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PostPosted: Mon Jun 21, 2010 1:21 pm 
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th3 path

this was just another practice piece, mostly for myself, to learn ren'py, experiment with ideas, try a few features, etc.

uses free stock, but also some copyrighted material (sauces listed in credits - yes, i'm a bad, bad person). for all intents and purposes, this piece is "finished," tho not really because i want to preserve what's left of my friggin sanity. spending too much time on this thing scrambles the brain and kills the soul. i'm all used up and not touching this THING anymore. x_x

not sure how long it takes. maybe an hour or more tho it depends.

WARNING: DO NOT PROCEED IF YOU ARE ...

1) affected by brief flashing lights or sound tones
2) highly suggestible / easily hypnotized
3) thinking of harming yourself
4) mentally unstable / paranoid
5) too easily freaked out

sry if i offend anyone because of the morbid subject matter.

v1_1. font fix, etc.
win: http://www.mediafire.com/file/zwmttay30 ... 2_v1_1.zip
linux: http://www.mediafire.com/file/youyemymm ... _1.tar.bz2
mac: http://www.mediafire.com/file/hiuhhmdxe ... c_v1_1.zip

edit: 7/4 - hmm ... lots of things i'm not satisfied with ... i shoulda let it just stew for a bit longer. oh well, too late. i think i might try to salvage this at a later time. gfx need rework. too many scenes with just static images. writing rework. music rework. interactive elements rework. animation rework. add new ui / overlays. change the gate scene as suggested. =D

still, useful for learning some ren'py stuff, so not a complete fiasco. heh.

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 21, 2010 9:09 pm 
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UWaaah. I've finally finished it. :D
First: post these in the Completed Games section. Worse has been put there, so just put them there already!! You can always update the links if you make changes.

Second: Holy crap, man. This ... was ... AWESOME. I now know what you were talking about when you said your head was in a totally different space. You must have had some time writing this. I sincerely hope you're not suicidal, as you need to stay alive to make these games. :D

Things I liked:
- I really, really, really, really liked how you had puzzles in the game. The interaction is what immerses the player into the world. And the fact that they are internet friendly is GREAT in a google society. Make things too easy, and the player won't feel challenged.
- I loved the use of sound. So effective, so effective. The buzzing in your ears? I loved it. No, seriously. All your sounds played right into what you're building for.
- I can tell you spent some time building some of the animations, and the effect is not lost. ;)
- The hints REALLY helped. I don't think I would have gotten that first puzzle at all without it, because I was still so dazed by the writing style that I didn't even think to analyze the wall (because I didn't know there would be puzzles). Your execution of the adventure genre is pretty good, considering what you decided to work with (just menus). The limited imagery allowed the player to focus on the writing for clues (and, of course, Google). Though, honestly, I do want to see what you would do if somehow you could make a really-expensive, interactive environment. It would be uber creepy, and even more awesome.

Here are some thoughts I had while playing, that are spoilers:
- stuck on entropy answer for a bit, because of 3-E exchange, which is funny because I picked up on the letter exchanges for the first puzzle. x_x so, my fault
- I was actually sad that the puzzles stopped after a while, but I can understand that you were probably emotionally strained, and that there really was a feeling of propulsion into the 13th room.
- Could not read ANYTHING in the 7 wood room >_> sorry ... the dark text on the dark background was unreadable
- room 8 is the type of creepy crap I was expecting. nice. I loved the sounnndsss
- AHH. 9 room reflection AHH KILL IT!!
- crazy van goh paintings made laugh with excitement, silly leaky brain ...
- I AM SO GLAD I SAVED before I pressed any buttons on the gate (I forget what room that was), I don't even remember what compelled me to save but dear god, I'm glad I did. On that note, the puzzle was really ... hmm, lame for this one?I just clicked the red button and it continued. that didn't seem satisfying enough for studying that huge block of text, writing down all the sequence of 1's, 3's ... ;_;
- I got all 3 endings in one go, hehe. I wish ending three (go through door) had some sort of ... hmm, reward? maybe a soundbyte? a brief image? I don't think what's waiting for you is a reward, per se. but you do get the formal credits if you get it, which leads me to believe that it's the cannon ending. I willing went through it. What is my reward?
- You really got me thinking by it all, which I think was the whole point, so yay. Being told that it was all seeds that would manifest later, it being a killing machine ... it really made me tingle


All in all, MOAR, write MOAR. But, please, keep yourself in healthy mental condition. Your mind is too precious to waste ... :)

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 23, 2010 6:14 am 
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...Why am I so compelled to make a manga out of this story!?!?!! D:

But anyway, wonderful job. Even better than your previous one, which I LOVED. I loved the puzzles, and the morbid feel. Makes me veer into the mysterious.

The only thing i found bad about this was the 3rd ending (finished all in one go), you enter the door, then what happens? (I know very well that he commits suicide) Was it the lack of background resources? And as Aleema said, why isn't there a reward for it? At least an epilogue?



Overall, wonderful piece. And if ever, may I ask your permission to put this story into comic form? Not like I'm actually GONNA do it but, I really do just have the strange urge to put this on paper. And... just to make sure and all that I don't end up blamed for copyright infringement. D:

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 23, 2010 3:51 pm 
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Completed: the tower., th3 path, SoS
Projects: cD, Jabberwocky, The Beast
@aleema
- heheh, yeah, it was a practice thing and my brain was getting kinda warped having to go through this stuff over and over and over and ... so it's a little uneven. some parts i like, others i'm not satisfied with, but abyss staring isn't very healthy ...
- i was worried about my use of sound, so i'm glad it didn't detract from the experience.
- i was worried about the graphics and how it might appear on different displays. dang it. ah well. i'll brighten the font in that part.

@aka-kami
- sure, feel free. go crazy with it (er, not literally). =D

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