Mythical Creatures: The Remover

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Mythical Creatures: The Remover

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Interesting idea, I'm sure people will read your VN when it is completed. Remember, not everyone will read and like your story. I hope you have fun making the VN.
Some of my visual novels are at http://www.the-new-lagoon.com. They are NSFW
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fleet wrote:Interesting idea, I'm sure people will read your VN when it is completed. Remember, not everyone will read and like your story. I hope you have fun making the VN.

Ohohoho You can never please everyone, right? True! I'll remember that. And yes! It's fun making VNs!
All I ask from the readers is to give feedback on what they think I should improve more.
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/glares/ how could you ask if the creature is weird in your vn!!! /cries in the bathroom/

/cough

I like the Remover creatures! It's the main focus of your plot! It's definitely needed :c okay

I do hope you update here! It's more convenient and you can garner more people here! :D

/i hope you don't mind me commenting a bit about your art!/ the only problem for me is that the body size is slightly misplaced! But there are tons of space for improvement! I hope to see more artwork for this project soon!

Good luck! I subscribed your thread!! :D
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polarisked wrote:/glares/ how could you ask if the creature is weird in your vn!!! /cries in the bathroom/

/cough

I like the Remover creatures! It's the main focus of your plot! It's definitely needed :c okay

I do hope you update here! It's more convenient and you can garner more people here! :D

/i hope you don't mind me commenting a bit about your art!/ the only problem for me is that the body size is slightly misplaced! But there are tons of space for improvement! I hope to see more artwork for this project soon!

Good luck! I subscribed your thread!! :D


*follows you to the bathroom "Don't cry!!!" :cry:

Yeah, I'm not really good in digital drawing with just using the mouse... Or even on paper :lol: !!! I'll try to make improvement... the wings of the Remover creature also looks weird to me :shock: But before the artworks comes the script :wink:

*gasp!!! "A subscriber?!!!!"

Alright! I'll try to update this thread once in a while :shock: Good luck to your VN, too!
All I ask from the readers is to give feedback on what they think I should improve more.
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Fake Existence wrote:
*follows you to the bathroom "Don't cry!!!" :cry:

Yeah, I'm not really good in digital drawing with just using the mouse... Or even on paper :lol: !!! I'll try to make improvement... the wings of the Remover creature also looks weird to me :shock: But before the artworks comes the script :wink:

*gasp!!! "A subscriber?!!!!"

Alright! I'll try to update this thread once in a while :shock: Good luck to your VN, too!
Wow...It's impressive how you can draw humans with a mouse though :shock:

I hope to see an extract from your script soon :D :D
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