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Hi everyone. I watched this forum for a month, but now I'll post something here. Please let me know if I'm doing this wrong.
English is not my first language, so please be tolerant to the grammar mistakes. I'll learn English, I promise. I already bought the textbook

For the first try I decided to make something easier. Only three capturable charas, 9 endings, simple plot and a lot of silly jokes.

Title: Errr.... Woof-Woof-Work, maybe

Genre: otome/Vampires/comedy(I hope)

Synopsis: Once there was a orphan-girl Reese. Her life was no good - wicked aunty always made fun of her. And after Reese graduated from the school, aunty wanted to use her and sold into slavery forced to marry with a rich, but ugly and a spoiled son of neighbors, who liked our main character. Reese didn't want to marry, but she could not help it.

One evening, Reese faced on the street with a suspicious woman. The woman cursed Reese and hurried on her way. After the incident, Reese noticed that the stranger had dropped a scroll. But the stranger was nowhere and Reese decided to check this scroll. In the scroll was told, that a certain rich family looking for a maid. Downstairs was the address. Reese agreed that this was her chance and immediately went to the road, using all the money on a ticket.

She was surprised when it was discovered that the maid was needed for vampires! The owner of the castle immediately equated people to the dogs and said that Reese will remain in this castle just as a pet. He just wanted the young woman wasn't linked with the vampires and will go away. But Reese in desperation agreed even to this, only not to return to family. Vampires had to take her to work...
And the game begin.

Characters:
So far I drawed only naked templates

1) Night



Owner of the castle and our Master. Selfish and self-contained.

2) Falko



Butler the only one servant in the castle. plain Good guy, he trying to help to the main character

3) Kotofei



Mysterious guy who stalks Night. Energetic and cheerful

4) Reese

She is on the work

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They're not wearing any clothes. So:



lol. I don't know if that was humor, but if it was, you're awesome.


LMAO. I love you.
Do it. Dooo iiiittt.


Wow! A GxB story that makes the woman act like a dog! Typically, I thought that reserved for male fantasies. Are you a woman? =P Nah, it will be fine. Most Some girls do like housework and pleasin' their man, so you can get away with it. Only if the guys are hot, though. Must be hot guys. Who are vampires. Vampires always get free passes to be super controlling, heartless men because they're literally dead inside. But at least they're hot. <3

Good luck on your project!

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What the heck?! And you already give the badge?! I demand the MC in such state as well!

Jokes aside, I see you're sincere on this project. It has some potential, plus it has vampires and a girl working for them as a maido, which is even a bigger plus (well, it depends for who ). I can see some nice character designs and I'm already sensing some hillarious issues with the story. Please, continue this I only hope, you will put a good image to those vampires, since I haven't seen anything interesting from the time I've watched Hellsing for the last time and Twilight tragically influenced that image. In overall, we need more real vampires and I hope you'll succeed at that Otherwise, there's not much else to comment on, so some will have to wait for more.

As for the english, you have to be joking (kinda), but a bit of learning didn't hurt anyone I've seen many more people (including myself), that usually write with far more worse skills than you had.

As always, I'll be propably stalking this thread from time to time to see the (eventual) progress. Other than that, I wish you good luck!

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You bought a textbook to learn English? Such dedication.
If you're really having trouble with English, you can always get proofreaders. I'm sure many will be interested to help you with that once you got a fair amount of script written. That's what proofreaders are for. I'm sure you can get some.



If she is treated like a pet, then who knows.

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Well, not many otome games are about vampires (in fact there is only princess nightmare and the translation is not done yet) and I'm glad you make it! You already have the dedication needed, so I'm going to say "GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GIIIIIIIIIIIRL!!!"



True, true ^^

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JESUS CHRIST, GOOGLING HOW TO UNRAR STUFF IS EASIER THAN WAITING FOR 1000 DAYS FOR A REPLY. SRSLY.

Already?! D: it is an honor for me


Uh-oh... Actually I wanted to draw clothes above of nude templates... Now I feel that I deceived you

self-destruction activated

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Yeah, I'm a woman. I just needed something that would link the plot and title


I love vampires and hate Twilight. I hope my vamps won't looks like Meyer's vamps




Thank you! I'll try not to disappoint you

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This looks so good!! XD

Don't forget Fatal Hearts!



Mmm... your blue guy and my blue guy will have to get together for some cute fanart photo opps.

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AHH! YES! Stupid old me! (I only played the werewolf's paths! ^^;)



*gives you a cookies* True, true.

So... Does that mean these vampires burn in sunlight?

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JESUS CHRIST, GOOGLING HOW TO UNRAR STUFF IS EASIER THAN WAITING FOR 1000 DAYS FOR A REPLY. SRSLY.

Hurray, another Vampire w.i.p.! I can't wait to see how yours comes out.

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Yes-yes-yes *3*


Thank you~ *munch-munch*


Yes. Like with gasoline


Thank you for waiting *3*


Here is some update.
1) I finished Falko and Koto templates



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2) And sketched Reese


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ooooohhh soundss cool i likes....

1) Finished Falko's template.



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2) Now I'll begin scenario
3) Finished Reese's design. Here is wallpaper
http://yondamoegi.deviantart.com/art/Wo ... -173192535

disappear for a week

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IT IS SO BEAUTIFUL AND SHINY!!!

AHEM!

This is going to be one of my wanted-otome-gostalkgo-list

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JESUS CHRIST, GOOGLING HOW TO UNRAR STUFF IS EASIER THAN WAITING FOR 1000 DAYS FOR A REPLY. SRSLY.

I'm blue abadi abidai -shot-

Darn it, the 'everyone blonde guy looks like Anton from Professor Layton 2'-syndrome has struck me again, and he's actually a vampire this time! But I think I'll like this game, because of the [strike]almost naked men[/strike] pretty art and amusing sounding plotline.

Oh, and DOGS!

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