Ah, I was referring to that:
write something that u have passions on it. then the readers will feel ur passions
After a while, I think it's about writing in a more.. excitable manner, although I'm not quite sure what really is. Maybe more action? I'm trying to find that answer.
Well, at least, you could draw. Best work I had was stick figures, unfortunately. ^^" And that's not quite acceptable in a VN/KN setting.. *sweatdrops*
How does one create "identifiable" characters? Are they like, super human and yet human?
Sorry for the sidetrack, but I wonder what is this "proofreader" thing.. is it like a co-author or a chief editor?
I guess, the only solution is to read more, although I have no idea how many books I have to read to achieve what I want *sigh*.