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PostPosted: Fri Jan 14, 2011 1:00 pm 
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Arithra wrote:
It think the textbox is fine, but the frame of the name window is really big, maybe you could make it a little slimmer so it does not get in trouble with the name.


I'll try to edit it later
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 24, 2011 7:10 am 
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initial background sketches! :)
1. living-room type thing.
2. outside school/library/department store etc.
3. bedroom.

please see the file comments on what i think about each image. :)

i'm pretty new to this, but i'm imagining they should work with a bust-size to half character standing in front.


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File comment: some living room type thing. you could change the clock to indicate different times. haha, don't think it will really be needed!
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File comment: outside some library etc? for talking to a classmate/friend?
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File comment: bedrooooommm... in the POV of the viewer sitting on the bed on standing in front of it. items and accessories should be pretty easy to add onto bookshelf and desk if needed. the calendar can be changed at different times for miniture details.
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 24, 2011 3:18 pm 
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If needed , I can paste Atsushi or any character to your BG^^
Just send me a finished, colored BG and let me handle the rest of characters.


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PostPosted: Wed Feb 16, 2011 11:10 am 
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The sketch is too bright o.o

But well, it can be helped if you increase the level though. Anyway, was the right side of the bedroom seems to be... very empty? Or was it meant to be like that?

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 16, 2011 11:31 am 
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@aozora210: well I don't know about that, maybe yes? xD
Well I'll ask emichii then.
oh yeah! you're from indonesia?? where?

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 16, 2011 2:51 pm 
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Thanks, Yuuki! XD

I live in Jakarta. Are you an Indonesian too? oAo

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 17, 2011 1:11 am 
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@aozora210, what do you mean by the sketch is too bright? :O when i scanned it in, it was too dark and you couldn't see the lines, so i had to fix the whites so you could see it. :P

umm... the right side of the room is empty because it was the first sketch i did and i didn't know what else to put in. XD
because the POV is atsu (i'm calling atsuhi atsu, 'kay, yuuki?) sitting on the bed/just woken up/etc. And if a character for example his mum or someone came in and stood in the centre to right side of the screen, then the back of the room should just be wall space. the bedroom door is located to the right, out of the line of vision. if it's better though, the bedroom door could be placed at the back wall.


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Whaaa~ the art and main menu looks nice OWO

And glad to see more Indonesian people here~ X3

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 17, 2011 7:37 am 
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@aozora210: yeah! and emichii just answer your question :)
well I am! and i live in samarinda, but I often go to jakarta maybe twice in a year, coz' my grandpa is there :D

@emichii: of course! atsu-chan, now that's lovely! :3

@azure: oh, yeah! you too? lolz xD

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It's right under my profile pic, LOL~
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 17, 2011 10:00 am 
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@azure: silly me i never noticed that before o_o
xD I should pay more attention to things~ >A<
Yogyakarta? hmm... ever been there.. once i think when i was little :3
I want to go there again~ waaa~!

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 17, 2011 5:41 pm 
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Haha, I knew that Azure and LVUER are Indonesian XD Yay for Indonesia~!

@Emichii: Sorry, maybe it's because I have brighter screen here. The line is barely visible in here, though.
Anyway, just some suggestion from me. Maybe you want to add some small details on the bed room such as curtains or maybe paintings, or garbage basket or maybe make the desk and the shelf a bit wider, then you can give the desk some drawers to fill the space. Also some tip of the bed at the bottom of the screen, but all of that were just an optional of course XD The living room also can use some paintings or decoration (at the door, too, with keyhole or some pattern) or some mini table at the side of couch with flower vase, but again, those all are just optional, if they were meant to have less furniture inside the room XD Small details usually make picture more lively as long as they don't overpower the purpose of the picture, though :3

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 28, 2011 6:14 am 
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Update!

The script is 90% finished, just need BG to actually finished it! and the sprite too!

Too bad Yu will be busy these times, so maybe the progress will be on hold for the sprites!
But I'm sure the others still working on this too :)
Thank you for all of the supports!

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 23, 2011 5:01 pm 
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You have cute sprites. Nice bedroom setting. Looks like a normal teenage anime bedroom.

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 13, 2011 2:00 am 
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@celestine
Thank you! it's all thanks to yu_eriyama and emiichi~~
*A* working on the story again, rewriting it /o/
also we got a composer! :)

while I'll learn more how to use complicated codes lol :3

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