The Underdog's Tale (GxB,High School)-Guy Sketches Added

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The Underdog's Tale (GxB,High School)-Guy Sketches Added

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Plot-Kira has known nothing but bad luck and misfortune since she was a kid. But she has never allowed herself to become depressed or sad about it. Instead, she does her best to be herself, and not let the bullying she gets ruin her. However, her simple life becomes complicated when she suddenly gets a love letter. Confused, and in shock that a guy likes her, Kira dismisses it, only to receive a batch of flowers the next day. Now with a longing to know who sent her the letter, or even if it's real, Kira manages to narrow it down to four guys. However, these four guys are anything but an easy catch, as each of them are popular boys who would normally never give Kira the time of day. So, Kira has a choice, find the one who sent her the love letter, or forever be the underdog.(Might change a bit later)

Characters

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Character-Kira
Age-17
Birthday-September 12
Sign-Virgo
Likes-Acting,Singing,Writing,Eating,Sleeping,Video Games,Rock Music
Dislikes-Boredom,Being told what to do,Water?,Popular People,Match,Carrots
Occupation-Student/Avid Gamer
Hobby-Finding news ways to beat the system of beauty
Positive Traits-Caring, Determined,Easygoing, Friendly,Creative,Trusting
Negative traits-Devious,Short-tempered,A Bit Lazy,Hard-headed
Personality-Kira is the type of person that just likes doing what she wants as long as it doesn't hurt people. She isn't into the normal trends of the world, and prefers to find her own image. She isn't one to take being told what to do lightly unless it is absolutely necessary for her to listen. She is friendly and caring, often trying her best to treat those that feel bad well. She can be a bit devious at times when dealing with people she doesn't like, and has a bit of a temper. Though she's doing alright in school, her lazy habit might get her into more trouble with grades and teachers. Finds the popularity thing overrated. Isn't one to conform either.
Bio-Since she was a little kid, Kira has had a passion for food, acting, and writing. She is more on the side of art, rather then things like math or science. For a good portion of her life, she has been made fun of due to her tomboyish ways and bulky stature. Her home life is pretty good with her mother, yet she doesn't exactly know what her mom does during her days at school. High school life is where hardship comes from her. There is never a day where she isn't made fun of by some one. Kira though, has never let the harsh words get to her and has kept moving on like her father told her to. Kira is also one who doesn't go into the trends or beliefs of high school either. She finds popularity to be very overrated, and even stupid. Kira doesn't stay in the background like a scared little girl. She is ready and willing to take the step out of her comfort zone if it means she can learn something new about herself or someone. She does have a tendency to be a bit short-tempered and even devious to anyone who pushes her over the edge. Isn't above pulling a prank or two, but wouldn't go as far as to hurt someone. Her favorite food is anything that has apple in it, and has a deep fear of water. Kira also doesn’t have much in the terms of a love life, yet is content with being single. Still, deep down a part of her wants love, and she is excited, and scared, when she gets her first love letter.

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Character-Sasha(Created by Stilts ^^) -Sasha is a foul mouthed, crass and very rebellious child with serious issues with authority, in fact most of the teachers in school have given up trying to make her participate or wear her uniform properly. She's often very loudly dressed in "punk" style clothing and her died hair of various colors makes her stand out in any crowd despite her somewhat short stature. She can't stand people who are content with going with the flow and happily living life by the rules society has set for them, often referring to them as "goddamn robots" and "shitty cardboard cut-outs". With her parents recently divorced and forced to move to her current location Sasha has a constant feeling of not being in control of her own life which caused her to develop her rebellious personality and anarchistic views. Kira is the only person she sees as a friend as she identifies with her as a fellow outcast, albeit for different reasons. She becomes somewhat spiteful and jealous when Kira hang out with anyone else...



