natsumachi wrote:I finally got around to playing the demo.
The graphics and chapter title look very nice. And the star at the end of sentences is a cute touch.
A few points:
-the menu sound effect was far too loud, and kind of irritating.
-the style of the backgrounds kind of clashed with the drawn graphics.
Also, in regards to grammar and spelling, have you tried finding a beta-reader with strong English skills in the recruitment section? I highly recommend it.
I'm not sure what is going on but the end of chapter 1 was scary/creepy ;~; good job.
![Very Happy :D](./images/smilies/icon_biggrin.gif)
!! Thank you so much for playing! I saw many downloads(without the ones that my friends did)
and I was worried because nobody gave feedback...I guess its because christmas time and everybody is busy
About what you point
- D:! Everything on my pc sounds so low...I didnt realize that it was so loud..I think I saw a code to low the volume of music
I will give it a try
-:__; Im sorry! I can do bgs But Im the procrastinator artist type...Bgs takes me a lot of time to draw and I enjoy more to do characters...I dont want an excuse to abandon this proyect..So thats why Im using photos with some loosy efect of photoshop
I will research a little about how can I make more cooler bgs(I saw some cool resources but I didnt want them to look japanese..Even if in the visual you dont even know where does events takes place)
-I will totally give the script to someone to check it out...But I want to have all the script written first..I think It would be more fast....I think!
Thank you a lot for the feedback! I want an eerie feel on the visual haha but dont get me wrong I dont want you to be scary(sorry for the
shout D:)
Also:
Demo(Till chap 03)
note:lower the volume a little..Gotta check sounds!