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PostPosted: Mon Sep 05, 2011 1:10 am 
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Greetings everyone :)

I am fairly new to digital art (it's been around 4 months now) and I've been reading around, looking up tutorials and experimenting, and this is currently what my colouring looks like.

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Err, ignoring the glaring anatomical mistakes, does anyone have any tips/critiques about my colouring? If you feel that there is a mistake that is much too large to be ignored, please feel free to point it out, however keep in mind that I am specifically looking for issues with my colouring. Thank you :D

I should also mention, please feel free to be as harsh as you like, don't be afraid to mince words with me :mrgreen:
*braces self just in case*

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 05, 2011 4:08 am 
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Okay, wow. The image of the girl is some seriously creepy. That smile with the big head and the little bitty skinny body makes it look like she wants to eat my face. The coloring on the hair makes it look like someone dipped her in a onto someone's palette, but I assume that's intentional.

Coloring styles are mostly okay. Damn, that smile is going to have me climbing the walls for the next couple of days.

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 06, 2011 8:59 am 
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^Haha, that's definitely the most extreme reaction I've gotten so far. :lol:
I'm happy it made you feel that way though, because that means I've completed my purpose :P
And the overly colourful hair was most definitely intentional :)

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 06, 2011 9:06 am 
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The eyes are creepy O_O
I think I'll be having nightmares the next few nights XD

Overall, your coloring is awesooooomeeee :D

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 07, 2011 2:30 am 
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I agree that the coloring is very nice, it's just that...
*captions the picture of the girl, "I'll Bite Your Face Off"*

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^Haha, that's definitely the most extreme reaction I've gotten so far. :lol:
I'm happy it made you feel that way though, because that means I've completed my purpose :P
And the overly colourful hair was most definitely intentional :)


If that's where you were headed with that, open her mouth just a bit, and show the viewer sharklike teeth in that mouth. That will drive *everyone* nuts for many moons.

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 07, 2011 3:37 am 
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I saw your dA, you're actually awesome you know! xD You're able to go and rp with those awesome artists making you are too!
I don't want to say a lot since your skills are better than mine, but just in case, I read up some few tutorials, and they said not to use blur tool too much, and balance the brushing technique. Also suggesting, more clothes fold? I'm not sure myself but I know you can do it!

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Oh heyyy that first image looks familiar. Isn't that Dashi's milizia uniform? LOL <3
I think you're on the right track for colouring. Just keep practicing and trying new things. Good luck!


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PostPosted: Wed Sep 07, 2011 5:18 am 
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Thanks for all of the comments, you guys :D


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If that's where you were headed with that, open her mouth just a bit, and show the viewer sharklike teeth in that mouth. That will drive *everyone* nuts for many moons.

Oooh, I'll be sure to keep that in mind~


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I don't want to say a lot since your skills are better than mine, but just in case, I read up some few tutorials, and they said not to use blur tool too much, and balance the brushing technique. Also suggesting, more clothes fold? I'm not sure myself but I know you can do it!

Ah, the clothes folds are something I definitely need to work on, thank you :D I've read about balancing the blur tool as well, but I've habitually smoothed all the shadows xD'' I'll work on fixing that too.


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Oh heyyy that first image looks familiar. Isn't that Dashi's milizia uniform? LOL <3
I think you're on the right track for colouring. Just keep practicing and trying new things. Good luck!

Hehe, that it is~ :P And thank you~

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 18, 2011 6:52 am 
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Whoops, sorry for the double post.

Would anyone like a request? I'll give the first 5 people a coloured headshot of any character :D

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Oh, taking request? Then may I request my OC to you? This is the little guy

Thank you first!

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Damn you for not letting me request twins. Revenge shall be miiiiiiiine.

Ahem, anyway, I'll request Kaede. You know where to find him~ Toomuchefforttolink.

See, I was nice -- could've requested Rosalind with her short hair and hat. Then where would your fun be? :twisted:


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Schizanthe wrote:
Damn you for not letting me request twins. Revenge shall be miiiiiiiine.

Ahem, anyway, I'll request Kaede. You know where to find him~ Toomuchefforttolink.

See, I was nice -- could've requested Rosalind with her short hair and hat. Then where would your fun be? :twisted:



Psh, I think you had way too much fun typing that post up -3-
And psh you already caught my kiriban what else could you want.


@HanaMori - Expect it within the next few days :D

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Psh, I think you had way too much fun typing that post up -3-
And psh you already caught my kiriban what else could you want.


More bloody, psychotic, weapon-obsessed twins? Your water bottle!


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