ON-HOLD: Nameless Hero
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ON-HOLD: Nameless Hero
I'm still new in this gaming making (visual novel style) so please be kind to me and correct me. This will change from time to time.
Btw I'll apologize first for my bad grammar.
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ SCENE: In the year 2999, the war between humankind never stop. The people of EARTH has joined forces and stay as one united. Now, they are fighting with the rebellions, by the name SILVER, who made their MARS as they home base. They said the government of EARTH are liars and never care for their needs, especially the homeless and poor. ORIGIN denies, with the people who still stay in EARTH living peacefully as proof. However, SILVER had gathered their strength and now is ready for a fight to the end. ORIGIN must form their formations to protect EARTH and prepare for the greatest world in history.
STORYLINE: Neo joined ORIGIN as he had the potential to become a soldier. Not a demanding person, he keeps himself out from the spotlight and enjoys his life as a soldier and a growing man. But soon, ORIGIN discovered that SILVER has gathered their strongest allies, and now preparing for a war. He must now be serious. But he is just a normal soldier, a piece of pawns in the chess. Yet, there is Adam, the Hero, along with Minori, the mysterious girl from nowhere, and they are the hope of others.
What can Neo do to stop this war?
CHARACTERS:
Male MC (you are able to change his name and personality through out the game)
NEO STAGFIELD(default)
Nickname: Neo
Age: 21
Appearance: Black-brown hair (maybe), light brown skin, slightly muscular, and is fast with his hands.
Info: A normal life, an average IQ, normal grades, a normal soldier. Neo knows that he doesn't have the ability of a great soldier, but the idea of helping others surpass everything. You can change his way of thinking, and actions. Experience the adventure from his view.
Female MC(you are able to change his name and personality through out the game)
ELLISA STAGFIELD(default)
Appearance: Black-brown hair, light brown skin, has a body shape, and fast with her hands.
She is basically almost the same as Neo
Major characters:
TIANA ROSBELL
Nickname: Tiana
Age: 21
Appearance: Possess beautiful dark-red hair always leaning on her shoulder, with deep brown eyes. She takes care of her appearances every time.
Info: A beautiful woman who joined the force to follow her two close. She is pessimistic and usually get caught in the middle, even in the battlefield, and unfortunately, at time of panics, she always makes decision without thinking. She is a knowledgeable about ancient literature and arts, and a suitable person to ask for advice.
LEONARDO DARKMIST
Nickname: Leo, but mostly Leon.
Appearance: His cool looks make the others wants to get close to him, and he is naturally born with blond hair and light, blue eyes. He always have a smirk or a grin on his face, and rarely seen serious.
Info: A man who is seemed focus and out-going, also the best friend of Neo. He is the rope of their friendship, however, he hid a past from those around him. He is much darker than anyone thinks. He possess countless amount of acquaintance, but he shares most of his time with his two closest friends. He likes the idea of others thinking Neo and him are nonidentical twins, but he somewhat dislikes his own name.
FEATURES: -You will be able to choose your gender of choice, naming and determining the personality of your character.
-Branch-decision-path game. You choice of decision determines how the story goes on.
-Date with the character you like! While having those serious mode all the time, you can pick up with whoever you like to spend time with.
-(Most probably) Have different 8 endings. Do you think you can get it all?
-This game is 800x600. It will save up some of your space.
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This is a bit, idunno, an early illustration I made.
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Screenshots of the progress of the game.
Btw I'll apologize first for my bad grammar.
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ SCENE: In the year 2999, the war between humankind never stop. The people of EARTH has joined forces and stay as one united. Now, they are fighting with the rebellions, by the name SILVER, who made their MARS as they home base. They said the government of EARTH are liars and never care for their needs, especially the homeless and poor. ORIGIN denies, with the people who still stay in EARTH living peacefully as proof. However, SILVER had gathered their strength and now is ready for a fight to the end. ORIGIN must form their formations to protect EARTH and prepare for the greatest world in history.
STORYLINE: Neo joined ORIGIN as he had the potential to become a soldier. Not a demanding person, he keeps himself out from the spotlight and enjoys his life as a soldier and a growing man. But soon, ORIGIN discovered that SILVER has gathered their strongest allies, and now preparing for a war. He must now be serious. But he is just a normal soldier, a piece of pawns in the chess. Yet, there is Adam, the Hero, along with Minori, the mysterious girl from nowhere, and they are the hope of others.
What can Neo do to stop this war?
CHARACTERS:
Male MC (you are able to change his name and personality through out the game)
NEO STAGFIELD(default)
Nickname: Neo
Age: 21
Appearance: Black-brown hair (maybe), light brown skin, slightly muscular, and is fast with his hands.
Info: A normal life, an average IQ, normal grades, a normal soldier. Neo knows that he doesn't have the ability of a great soldier, but the idea of helping others surpass everything. You can change his way of thinking, and actions. Experience the adventure from his view.
Female MC(you are able to change his name and personality through out the game)
ELLISA STAGFIELD(default)
Appearance: Black-brown hair, light brown skin, has a body shape, and fast with her hands.
She is basically almost the same as Neo
Major characters:
TIANA ROSBELL
Nickname: Tiana
Age: 21
Appearance: Possess beautiful dark-red hair always leaning on her shoulder, with deep brown eyes. She takes care of her appearances every time.
