My idea of visual novel.

[zaku]

Hardboiled crime visual novel.

inspire by max payne series, crim movie and

synopsis idea

Hans novle is german american NYPD. he is typical american dream citizen. beautiful wife(first meet high school) and two sons.
one day, he is job done. back to the home. but, his family exterminated by unkwon gangs. this day, he lost his wife and baby. but his only baby name is karl novle.
he finding his family murderers.

he want his son alive.

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story telling = clinical first person.

major character
hans novle = NYPD police detective
karl novle = his baby. survivor.

jeanne novle = his wife. decease
wolfgang novle = his second baby. decease

murders = unkown gangs.
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prologue
typing like slice of life.

before accident
slice of life. his life and romantic visual novel. hans meet jeanne when high school.

after accident.
tragedy. show his wife and second baby. and survive his first baby karl novle.

[fleet]

I like the idea of a hard-boiled detective crime story (I made one).
I suggest you get someone thoroughly proficient in English grammar to proofread.

I hope you have fun making your VN!