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PostPosted: Wed Jul 06, 2011 1:50 pm 
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by the way, would anyone be interested in proofreading or beta-testing for Snow White?

.....I know my mom will do it :lol: , but I would like about 3 proofreaders and 3 beta-testers, please!

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 06, 2011 1:56 pm 
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I can do either or both, whichever you prefer ^-^


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PostPosted: Wed Jul 06, 2011 2:52 pm 
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:? I've never done this before and I'm not good with computer stuff. But my friends say I'm good when it comes to criticizing things, so if you need an extra to test out your game and you don't mind me. Let me know. :) I wouldn't mind doing it.

Also I don't know what you would be expecting for me to analyze so I'd need to know what for? Like mood, tension, music, conversation, the works.

Sorry :oops: if I sounded too forward. My friends say I get pretty serious when I go into Critique mode. Eheh.

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 06, 2011 3:20 pm 
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haha, don't worry about it! Your not forward at all, :D

Sure, i'd love it if both of you guys were beta-testers!

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Ran is in the middle of her own otome game right now, Snow White!
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 06, 2011 3:39 pm 
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I can do both either ^^ I have some time now since I'm putting everything on hold for work experience and rest in between from little lively kids :3

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 07, 2011 7:03 pm 
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**This is just a reflection post that I kinda wanted to include... :lol: ....if your not interested in my pointless talk, sorry... >.<''**
Serena-chan's Baka Reflection's

This game has become gradually more darker than I intended...It was supposed to originally be a nonsensical shameless comedy...but recently, beginning the script....the beginning is pretty....ahh.......you'll find out.. :roll: Will that bother anyone? I mean, Living at the Bishie House is still comedy, but the beginning and the After Quests are a bit serious, not to mention the first two secret kiddos. And don't even get me started on my little "True" ending guy....he creeps me out a bit in a over- Yandere way...but i kind of like the Yandere boys in Otome~ Ummmmmm, hmmm, what else to chat about....? Oh yes! Future Otome Games that I plan to create:
If Snow White is generally liked by the masses, I have enough idea's for a smaller, maybe hour addition,
a Prequel with Ran (A MAJOR Character and Best Friend to Miki), because...well you'll DEFINITIVELY find out more about this VERY interesting chara~,
and a Super-Stardom Singing game (may be with or without Stat raising): let me just talk about this one for a bit. At first, I had this idea in around October last year, and I wanted to make it into a manga....But I can't draw backgrounds AT ALL, and my drawing ability was SORELY lacking around then (I was only initiated into the Wonderful World of Otaku-ism, 2 years ago in late May, when I overheard an Acquaintance who was an Otaku (Who is now one of my very good friends!), talk about Sailor Moon in last period. I decided to see said Sailor Moon, and I ABSOLUTELY L-O-V-E!!! the first season (subbed, even though dub-wise Usagi/Serena and I share a name!)! But I didn't officially start drawing anime art until School started, so yeah. Then, in December I got my first Otome Game- Yo-Jin-Bo- and loved it so much that I thought that I should make the idea into an otome game as well, after playing the AMAZING AS HECK Frozen Essence, and later, around March, Requiem of the Abyss, (Your my otome idol azureXtwilight-sama!). But i never got around to it- mostly because most of the songs i thought were awesome for the game were copywrited.... T.T

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Ran is in the middle of her own otome game right now, Snow White!
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 07, 2011 10:09 pm 
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Ehh? I was kinda hoping this was kinda be a happy happy otome game, but it's okay if one guy is yandere if it was portrayed that being yandere is a wrong thing :o

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 12:25 am 
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Oooh Yanderes~ You don't see them often in otome VNs~ This makes me look forward to the game even more!!! >:3 After what you said, I'm definitely going to go after the secret guys first >:D


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PostPosted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 1:45 am 
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I don't see what the problem with that. Yandere guys can be pretty funny. Especially cute :wink: when they blush hehe. Being it Snow White there's always gonna be a little dark, I think, even if you didn't intend to add it. Just sneaks up on you.
That's pretty funny same with me I played Frozen Essence first then Requiem of the Abyss, (you two authors like :lol: bishie harem idols for otome games, that and the silly Other Age games)
Sailor Moon is great, first anime that touched my heart made me realize different from a cartoon. I cried when Molly heart got broken for the first time, I felt silly :oops: at first. Then realized there was a lot of depth to it, and it opened my eyes to anime.

But off topic. Well hopefully this game goes well so your dream to make the other comes true too. :wink:

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 16, 2011 11:41 am 
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Okay, sorry everyone for the delay, but i've been at summer camp for the past week-buuuuuuuuuut, I have even more minor chara sprites!

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Ran is in the middle of her own otome game right now, Snow White!
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 16, 2011 4:10 pm 
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Summer Camp? Well hope it was lots of fun

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 19, 2011 6:50 pm 
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First off, I really LOVE your drawings. There is so much I could learn from you ._.
Second, FINALLY something a bit different. I mean, let's face it... We've seen lots of wonderland sequals these days, right?
So I'm really looking forth to this :D
Uhmyeah, that's all ^-^

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 19, 2011 8:51 pm 
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Updated Sprites

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Jewels are Expensive. But Friendship is Priceless.

I was going to take over this website but then I got distracted by Gakuen Alice.

Ran is in the middle of her own otome game right now, Snow White!
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 19, 2011 9:11 pm 
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+ScreenShots!

((yes, there will be a side image....just when I figure out how to do it, until then i'm just going to have no image till' then...))


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Jewels are Expensive. But Friendship is Priceless.

I was going to take over this website but then I got distracted by Gakuen Alice.

Ran is in the middle of her own otome game right now, Snow White!
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PostPosted: Wed Jul 20, 2011 12:53 am 
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I'm really looking foreward to this! It may be because of my love of Otome games and fairy tales....Hey, you should think of doing a Beauty and the Beast otome! ( One of my fav fairytales! Actually my fav is West of the Sun,North of the Moon but that would be sorta hard to make into a otome...)

If you need any help, I'll be glad too offer any assistance!

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