:

Stars in Their Eyes



Summary:

“Rena has always been a “Jill of all trades;” dabbling in one thing and getting bored, then moving on to the next. Though she’s majoring in business, it’s only because she has no idea what else to do with her life. But on a day like any other, while on campus she spots a piano, and, remembering the days when she used to enjoy playing, decides to try it…”

It should work on Mac, PC, and Linux.

It’s a linear story, about 5 minutes long, not including the Bonus section. (which is unlockable after you play through the game the first time.)

I'd appreciate any constructive feedback you might have to give. Thanks for checking it out! I had a great time making it and I feel like I learned a lot.

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Stars in Their Eyes (Slice of life)(NaNoRenO '13)
Second-year college student Rena is an aimless "Jill of all trades" with no goals or dreams. At least, not until she happens upon a piano that revives a memory...

Extremely short (less than 5 min.), but I like it. Knowing myself, I will probably sort of "forget" this piece and its generic message (not a bad thing), but I'm keeping an archive of every VN I touch. I'd say it's a pretty decent memoir including its bonus commentary.


Good luck on your future projects!

Just played it and I must say, I really enjoyed it and found it to be inspiring. As a girl in college myself, I really like what Haele said.



Anyway, thank you for making such a sweet visual novel. It was short and simple, but I enjoyed it. It really brightened my day and made me smile ^.^

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My Ren'Py novels:
Operation: Magic Hero (WIP)
Eileen's Otome Love Story
NekoCon! (HIATUS) (Update: 12/27/2011)


But dear God, You're the only North Star I would follow this far
Owl City "Galaxies"

This is a short sweet visual novel. Simple message, but I like it.

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Aurora Incendium Productions| The Clown (NaNoReNo 2013) | Little Kitten (2013) | The Promise To Keep (2014/2015)

Thank you for your kind words, everyone! I'm really glad you all got something out of it. That's what I was aiming for most of all. Even if the message was simply presented, I know I would have gone overboard with it or frozen up if I'd tried to work on it any more within the NaNoRenO deadline. XD So it's going to sit and simmer before I pick it back up to flesh it out.

@Kokoro Hane--Thank you for telling me how it related to your situation. I appreciate your story, and I'm so glad the game inspired you.

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Stars in Their Eyes (Slice of life)(NaNoRenO '13)
Second-year college student Rena is an aimless "Jill of all trades" with no goals or dreams. At least, not until she happens upon a piano that revives a memory...

Awww, this was good. It was short and sweet, but it did get its message across. I can totally relate to her. I can do a bit of many things, but I can never really excel in one of them. *sigh* Although unlike the girl here, I have so many dreams that I have no idea which one to pursue! But this vn had been quite inspiring. Haele is right. ^_^ Thanks for this!

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Seasons of Love is another GxB fantasy in a typical highschool setting.
Summer Paradise is a short, slice of life story set in the Philippines.
Helping out on Frailty: Broken Wings.

Click me for randomness! You know you want to. <3

Thanks for this short ans inspiring story.
After a couple of phrases I thought on Ripples... to discover that it has inspired you!
Follow our dreams... Isn't it what we all are here for?

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KN Project: Fear&Love
Why can’t we simply express our feelings?
Why am I afraid to say ‘I love you’?

(Avatar made with Chibi Maker by ~gen8)

Just thought I'd let everyone know that I did a playthrough of this on my channel! It can be found here http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sNq-hYZG-nQ

I have to admit, this little VN really touched me, as it parallels with my own situation... The uh, not knowing what to do with my life part anyways, heh.
Anyways, it's inspiring, and it made my thoughts a little bit brighter. So, thanks for taking the time to make this.

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Just gonna strategically place this over here...
Quack!
/CRASH
/hobbles away