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PostPosted: Fri Jan 27, 2012 9:25 am 
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Yuki Academy

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The main character, Hime Bathory is the Vampire princess of the "Netherworld".
When she gets her fortune read, she learns that she is cursed and it will kill her in the near future.
To break the curse, she leaves for another world called Earth where she has to find true love or die by the next red moon.


This is the general gist of the game, and Yuki Academy will be GxG and GxB game. The game main objective is to find true love so that she can escape the curse and return to rule 'her' world.

We need a Event planner / plot writer because we are planning to completely re-write the story from scratch. The current word count is somewhere around 25k which will be used as reference for building the new (and hopefully) much better story.

We also need a proofreader.

Yuki Academy Thread
There is also a short (and really badly written) demo based on the old draft.

This game is going to be long game with the rough estimation of word count being somewhere close to 100k.

Thanks for reading the thread.

EDIT: It will be better if you have Dropbox for easy file exchange. ^.^

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 27, 2012 9:51 am 
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Hmm. This sounds really interesting and right up my alley. Sadly I am already working on a similar project with Lux Nero and I don't think I could take two major VN work loads at once.

However I notice you are also looking for as proof reader which I have experience in. If your still looking for a proof reader I'm just gonna let you know that I'm available for that.

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 27, 2012 10:15 am 
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We need Proofreaders...
But since the current draft is going to the paper-shredder, you might have to wait for a little while.

I am planning to start writing in max two weeks; it doesn't matter if we get a Planner or not.

I hope you will be available then.

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 27, 2012 5:29 pm 
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I should be, Good luck with the writing.

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 05, 2012 8:46 pm 
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The first project that I worked on that went to demo level and I was kinda a proof reader for it if you remember. Well I can promise dedication and have some experience with the story. I like to give it a try.


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PostPosted: Sat Feb 11, 2012 2:29 am 
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Sorry for the late reply NewMember...

I will send you a PM as soon as we sort out the details...

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"I love writing but hate starting. The page is awfully white and it says, "You may have fooled some of the people some of the time but those days are over, giftless. I'm not your agent and I'm not your mommy. I'm a white piece of paper, you wanna dance with me?" And I really, really don't." -- Aaron Sorkin

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 11, 2012 10:07 am 
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Not sure if you still need a proofreader or event planner, but please let me know if there is still interest or want!


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PostPosted: Sat Feb 11, 2012 12:34 pm 
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Sending you a PM

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“One must be careful with words. Words turn probabilities into facts and by sheer force of definition translate tendencies into habits.” ― Fay Weldon
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"I love writing but hate starting. The page is awfully white and it says, "You may have fooled some of the people some of the time but those days are over, giftless. I'm not your agent and I'm not your mommy. I'm a white piece of paper, you wanna dance with me?" And I really, really don't." -- Aaron Sorkin

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 15, 2012 1:24 pm 
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This sounds like an interesting idea. I wouldn't mind helping out. Can you send me some more details?


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