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PostPosted: Thu Dec 22, 2011 10:50 am 
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0.3 Second Lunch

(the logo has yet to be made)


...I'm a demon slayer
and she's the demon...
Though I know I must kill her...
why my heart's wavering?


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Progress:
sprite: 85% (since the side characters are not that important, I decided on using just the 2 main charas, so it's already done, but not yet with the expressions)
CG : 0%
BG : 100% (from all the free resources)
GUI design : ...5%?
music : 0%
script : 8%
coding: ...0.1% (it crash wonderfully!)

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original story and art: Tobina Touya
artist: JAM
script: JAM
proofreader: Mink
coding: (hopefully JAM... Q^Q)

Okay I'll start with: I'm not officially affiliated and I don't claim ownership over the characters and such.
This is a fanfic of a short one shot story with the same name, 0.3 Second Lunch. And this post is still not good, I'll change Kotowari's hair and skin color, or should I say I'll change everything in here after I can work again (or go out from hospital). And I have to say this beforehand: the grammar errors and typos are still not corrected for now.

I started trying this thing before I got admitted to the hospital just to test my skill on making script and drawing sprite and CG and hopefully, programming (I still don't know if I can program this. Even with ren'py I keep on making errors every 100 words or something and usually ends with crash... TAT)

Ah~ and the story will be no different from the original one, so I hope you won't be disappointed. (Though maybe I'll change somethings, or, well, make an alternate story?)

I hope you all will like it ^_^

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 22, 2011 12:27 pm 
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OOOHH I've read that manga before!! It was quite cute, but I never expected anyone to do a game on it! I already like the story, and your art is quite pretty.
But wait, does that mean that the game will also end with Kotowari's death? :cry:

Either way, good luck, both to your game and to your recovery!


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PostPosted: Thu Dec 22, 2011 2:01 pm 
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thanks for the feedback <3
Well, it's just so sudden. I just wanted to practice a bit with ren'py and making sprites and get the hang of making a game. I was so confused what story I should use since I can't make a short story, and once I read that manga I just have this urge to make a fan-fic.

Urrr... I don't know though if I'll make an alternate ending or not... I still somehow want them to be one and alive... maybe I'll make it... maybe...


thankies~ snowie~

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 22, 2011 2:13 pm 
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Uh wahhhhhhh Jam, *glomps* you made WIP thread!!! *Dancing*
I'll be your stalker!!! Count every single day waiting for your game!! xDDDD
My eyes are sparkling heart shape looking at Kotowari that you've drawn *A* Waaahhh I want him! Too bad I can't *sob* T_T

Gud a tonnnnnnn of luck there <33 Always support you~

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 22, 2011 2:27 pm 
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Rinnnn-chaaaann<333
thankies darlingg~ It should not takes much time I hope since I mean it to be a KN... or if I get some inspiration then it could be a VN... but still, a short, short one. But I still need to fight my illness first!! >=C

ahhh~ Koto-kun~ I'm gonna fix you somehow...

I'm waiting for yours with much MUCH more excitement, Rin-chan~~!! XD

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 22, 2011 7:08 pm 
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You know we're all rooting for you, JAM~ Kick that illness in the face >:C

I've never read nor heard of this story before, so I guess I'll be heading into this with no prior knowledge :mrgreen: (Unless I cheat and google the spoilers but.....that's no fun xD)

I think the sprites look amazing as they are :shock: You've done a fantastic job, JAM :D I really like the little background you've used to set up the sprites and descriptions here as well, it looks really cool :lol:

Wishing you the best of health and luck to complete this~ ><

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PostPosted: Thu Dec 22, 2011 8:11 pm 
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My web searches for "0.3 second lunch" seem to result in unrelated webpages. I also searched for "30 second lunch" and "kotowari rita," but couldn't find anything which sounded like a story or a comic. And even after searching Mangaupdates for a series with "lunch" in the title, I still couldn't figure out what you're referring to. Is the original story or comic available online?


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PostPosted: Fri Dec 23, 2011 12:37 am 
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This looks interesting! :)
GOODLUCK! :DDDDD
And screw that illness we have the power of awesomeness

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 23, 2011 12:40 am 
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gekiganwing wrote:
My web searches for "0.3 second lunch" seem to result in unrelated webpages. I also searched for "30 second lunch" and "kotowari rita," but couldn't find anything which sounded like a story or a comic. And even after searching Mangaupdates for a series with "lunch" in the title, I still couldn't figure out what you're referring to. Is the original story or comic available online?

It's actually a short one-shot in the manga Sarashi Asobi.

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 23, 2011 12:58 am 
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@Tag-: thankiess so muchhh <333 I need to level up first before defeating the boss called illness...
And about the manga: it's Sarashi Asobi. This one is just the one-shot story added in the main story, but I felt so sad that I wanted to make an alternate story Q^Q Please don't read the one-shot... it'd be no fun if you have read that one first...
~thankies for the complimenting~ but... I still want to recolor some parts... me and my perfectionist habit...

@gekiganwing: already answered by Mink-chaaann~ (ho ho ho ho)

@Lumen: thanksss Lumen-chan<3
screw this illness!!! YESSSS!!! XD

Anyway, gut luck to all of us! \^w^/

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 23, 2011 11:18 pm 
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This seems very interesting Jam. I'm looking forward to your project. The sprites are so pretty.

On another note, I checked manga-updates and saw what may be a related manga.

So Kotowori dies in the short story and his sister takes over as the heiress to the clan? That's so sad :( Please give him a happier ending Jam, even if it's just your story!


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Hey, I've read this! Can't wait to see your game adaptation.

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 23, 2011 11:41 pm 
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@Aileo:
I was so sad too after reading the manga. Well, maybe I'll make a branching story after all. I hope it'd meet your expectation <3


@9:19: right, right? The manga is good <3 and short (I can't make short stories... TAT)

Thanks for the feedback! Now I'm sure I want to make this a VN XD

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PostPosted: Thu May 10, 2012 11:54 am 
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EEEEKKK THIS LOOK SOOO AMAZING I WANNA PLAY IT!!!!! XD :D


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PostPosted: Tue Sep 18, 2012 5:53 pm 
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it's amazing,i like it and you had me at "demon slayer" *thumbs up* :D :D :D are you still working on this?cause i've been stalking this thread a while now,but never got a chance to ask about the game until the power of the force made me create an account

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