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Re: [WIP] Living Fairytale [Fantasy]

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Re: [WIP] Living Fairytale [Fantasy]

#3 Post by miaverana »

Interesting plot (and the protagonist has the same name with me ^w^). The art looks nice. I like your coloring style. But the main menu is too simple and kinda... boring ^^" (no offense). Why don't you take some time to make a logo and draw a picture for the main menu? :3

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Re: [WIP] Living Fairytale [Fantasy]

#4 Post by FatUnicornGames »

I full-heartedly agree with the comments made by Mia. The character art is lovely. Maybe hook up with someone who is good with graphic design to help throw some more pizzazz into the menu?

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Re: [WIP] Living Fairytale [Fantasy]

#5 Post by Sweet »

@ miaverana & FatUnicornGames:
Thank you for checking it out. No offense taken. The main menu's art still being finished, I just wanted to show that I'm working on it. ^^" I am working on making a logo and custom images for it, though. I really appreciate the feedback and suggestions.

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