Memories - A Story- [Horror][Romance♥]

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Memories - A Story- [Horror][Romance♥]

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Summary:

Aileen's family moved back to her homeland when her grandparents passed away. She never once visited her grandparents after the divorce of her parents. Her only memories she had of the place were of the boy she met once, and then became friends with him. On the day before she left, they promised each other that they would meet again. However, when she finally returned, she recalled no memories of him - even when she saw him at the riverside. Still, he always smiled. Another thing she didn't know, was that he was the spirit of a portrait named Falle...

[Critique Thread] - http://lemmasoft.renai.us/forums/viewto ... 47&t=18794

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Aileen {Main Character}
A normal quiet girl living in the city. Her family transfer back to the countryside and living in her grandparent's house after her grandfather passed away. Her parent divorced 8 years ago after the last visit to her hometown.
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??? {Spirit of the Portrait} - Falle?
She meet him at the riverside. She doesn't know why but she feels comfortable with his smile. Aileen never catch his name. Don't know why he looked so familiar to her.

Daimon {Demon}
He appeared in the midnight in her room. Tell her about the truth about ???. And after that, he used to random appear in front of her.
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Zou The Bear (That's me...)
Writer: Story/ Concept/Outline/Plot?Idea?

Onyxium (Thank you so much.)
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iDD(Lemme hug you!)
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mmstar
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RukaKurokawa
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Quick Sketch by Onyxium
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Update♥
15/12: Project Start
3/1: First Character Sketch
4/1: Thread Open
4/1: Finish Prolouge
6/1: First Sketch - Onyxium
Script :
Prolouge : 100%
Story : 0% (Oh my TxT)
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#2 Post by mirelle »

I kinda don't get it. Are the existences of Falle and Daimon supposed to scare you? If not, like what is potrayed at the concept thread, this is most likely supernatural and not horror.

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#3 Post by Ran08 »

I also think it should be supernatural. :/ However, like I said in other thread, I like the concept of this. :) Adding the year at the end of the summary can make it sound more intriguing though.

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#4 Post by HamstarXCrown »

@mirelle : I'm kinda get confuse about it,too but the horror element will show at the semi-end and end of the story.
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#5 Post by Kait »

I think it's a quite interesting idea, and I hope you can turn it into a nice visual novel.
You should update with more information for us to comment on :)

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#6 Post by HamstarXCrown »

Kait wrote:I think it's a quite interesting idea, and I hope you can turn it into a nice visual novel.
You should update with more information for us to comment on :)
I will trying to :3 Anyway, update!
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#7 Post by Ran08 »

Awiiieee, the sketches are so cuuute! <3
I wish you luck on this project. Can't wait to play it!

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