Guys
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Charater-Ryoga
Age-17
Birthday-October 3
Sign-Leo
Likes- Martial Arts, Healthy Foods,Arcade Games,Track,Messing with Kira,Friends,Dogs
Dislikes-School,Heights,Losing,Kenta,Getting caught,Girly Girls,Sweets,Cats
Occupation-Student/Martial Arts Teacher
Hobby-Studying martial arts/Doing track
Positive Traits-Friendly,Sweet,Hyper,Funny,Imaginative,Outgoing,Athletic
Negative Traits-Immature,Noisy,Impatient,Cocky, Short-Tempered
Personality-Ryoga is a friendly and sweet guy who knows how to treat people well. He has many friends because of how outgoing he is, and isn't afraid to stand up for what eh believes is right. Still, he's a bit immature and doesn't take to losing well at all. Also is very overconfident, and that can often get him into trouble with anyone. Ryoga has that 'never give up' attitude, and is the type that likes to keep himself and others active. He also has a serious side whenever he's doing martial arts, and can be quite deadly. When free from school and other responsibilities, Ryoga can be found at the arcade. Has a bit of a love for messing with Kira.
Bio- Ryoga has always been an optimistic guy, trying his best to never let negativity take over. He treats people with kindness, and isn't afraid to protect the weak when he sees bullying. That doesn't stop him from being a bit impatient though and being a sore loser when it comes to track. Due to his outgoing nature, Ryoga has had many admirers in school yet hasn't had the luck to date anyone, showing his lack of experience with girls. Though he loves track, Ryoga also has a passion for martial arts thanks to his grandfather, and is a teacher at school due to his advanced skills. Most of Ryoga's friends are guys, with his only known girl friend being Kira, who doesn't really seem to see him in such a light. Though having dated no one, Ryoga still treats girls with great respect and never does anything perverted, which is more then one could say for Arata. He also has a deep love for animals, especially dogs, but has a deep fear of cats. Has a bad habit of going to sleep in class.

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Name-Satoshi
Age-16
Birthday-December 19
Sign-Capricorn
Likes- Day Dreaming, Reading Fantasy Novels, Sleeping, Kendo,Birds,Peace,Libraries
Dislikes-Being Chased by Girls,Annoying People,Loud Places,Cars,Thunder
Hobby-Daydreaming
Occupation-Student/Writer
Positive Traits-Thinker,Imaginative,Calm,Listener,Trusting,Dependable.
Negative Traits-Cold,Loner,Unpredictable,Quiet,Doesn't always pay attention
Personality-Satoshi is a quiet guy who doesn't have a care for much that goes on around school. Due to him being rather dark and depressing looking, some of the girls label him as being a bad boy or gothic like. This hasn't stopped them from swooning over him however. But Satoshi isn't a bad boy or goth. He is just a guy who likes his alone time, and enjoys spacing out whenever he gets the chance. With few friends, Satoshi doesn't really know much about how to be social, yet still is able to obtain a high popularity ranking. He can be quite unpredictable as well, and have a tendency to say random things when not focusing. Also is a bit cold to people at first, but shows a caring side when he warms up to people. Satoshi also has a bit of a comical side, though it can be strange humor.
Bio-Since his can remember, Satoshi has always been one to hide in the shadows and keep to himself. So, it's a wonder why he's so popular in school. Unlike Arata, he doesn't enjoy the chase from the girls, and prefers to be left alone. A daydreamer by heart, Satoshi often go off into his own little world, not caring what anyone says. Strangely he's able to keep up in school with very good grades, despite not always paying attention. Like Kira, Satoshi isn't into the trends that life has and prefers to make his own path in the world. With a love for anything fantasy, and peace, Satoshi's ideal life might be that of a hermit. But he doesn't isolate himself completely, and though cold at times, he does have a kind side to him. Though not one to let anger get to him, Satoshi can be scary when messed with, and does have a reputation of nearly killing someone. But this is just a rumor....right? Can also be seen talking to himself sometimes when alone.


