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PostPosted: Thu Jun 21, 2012 10:35 am 
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Michelle Vinson AKA Mike and her travelling companion with many personalities, Gerald are a pair of supernatural detectives and self-proclaimed demon hunter who are traveling together to capture demons of the seven sins into a box that Mike holds. This time, they involved themselves into another case of missing people, but this time, random people are missing. Old and young, from all over the town. Meanwhile, a young cop named Ethan Yang is assigned to "babysit" a young genius detective named River Coan who is intrigued to solve the case. When both sides are trying to find the missing link between them, someone who claims to know about Michelle's box of demons suddenly show up... and Gerald is suddenly one of the suspects! What's going to happen next? Play and find out! :D


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Gerald (???)


Gerald is the main Point of View in the current episode, an amnesiac boy with three different personalities. This time, Gerald found a clue to his past. When a person who claims to know the truth appears, will he finally remembers everything?

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Michelle Vinson/Mike (16)

Mike is a girl who was tricked into trading her life and family for telekinesis power by the demon Sloth. She is now trying to get her life back. Brash and courageous, Mike sometimes gets herself in trouble. Still, she is a very dependable person. Even though it might not be related to a demon, Mike is interested to the current case. Can Mike prove that Gerald's not the culprit, or will she find out that he is actually the mastermind behind this?

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Officer Ethan Yang (32)

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A young police officer with two kids, and that's probably why he is assigned to take care of River. Ethan is cynical and sarcastic, and will only act nice towards his family member. Despite all that, he wants to get out from his boring routine. Will he finally be able to find the real culprit?

River Coan (11)

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A young, polite, mature-for-his-age detective who managed to solve several hard cases in the past few months. River is smart and coordinated, and he seems to enjoy being with Ethan's family. He strongly believes that Gerald is the culprit, and is Mike's rival in solving the case.

Harvey Dunn (?)

River's bodyguard. He's a big burly man who doesn't talk much and people doesn't realize that he's there where he's around. Even so, no one realizes when he's gone either.

Lakisha Kirchoff (19)

A Young girl whose best friend dissapeared at university Y when they are together and found her dead body in the bathroom later. She's one of the suspects for the case.

Hugh Tozier (45)

A cleaning service at university Y, he seems to be mute. A suspect for the case.

Radbert (??)

A strange man who claims to know about the box. What's his intention?


GOAL:
- 20.000+ words
- Multiple endings
- Play as both Gerald and Ethan
- More sprites?
- More Backstory
- CG and Music Gallery


I hope that the male POV doesn't put you off for now, it's just I guess you probably were thinking what Gerald was thinking when he has to face Mike because of his rather calm and doesn't talk really much. But believe me, guy's got a lot of things going on in his mind. I want to show what he's doing when he switch personalities as wellXD

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 22, 2012 11:38 pm 
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Yay Gerald pov! :) I know who the demon of this story is hurr hurr hurr >D

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 23, 2012 7:27 pm 
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Ah.... A fantastically made episodic VN will just make me more and more eager to read more. I can't wait to see the story from Gerald's point of view


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PostPosted: Sun Jun 24, 2012 5:02 am 
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It's nice to have an episode with Gerald's POV. I think it will either give us more information about Gerald and his personalities or totally confuse us. :D Let's hope for the first one. Haha...

Since the title contains "acid rain" in it, I guess it's Wrath's doing this time? ^^ At least it would make sense.

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PostPosted: Sun Jun 24, 2012 9:32 am 
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It's nice to have an episode with Gerald's POV. I think it will either give us more information about Gerald and his personalities or totally confuse us. :D Let's hope for the first one. Haha...

Since the title contains "acid rain" in it, I guess it's Wrath's doing this time? ^^ At least it would make sense.


Information might be more XD But since he doesn't know about the other personalities it also may also be confusing.

Probably? XD


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PostPosted: Sat Jun 30, 2012 1:59 am 
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I hope my prediction will be right! >:3.
I still think it's Envy, haha xD


Anyways, good luck on the 3rd episode !
Ohhh. Mike's growing out her hair & becoming more girly ~ 8D .

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 15, 2012 6:19 am 
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Oh right, does anyone want to contribute proofreading for this? As the script has reached 17.000 it would be nice if I start recruiting proofreaders now. If everything goes with the plan, script will be done in two weeks and so. I plan to have more word count XD

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 19, 2012 1:58 am 
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