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Hey there! I've been itching to make a VN for a while, and I actually have a few ideas of my own in mind, but I haven't gotten to them yet (unfortunately I'm a bit lazy when it comes to art). I love to write though and if you're willing to put up with me, I'll be happy to help you out with editing and analysing XD

As for a sample of my writing I'd point you out to my fanfiction.net account, but a few of my stories there have been made YEARS ago and I'm not particularly proud of them (though I can't bear to take them out because they're my babies *sniff*). Therefore I shall point you to this story, which is the latest I've done. Feel free to read the others though, but you have been warned.

I think you might want to change proofreader to editor, 'cause it sounds like that's what you want. |D
But good luck anyway!

|D The word nobility just makes me think of Utena though and how overly screwed up that was...

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Huh, this seems to be a cross between Princess Diary and Ouran High School Host Club. IIRC there was one Korean manhwa that dealt with this exact topic (Okay, maybe not exact, but it was pretty close). In other words, there are already a lot of precedents.

I'm having my hands full at the moment, but maybe I can help as a historical advisor of sort? Analyzing the semi-historical aspects of the story (How did Asami become part of the royalty of an apparently constitutional monarchy, for instance) and give suggestions, that kind of thing. If you're interested.

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@icebluehost
I've PM´d you

@lepapillonrouge
Changed to editor! And Utena as in Revolutionary Girl Utena? I read the wiki page for it, and I have to say, just from reading that I already don't like Anthy or the plot very much. Anthy is treated like a thing! Maybe I'm just being stereotypical here x)

@Argeus_the_Paladin
That'd be great if you could help me with the monarchy structure-y stuff! Like what you said, and the part where she has to convince all the royal families that she is "Ruler Material".

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Me- White! Oranges! Cats! The Simpsons! Square root of 61! TWENTY-FOUR!!.... What was the question again?
Friend- .... How are you....
Me- ..... 24?

It's less "convincing other royal families" and more "is she in this hypothetical country's succession line?", which is determined by whether a distant ancestor of hers used to be part of the country's royal family or not, as well as said country's constitution.

You'd also have to consider the logical repercussions of this 'girl suddenly adopted into royal family' kind of plot. I'm assuming the story is set in modern day, so it might be less of a problem, but even as near as the early 20th century the fact that a royal family has to bring in a strange girl from a completely different cultural and ethnic background by citing ancient familial connections can readily imply a succession crisis. That has always been a nasty thing throughout history, and it goes without saying that royalties have always been doing their freaking best to stop that from happening.

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One Province Minor - 120 class variables and still counting!

Because there is no such thing as too many variables.