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Basically my script is done, most of the music has been chosen, very little SE, very little sprites has been scripted on the alpha version.

15000 words + in total.

I basically need feedback and overall impressions on the story. I am searching for super fast readers that can feedback within a day, since the visual novel festival deadline is approaching. Please use spoiler tags after feedbacking... If you knew how I advertised in the past for this game
(HUGE SPOILER DON'T READ PLEASE, unless you want to spoil the surprise element) , please absolutely use the spoiler tags.
http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?7stwd12nc12s8jj

I haven't fully proof-read the thing so it might contain spelling errors, unintentional distorted meanings.

AGE: 17+ - Violence.

PS: It's a 109 MB download. - Music is 86 MB itself, quite a number of classical music pieces and music from different jap visual novels.

Note that the music pieces I use are definitely not royalty free and I'm totally breaking 101 laws about copyright etc, etc... so this game is absolutely not for sale and for educational purposes (on classical music, epic excuse).

Aww. I would have given you feedback but I have a mac and I see you only have a window-version of the game =[

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Downloading...I'll give you feedback later. It'll take about 7 minutes to download.

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Projects:
WIP|[KN] Day Of Reckoning|
Completed|[KN] Saving Project Blind: Part One|[KN] Saving Project Blind: Part Two|[KN] Saving Project Blind: Final Part|
Is available to help with proof-reading (Grammar freak...) Maybe voice-acting in the near future x]

I'll help out downloading right now, and I'm a really fast reader with loads of time right now. I assume you want feedback in a pm?

I probably will prefer it in a pm.