Character-Arata
Age-17
Birthday-May 15
Sign-Aries
Likes-Girls,Acting,Drama Club,Fashion,Shakespeare,Motorcycles,Freedom,Smoking
Dislikes-His Dad, Business World,Hot places,Heights, Ryoga,Sports
Occupation-Student
Hobby-Acting/Smoking/Riding his motorcycle/Flirting
Positive Traits-Romantic,Cunning,Mature,Elegant,Smart,Wise
Negative Traits-Rude,Somewhat Vain,Short-Tempered,Flirter,Jealous
Personality-Arata is a smooth talker, with a passion for girls. He's a known romantic around school as well, and due to having a mature nature, has captured the attention of many. But don't let his smile fool you, Arata can be a very rude and short-tempered guys, especially when people don't give him what he wants. He can maybe considered a bit of a lecher as well, and isn't afraid of dating girls older then him. Arata is also very cunning, easily being able to know when someone wants to take him down. Though having a love for freedom, Arata does well in school and is highly interested in making it as an actor. He can be considered a bully at times, yet isn't the type to start fights. Is highly afraid of bugs.
Bio-One can't really classify Arata as some bad boy, but he isn't exactly a good guy either. He's clearly a flirt, and can be a bully at times, but somehow, he knows how to make people like him; with the exception of Ryoga and Kira. He is a cool type of guy that has a passion for acting, yet can be angered very easily if someone crosses him. Due to his flirtatious nature, Arata doesn't have many guy friends except for Satoshi. Arata is a very talented actor as well, and can act like a totally different person when on stage. He has a bad relationship with Kira due to an prank she pulled on him after he broke her friends heart. Now they are rivals in drama club, and enemies outside of school. Still, he can't help but wonder why Kira is never taken down by his words or actions. Though seemingly brave, Arata has a deep fear in bugs, which causes him to act like a little girl. Whenever this happens, Kira is in pure bliss.


Name-Kenta
Age-18
Birthday-November 15
Sign-Scorpio
Likes-Journalism,Working at his dad's shop,Stories,Winning,Snooping Around,Computers
Dislikes-Boring stories,Boredom,Snakes,Lazy People, Naivety
Hobby-Working for the newspaper
Occupation-Student/Head of the newspaper
Positive Traits-Ambitious, Intellectual, Forgiving(to a point),Determined,Watchful,Active,Wise,Serious
Negative Traits-Noisy,Somewhat Ruthless, Proud,Impolite
Personality-Kenta is what the Journalism needs. He's very ambitious in what he does, and is watchful of the going ons in school. Kenta is rather ruthless when it comes to finding stories, and can get into heated arguments with those he dislikes. Still, he is actually a very for forgiving guy, who is surprisingly good with advice, unless it's romance. Kenta is also a bit on the workaholic side, and sometimes doesn't sleep when he's writing for the newspaper. This has made him an insomnia.
Bio-A guy who is the head of the school's newspaper. Kenta is well known around school for his interesting, though not always true, stories. He will do anything, and go anywhere to find the next big scoop, even it means camping out at school. Kenta is determined and very ambitious, even sometimes seemingly ruthless when dealing with rivals. Though not as popular as Satoshi and Ryoga, Kenta does have his own place in the school. Before he graduates, Kenta longs to find the biggest story ever, and he mind get such a wish with Kira. Can also be a bit dramatic. Kenta, strangely, is very forgiving however, yet can be very proud.


Mishima-A popular girl in Kira's class, and 'girlfriend' of Arata. She is a vain, proud, and selfish girl, who believes appearance is the most important thing for a girl to have. Like Arata, she loves to flirt, and it is wondered why she's even dating. When her relationship begins to become rocky with Arata, she has her eyes set on Satoshi, and Ryoga.


Credits
takkun-hime-Story,Coding,Script
Sprite Artist-Stilts(Thank you so much :mrgreen: )
CG Artist-MelowBee(Thank you :mrgreen: )

AN-An upcoming game. Updates will come on a blog that I have to make, and on here. Please support it so it can be released. Thanks :mrgreen: .

Questions
What do you think of the art?
Do you like the characters?'
If so, who?
Any other questions?
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Re: The Underdog's Tale (GxB,High School)Feedback Needed

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This sounds really interesting

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PrincesssGamer wrote:This sounds really interesting
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Re: The Underdog's Tale (GxB,High School)-Guy Sketches Added

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Update-Sasha,Satoshi, and Ryoga have a look now. Sasha replaces Serena, and Mihoshi is gone, but her name was given to Ayumi because it sounds better. Sasha was created by Stilts. I think she's really cool, and gives a new idea to friends. Please give feedback on images and personality. Thanks :)
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