[VN/KN(?), Mystery, Drama] Independent

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Re: Independent - A Story of Dependence and Trust

#16 Post by Riviera »

Wow! I love it! The shading on the hair is very nice. :)
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#17 Post by Lumen_Astrum »

Riviera wrote:Wow! I love it! The shading on the hair is very nice. :)
Thank you!
I worked (hard) for that~ :D

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#18 Post by Coren »

Lucky tablet users. XD

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#19 Post by Elenakiara »

Awww!! Your drawing style is so cute! XDD <3 I can't wait to see what Leonard looks like! :O
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#20 Post by Lumen_Astrum »

Kirroha wrote:Lucky tablet users. XD
You are lucky too for having SAI. XD
Elenakiara wrote:Awww!! Your drawing style is so cute! XDD <3 I can't wait to see what Leonard looks like! :O
Thank you! : DDD

Here's a peek btw :

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He's just your initial a-bit-dazzled teen XD
I think I made him a bit too girly XD
I'm not used on drawing on the tablet that much, my hand still trembles a little x(((

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Re: Independent - A Story of Dependence and Trust

#21 Post by night_serenade »

The characters so far look gorgeous~! Can't wait to see Leonard coloured =]

And the idea for this VN is really interesting and unique; I'd like to find out more about why she doesn't seem to want to be around people or for anyone to do anything for her, and I wonder how Leonard will try to convince her otherwise.

Will definitely be looking out for updates on this one! Good luck with it!
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#22 Post by Lumen_Astrum »

I'm happy you took a liking to this one! :D

All I can say is that
her attitude is caused by a childhood event
and that
Leonard would be close to Bernadette, and he'll be a younger version of a stalker
plus to the fact that
Leonard's father is a freelance murderer (kills just because he feels like it) and he had killed almost everyone of his son's friends (mostly girls), that's why people stay away from him from the fear of getting killed.
I hope I didn't reveal too much.

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#23 Post by night_serenade »

Ooo wow, now I'm even MORE interested XD
Can't wait for more updates~ =]
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#24 Post by Lumen_Astrum »

I'm doing progress with Leonard's sprite :
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The pink thing? That is nothing : only something so I can see the blank parts correctly. I'm not using the paint bucket (because my lineart has some opened parts) because it's fun too~ :D I like coloring manually with my tablet XD

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#25 Post by Elenakiara »

Haha... :lol: I was going to ask about the pink colors, but you explained it right under the image... xD

So yeah, he looks cool so far! :O xDD Can't wait to see what he looks like when he's 'completed'! xD
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#26 Post by Lumen_Astrum »

---OLD POST---
Haaah... Almost done...

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---UPDATED POST---

Leonard is HERE! :D

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#27 Post by Elenakiara »

Ohohoho! XDD Hehe, he's well drawn! :3 <3 Though I don't know if I'm just old, but he looks young!! XD Not that it's a bad thing though! :O xDD Just saying... xD
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#28 Post by Lumen_Astrum »

@Elenakiara : Thank you! I'm happy you like it~!! <3

By the way, here's a sneak peek on my progress on the main menu drawing :
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I used a different method and used an inverted lineart to match Independent's slightly emotional theme.
I hope it's a good one... ^_^

A question for everybody...
Which is better as Independent's theme ,

Midnight Oil or Tell Me Once Again?

(click the song names to listen at the song)
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#29 Post by Elenakiara »

Tell Me Once Again
definitely struck a cord in my heart!! xDD I'd like that to be the theme song! <3
(I hid the name of the song so as not to bias any other people who will listen and decide xDD)
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Re: Independent - A Story of Dependence and Trust

#30 Post by Lumen_Astrum »

I've made the main menu screen for Independent :

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I kinda abandoned the idea of doing a drawing for the title screen because it always ends up getting too messy... ^_^'''

And here's a shot of Leonard's father... XD

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Sorry for the messy drawing XD

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