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Well... I have a lot of ideas for my VN's. And sometimes I can forget some details\characters\stuff.
So I need some trigger as sketches for my memory.

What do you think about this kind of LI?




Well, Tobias is a nice guy, but somehow eccentric.

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Done Caroline's sprite

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I love your art! You have got great skills . I'm watching your DA gallery.
You're great at drawing hands and... haha, you're great at drawing the human body overall *jealous*.

I like Tobias design, it's suits a goth guy perfectly. I like his gloves and boots a lot.

Caroline looks like a sweet girl, I like her casual and modern clothes .

Thank you

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I've actually been kind of afraid to post something because I don't know what LI stands for. But I'll just say what's in my mind.


Tobias sprite shows a lot of visual cues and has a stronger potential to be a interesting character. I'm more writing-oriented, and already I can plan a whole story about him. What he likes, what he hates, what he does on his spare time. This is very important if you work with a story planner and they'll love you for it!

Caroline sprite is drawn very pretty and is visual more attractive then Tobias (warm colors, better shaded). The art style makes her look like a anime character, which is very popular within the Lemma forums. From her expression we can tell me she's a happy girl, maybe on the reserved side with her hand position. But as a writer I think she's more vague as a character and won't be as memorable as Tobias.

Personal question, is Tobias Goth or Emo? I saw the tight jeans so I thought Emo, but sometimes I have a hard time differentiating them.

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W.I.P. Script demo available

@James
Thank you for your comment I'm happy for any feedback - it's interesting what do others feel when they're look at my characters.


Humm... He is not quite goth. He's just love all this dark stuff, 'cuz "it's cool".

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I like how you drew Tobias. His looks makes a statement and the coloring matches his personality (though i may not know it yet, but you have mentioned that he loves dark stuff). I especially like the collar and the cross (a big choker fan here ). as for caroline, She looks beautiful and simple though I hope you don't think ill of my side comment here... Somehow her face is like a bi...you know those who can either be a guy or a girl...though the art is really creatively beautiful

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Currently working on Learning to Love
proofreading: the beach and yuki academy

My DeviantArt: http://platonicheart.deviantart.com/

Thank you

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I saw 'RIO'... And fell in love with these pretty birdies

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Finished:
- Zayay [Otome?][BxPlayer][NaNo 2013]
- Tortichki [Drag&Drop mini game]

@Alera
Thanx

No more Tobias... No more Tobias..

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I love all his expressions. I can see a potential awesome character .

@Abeiramar
Thanks

I just thought that it would be fun if you could choose MC's gender.

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A guy who is in the darkest corner. A little bit angsty & paranoid sociopath

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Aw! Lloyd is so cute.
I love the way you drew him. (Specially the chibi!)
Will he be a character for a future project? If so, I'm definitely playing it!

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"A fool who doesn't think is more foolish than a fool who foolishly thinks." - Franziska Von Karma
My avatar is chibi Alex in disguise, not chibi Zander. >_>