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Hi everyone. I'm working on this new project because theirs a delay in my other one but that doesn't mean the other one won't get finished :3 This is still in the mind process so I don't have all the characters figured out yet or things like that so please be patient with me thx

Storyline:
Syphethia is a young light elf about to reach maturity. She is a princess who lives in a small city that is thought of as the entire world and stays in her tiny little castle. Seeing as she is about to reach adulthood her reserved mother and demanding father want her to marry the noble Kita. This is a horrendous idea to her especially since is seems her 'fiance' is keeping many secrets. After being abandoned on the date she was forced to go on she locks herself in the library and finds herself in the forbidden section. Being a curious elf she ends up looking around finding books about other elves and creatures and she finds diaries. They are the diaries of the last light elves. Along with the strange books she finds a symbol on the wall. Strangely having the key to open this passageway she finds herself in the real world. Sadly it's no longer as beautiful as it was. She finds herself face to face with a disgusting, monstrous...elf?

Characters:

Syphethia
She is the main character and is a light elf. She is very kind and caring but can be misunderstood and when angered the person get quiet an explosion from her.

Kita:
He is a light elf and the princess's fiance. He is very strange and is always disappearing after receiving a mysterious phone call. He doesn't seem very nice and is incredible smug.

Korra:
He is a waiter at one of the light elf restaurants. He is very kind and social and seems to always be their when this princess is in a bind. His signature facial expression is his big cheesy smile

Darc:
He is a dark elf who is fierce and strong. He may sound rude through his voice and actions but he really is a caring person deep down. Not that he'll ever admit to it.

Dina:
She is the sister of Darc who is even more violent than her brother. She is flirtatious and has a fiery attitude but still love her brother dearly wether she shows it or not.

Fira:
He is a hotheaded fire elf. He is always full of energy and any little comment could set him off but he would never leave a friend behind or let them get hurt.

Tessen
He is a calm and calculating water elf. He is mature and tends to correct people which makes him seem smug and arraogant which was never his real intention. In actuality he is very caring just misunderstood for the way he shows it.


Thanks for reading. Please comment and tell me if ya like is and I'm open for suggestions about events and for about more characters. Oh and don't just silently stalk this like some people do! I like comments and I like to hear feedback. THX!

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http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?f=16&t=9425 - Celest in Wonderland

Wow this is Quite amusing!

Any thoughts to how long this story goes?




This part definitely is really making this Interesting to find out more!

I'm really not sure cause it's still in the stages of being created in my mind but this did start off as me writing a book so I got a little bit of an idea and it's not gonna be short that's for sure. Anyway again I'm open for ideas especially for more characters cause I want more obtainable guys

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http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?f=16&t=9425 - Celest in Wonderland

Hmm, promising to spin off another creative to another~
well for characters you could have one of another type of elf, or a "out there" -->(my definition:Strange supernatural)

Heyya! So, first of all, I think that the story is interesting indeed. Too bad though that Celest In Wonderland is in delay. I'll be very patient though! Anyway, if you need any help, I'd be willing to do. I guess I could do art or some writing or else. It's up to you and if you're curious of my art style, try visiting the link in my signature. I'm just a beginner in drawing and I might be slow since exams are near and I'm only available during weekends but I'll try my best to give you a helping hand if you need one.

Wish you the best with your VNs! I'll definitely play this

Mmm~ I like this story's mystery appeal~ :3
Can't wait for the character art!
Btw, don't you mean Discoveries instead of Discoverys?

Yea I don't get enough sleep. Sorry bout my careless mistake there -_-
And thx everyone

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http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?f=16&t=9425 - Celest in Wonderland

Who thinks the artist of the amazing piece of art-
http://kawaiixtenshi.deviantart.com/#/d3pwzgv
should be the artist of this VN?

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http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?f=16&t=9425 - Celest in Wonderland

That Would be Super Cute and Cool~

lol yea but she hasnt agreed yet. She's interested but is still thinkin about it.

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http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?f=16&t=9425 - Celest in Wonderland

well better than nothing It might lead to another good fortune XD

I've officially got me an artist! Woo! And so far Syphethia the main character is lookin awesome!

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Hey here's syphethia sketched and inked

Tell me what ya think and if anyones interested in coloring it I would be oh so grateful!

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http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewtopic.php?f=16&t=9425 - Celest in Wonderland

S-she's gorgeous... O///O (But the right hand looks kind of... twisted?)

@ snow blossom
The hair is supposed to go under the index over the middle and index and under the pinky finger. Do you think showing the tips of the middle and ring finger would make I look less twisted? Maybe if hair lines were shown through the fingers. The more I look at it the harder is for me to figuore out a solution.