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PostPosted: Sun Sep 23, 2012 10:43 am 
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When the city of New Cardinal was founded, people had great hopes for it. With most of the world left in ruins after the last great war, the city was a beacon of hope. It was a place to start over. A place for hopes and dreams to come true. Almost fifty years later, and supposedly New Cardinal has lived up to expectations. The streets and hearts of the people are still brightly lit... but that light is cold.

From the outside, things might seem perfect... but from the inside, the city is a gate to chaos, just waiting for the right key.

After a dull childhood in the countryside, Castor decides that it's time for a change. He moves to New Cardinal with the hopes that he can get his life in order and out of the rut that he's been in for the last 18 years. Shortly after he becomes accustomed to life in the city, a murderer who earns the nickname "the Painter" hits the streets.

As for what happens next... well that depends on what you decide.

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The main cast, though Tailley does not have a path to himself.

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Hei
Castor's new roommate. He's a bit of a shut-in, and only goes outside to take photographs of things. He runs a blogging website and sells prints online.

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Reve
He lives upstairs from Hei and Castor. He owns a small company that makes handmade unique jewelry and accessories. He used to weld things as a hobby, but stopped after an accident that nearly cost him an eye. He has a fear of fire and hot things because of it.

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Ailen
Once upon a time he and Reve were a couple. He runs the cafe on the ground floor of the building where Castor lives. He is a bit of a potty-mouth, and loves a good joke.

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Tailley
A friend that Castor grew up with. They had been out of touch for about ten years, and ran into each other by chance in New Cardinal.

Luxy
Castor's twin sister. She lives with their Aunt back at home, and is currently in school trying to get her degree. She talks a lot, but sometimes it actually has meaning, so Castor phones her from time to time. Her favorite pastime is trying to get her dog Ruffles to do tricks.

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CG: 0%
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Programming: 10%
Writing: 20%

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This is my first project, and I will be working on it by myself. Renpy seems to be a very friendly program so far...
I hope you find it interesting!
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 23, 2012 11:08 am 
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I love your art style, you know! And more BXB is always a good thing. Keep working for it, I'm behind you 100%!

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 23, 2012 12:03 pm 
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Oops, I thought these were all girls. Very stylish artwork.


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PostPosted: Sun Sep 23, 2012 12:08 pm 
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Cute boys . Hope your project release soon.

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 23, 2012 12:09 pm 
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Projects: PERPLEXITY [Mystery VN], simplicity [KN,Fluff,GxB,BxG]
I love the art style :') It's so purdy to look at *A*
I look forward to this :3

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 23, 2012 12:37 pm 
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sapiboonggames wrote:
I love your art style, you know! And more BXB is always a good thing. Keep working for it, I'm behind you 100%!

Thank you!
I very much agree. More bxb can never go wrong, hehe.

Halca wrote:
Oops, I thought these were all girls. Very stylish artwork.

Ahaha, yes... I do have that problem.
Manly men, how do they work.

Daistarir wrote:
Cute boys . Hope your project release soon.

Thank you :) I hope to release soon as well~

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I love the art style :') It's so purdy to look at *A*
I look forward to this :3

Ahh thank you! I actually used TWEWY style as a bit of inspiration when I was inking them... I think the heavy lines make the sprites stand out pretty well.


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PostPosted: Sun Sep 23, 2012 1:02 pm 
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Gorgeous character designs! I especially love Reve and Allen *0* This looks really promising, gonna be keeping up with this!

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 23, 2012 1:06 pm 
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oh my...what do we have here?boys? (0_0) cute,cute boys? (0⌂0)
*grabs a bucket of pop-corn and starts stalking*....munch-munch

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 23, 2012 1:26 pm 
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Looks great so far! I'm excited to see this one come out!

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 23, 2012 1:48 pm 
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emit wrote:
Ahh thank you! I actually used TWEWY style as a bit of inspiration when I was inking them... I think the heavy lines make the sprites stand out pretty well.

Ahah! That's probably why I like it then ^^ I love the TWEWY artwork - the characters are purdy *A* You can probably tell I'm a bit out of it.../shot
If you need any help with proofreading, then give me a holla and I'll get to you...one day /shot

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 23, 2012 1:55 pm 
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You're art is so beautiful ; A ; I'm kind of sad that Tailley isn't romancable, but I adore Reve so I think I'll be alright(:

I especially enjoy mystery & the futuristic aspect of this. Their clothes, god do I love their clothes. Like, can I buy all their clothes in real life? //sobsobeautiful//

But yes, this project seems absolutely amazing, and I wish you the best of luck and if you need any help, just ask.

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 23, 2012 3:10 pm 
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Woah, for a sec I thought Hei and Ailen were girls. orz

But omfg, I really like your style, hehe. Looking forward to seeing how this progresses. C':

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 23, 2012 7:15 pm 
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La~ So awesome.
When i first read Ailen I thought his name was Alien... lol.
Sounds interesting. I wonder if 'The Painter' is one of these guys.......hrm?

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 25, 2012 6:49 am 
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Joey wrote:
Gorgeous character designs! I especially love Reve and Allen *0* This looks really promising, gonna be keeping up with this!

Yay! Thank you for your support!

WickedRaccoon wrote:
oh my...what do we have here?boys? (0_0) cute,cute boys? (0⌂0)
*grabs a bucket of pop-corn and starts stalking*....munch-munch

-grabs a handful-

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Looks great so far! I'm excited to see this one come out!

Thank you!

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emit wrote:
Ahh thank you! I actually used TWEWY style as a bit of inspiration when I was inking them... I think the heavy lines make the sprites stand out pretty well.

Ahah! That's probably why I like it then ^^ I love the TWEWY artwork - the characters are purdy *A* You can probably tell I'm a bit out of it.../shot
If you need any help with proofreading, then give me a holla and I'll get to you...one day /shot

Ahh thank you for the offer! I will be sure to let you know.

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You're art is so beautiful ; A ; I'm kind of sad that Tailley isn't romancable, but I adore Reve so I think I'll be alright(:

I especially enjoy mystery & the futuristic aspect of this. Their clothes, god do I love their clothes. Like, can I buy all their clothes in real life? //sobsobeautiful//

But yes, this project seems absolutely amazing, and I wish you the best of luck and if you need any help, just ask.

Ahh you're too nice, thank you! (I really wish clothes like that were easy to find in real life as well... I feel like the fashion choices everywhere are so limited... but I can't sew worth a damn...)

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Woah, for a sec I thought Hei and Ailen were girls. orz

But omfg, I really like your style, hehe. Looking forward to seeing how this progresses. C':

I wonder if I shouldn't try to manly them up a little bit, ahah
Thanks!

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BL!!! *dokidoki* <----- why do I use this?
La~ So awesome.
When i first read Ailen I thought his name was Alien... lol.
Sounds interesting. I wonder if 'The Painter' is one of these guys.......hrm?

Ahah no tricking me into giving out spoilers right now!
(I have a feeling i'm going to keep misspelling his name as Alien now... oh gosh)


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PostPosted: Tue Sep 25, 2012 7:56 am 
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Awww..... not even a little one?
XD sorry... lol.

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