Basically my script is done, most of the music has been chosen, very little SE, very little sprites has been scripted on the alpha version.
15000 words + in total.
I basically need feedback and overall impressions on the story. I am searching for super fast readers that can feedback within a day, since the visual novel festival deadline is approaching. Please use spoiler tags after feedbacking... If you knew how I advertised in the past for this game
(HUGE SPOILER DON'T READ PLEASE, unless you want to spoil the surprise element)
(kore wa mahou shonen desu ka - EPIC LIE)
, please absolutely use the spoiler tags.http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?7stwd12nc12s8jj
I haven't fully proof-read the thing so it might contain spelling errors, unintentional distorted meanings.
AGE: 17+ - Violence.
PS: It's a 109 MB download. - Music is 86 MB itself, quite a number of classical music pieces and music from different jap visual novels.
Note that the music pieces I use are definitely not royalty free and I'm totally breaking 101 laws about copyright etc, etc... so this game is absolutely not for sale and for educational purposes (on classical music, epic excuse).