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Lumen_Astrum
PostPosted: Sun Sep 25, 2011 3:08 am 
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Thank you so much, Mocha-san! (Can I call you that? XD)
Your game's interesting too. ;)

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It looks quite interesting.

I really like the arts! As @Mocha said- the grey-scale idea- I love it too! It's nice to see just some details in colour. It all gives a nice feeling and atmosphere in the game~

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Of course! Can I by chance call you Lumen then?
And thank you very much. :3

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 25, 2011 4:58 am 
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Yes, yes, you can call me Lumen. :)
You are welcome :D

Anywaaaaay.
I kinda realized the Daena sprite is the most outdated of all the sprites. Imagine, her lineart is the thickest. /shot
So I decided to revamp it a bit.
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Also changed stuff in the hair.
I know, I just traced the original lineart and changes some stuff /bricked
Comments? :)

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 25, 2011 7:09 am 
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BUMP.
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A quick preview of a cutscene.
These two are NOT Lee and Lucia. XD I only noticed when I was coloring orz;;;
It didn't appear the way I like it, or maybe because I'm using traditional art XD

Meh, nevermind :|

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 01, 2011 7:12 pm 
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Screenshot with the new BG that mugenjohncel made~
(I dunno how much should I thank you :'D)

And yes, the cutscenes are all in color. :)

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The story of your project is very intriguing...

But, don't you think the actual game being in gray scale and the cut scenes in colour... or have I missed some update where you changed the game to coloured instead?

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 08, 2011 7:20 am 
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Only the cutscenes are in color. :)
And thanks! :D

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Sirius' intro CG. :D

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Only the cutscenes are in color. :)
And thanks! :D

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Sirius' intro CG. :D

Uwaaah. *o*
It's so pretty! Especially those eyes~

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 15, 2011 11:00 pm 
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Thank you so much, Silver-san!

I have only three CGs to go (two of them are with Tag- for coloring) and the CGs will be complete~
Oh and Lint check:
Code:
Statistics:

The game contains 1,094 screens of dialogue.
These screens contain a total of 11,941 words,
for an average of 10.9 words per screen.
The game contains 2 menus.


For my editors, I'm so sorry it's taking me long. It took me quite a week just to think what the hell I'll be adding O_O
Hopefully it'll be better than the first version.

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 24, 2011 4:23 am 
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Lint check (again):
Code:
The game contains 1,308 screens of dialogue.
These screens contain a total of 13,812 words,
for an average of 10.6 words per screen.
The game contains 2 menus.


It's the complete script. :'D
To my editors: I'll send it to you right away.

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 01, 2011 1:38 am 
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To all the non-existent lurkers out there (man, I'm doing all this stuff for nothing, I bet nobody will even play my game D:), after the two editors have sent the script to me, I've implemented them and now... what should I do again... oh yeah. Lint check.

Code:
The game contains 1,308 screens of dialogue.
These screens contain a total of 13,741 words,
for an average of 10.5 words per screen.
The game contains 2 menus.


Seems like the code was less because there were many sentences reworded and it was all turned to present tense XD
And while I'm inserting the sprites, CGs and polishing it a bit, here's my (old) design of Daena. Guess why I trashed this thing.

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 01, 2011 1:50 am 
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Excitement for this to be released~~

I actually like that initial design of Daena, why did you decide to scrap it?

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PostPosted: Tue Nov 01, 2011 3:31 am 
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I was just bothered by the idea I'd draw that tattoo on each and every CG of her. (Like there's so much CGs of her... but still)
And she looks like she's extracted from a random sci-fi film. XD (Plus, I think I've been overdoing this blind-in-one-eye thing XD)

(I'll probably reuse that character design again though)

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