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PostPosted: Wed Aug 11, 2010 4:00 pm 
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That was awesome! However the ending was a little bit of a bummer. Hope you'll revise this game! Its a great!


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PostPosted: Mon Aug 16, 2010 1:15 pm 
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omg could u help me mak a vn.i love the way your sprite r draw.


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PostPosted: Sat Aug 21, 2010 8:17 pm 
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Short'n'Sweet!!!!!

I love it! And the different stories weren't so bad, but i think extending it into the prom night itself will give it more of a finished look. Right now it kinda of cuts you off before givin you the goodies 3^3


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PostPosted: Wed Aug 25, 2010 11:05 am 
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Awesome storyline, great art, but it was too short T_T. You probably forgot to make cgs (like a cg with arisa in her prom dress, ... etc) D=


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PostPosted: Sat Sep 04, 2010 11:36 am 
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Found a typo when talking to Keiji, it should be kouhai not kouhei.. Kouhei is a name. :3

Overall the game seems solid, but it feels more like a demo than a full game, like there should be more to it.
I also got a sand castle for an ending ._. I have no idea what that is supposed to mean.


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PostPosted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 6:12 am 
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ah, no, we did not forget to do some cgs. Since vohalica and i both absoulutely cannot draw, we could not give you cgs. Even though we both agree, that endings CG would give the game a much better feeling.

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 9:52 am 
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Arithra wrote:
ah, no, we did not forget to do some cgs. Since vohalica and i both absoulutely cannot draw, we could not give you cgs. Even though we both agree, that endings CG would give the game a much better feeling.


Then how did you draw the characters?


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PostPosted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 12:21 pm 
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Element: They used a base for the characters. Basically a paper doll. So no real art was done for the game :).

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 05, 2010 9:27 pm 
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sayuri wrote:
Element: They used a base for the characters. Basically a paper doll. So no real art was done for the game :).


i see... the storyline was great though. ^^


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PostPosted: Sat Dec 25, 2010 5:18 pm 
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Thank you so much for the game! ^^ I really enjoyed the dialogue and the plot though the endings sort of was too short since it cut off after the dude says yes. It would be nice to add the prom night itself, but that's okay. Anyways, thank you!


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PostPosted: Sun Dec 26, 2010 3:29 pm 
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Would have been great if you had an ending CG, but if you felt like you wouldn't be able to do it, that's fine.
Yuuto's ending made me laugh very hard, I'll give you that.
The dialogue overall was pretty good.

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 04, 2011 8:06 am 
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Ah, the story is interesting and really cute ^^

However, as other says, maybe some CGs would really help a lot, and music too. Well, if CG can't be done, it's alright though.

Hmm, about music, there's always a lot out there, and mostly can be find if you browse enough games around here.

And as clueless as I am, I can't seem to get to Yuuto's ending. orz

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 10, 2011 9:42 am 
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Most people would agree with me when I say you should make it longer. Yeah?

perhaps, you can create a sequel, or later generation with the same setting & longer?

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 18, 2011 12:52 pm 
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The art is nice...=D
The story should be more developed...><
Anyway I'll wait for your new work then..=)


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PostPosted: Thu Mar 03, 2011 5:08 am 
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I really enjoyed this myself! Aside from making it longer, my only real want for this was some music. I actually kept turning up my speakers because I thought it was missing, lol.

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