Info: A beautiful woman who joined the force to follow her two close. She is pessimistic and usually get caught in the middle, even in the battlefield, and unfortunately, at time of panics, she always makes decision without thinking. She is a knowledgeable about ancient literature and arts, and a suitable person to ask for advice.
LEONARDO DARKMIST
Nickname: Leo, but mostly Leon.
Appearance: His cool looks make the others wants to get close to him, and he is naturally born with blond hair and light, blue eyes. He always have a smirk or a grin on his face, and rarely seen serious.
Info: A man who is seemed focus and out-going, also the best friend of Neo. He is the rope of their friendship, however, he hid a past from those around him. He is much darker than anyone thinks. He possess countless amount of acquaintance, but he shares most of his time with his two closest friends. He likes the idea of others thinking Neo and him are nonidentical twins, but he somewhat dislikes his own name.
FEATURES: -You will be able to choose your gender of choice, naming and determining the personality of your character.
-Branch-decision-path game. You choice of decision determines how the story goes on.
-Date with the character you like! While having those serious mode all the time, you can pick up with whoever you like to spend time with.
-(Most probably) Have different 8 endings. Do you think you can get it all?
-This game is 800x600. It will save up some of your space.
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This is a bit, idunno, an early illustration I made.
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Screenshots of the progress of the game.
Last edited by TsukiShima on Fri Oct 14, 2011 7:27 am, edited 10 times in total.
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Re: On-Going Project: Nameless Hero
Awesome.
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That's all I can say. C:
Good luck in this!
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That's all I can say. C:
Good luck in this!
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^Thank you, a little of support is all I need~
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Re: On-Going Project: Nameless Hero
I can't help but notice that the words "EARTH", "SILVER", "MARS" and "ORIGIN" are all-caps. Is it to give emphasis, or is it the acronym of the name of their organization? :3
Anyway, it looks like an interesting project so I'll be watching this. ^^
Anyway, it looks like an interesting project so I'll be watching this. ^^
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^Ah yes, it's actually the name of the organizations. I'm planning on changing the name EARTH and MARS, but I have no idea right now.
Oh, btw thank you!
Oh, btw thank you!
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-bumps again-
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Re: On-Going Project: Nameless Hero
The story sounds great ! Hope you get the help you need with it
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@Take, thank you! I already got a few, but I'm doing all I can.
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Re: On-Going Project: Nameless Hero
With a name like "Darkmist" I fully expect some hot Leo plot twist action.
Will Neo have a personality? Or will he just be "average" in about every way? The title of the game also implies some genericness, but I wonder just how ... wrong that is? He's got a name and history, so he has to be interesting in some way. For instance, his last line in his bio could conflict with his inferiority complex later when he *has* to become a better soldier to help people. I just hope he's not all emo all the time like Shinji from Evangelion. That was painful to watch. xD
Will Neo have a personality? Or will he just be "average" in about every way? The title of the game also implies some genericness, but I wonder just how ... wrong that is? He's got a name and history, so he has to be interesting in some way. For instance, his last line in his bio could conflict with his inferiority complex later when he *has* to become a better soldier to help people. I just hope he's not all emo all the time like Shinji from Evangelion. That was painful to watch. xD
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Oh wow, thank you, I hope my design of Leo later on won't destroy your imagination of him right now.
I'm not so sure of how I can describe Neo right now, he is the type of guy, 'when you first look at him, you won't see anything special in him.' But I can say that his average everyday life is the one leading him towards his inner conflict, as because his heart knows he is made for something bigger.
But yeah, he still can craved a smile, lol.
I'm not so sure of how I can describe Neo right now, he is the type of guy, 'when you first look at him, you won't see anything special in him.' But I can say that his average everyday life is the one leading him towards his inner conflict, as because his heart knows he is made for something bigger.
But yeah, he still can craved a smile, lol.
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Could be a fun little thing. Looking forward to seeing it come together.
I'm going to get off my soap-box now, and let you get back to your day.
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Re: On-Going Project: Nameless Hero -Opinion please-
Might be making some changes, adding a female MC, and some more important characters.
I'm not very sure about the name of the Female MC should be;
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I'm not very sure about the name of the Female MC should be;
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Re: On-Going Project: Nameless Hero -Opinion please-
since the title is about a nameless hero, maybe it will be better if the guy is facing backwards? So all we can see is his back? maybe he look back a bit so we can see his face a little o:
just a suggestion ^^
Regarding the names, all of them sounds good ^^
Edit: like this pic probably http://images.wikia.com/saintseiya/imag ... ixIkki.jpg
but I prefer if his hair is covering his eyes
just a suggestion ^^
Regarding the names, all of them sounds good ^^
Edit: like this pic probably http://images.wikia.com/saintseiya/imag ... ixIkki.jpg
but I prefer if his hair is covering his eyes
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Re: On-Going Project: Nameless Hero -Opinion please-
Thank you for the suggestion! I definitely keep that in mind for the bg image later on. I'm also thinking if they'll only see his eyes.HikkiPanda wrote:since the title is about a nameless hero, maybe it will be better if the guy is facing backwards? So all we can see is his back? maybe he look back a bit so we can see his face a little o:
just a suggestion ^^
Regarding the names, all of them sounds good ^^
Edit: like this pic probably http://images.wikia.com/saintseiya/imag ... ixIkki.jpg
but I prefer if his hair is covering his eyes
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Since my style changed now, I'm trying to redo things again.
Also, you can use this sprite if you want. But please, if it use, credit me, and if possible, inform me, I would like to take a look too. (I doubt it though)
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