Ugh guys, you don't know how many times I have write answering this thread...
I'm sorry for not replying propertly
Before I start replying, I wanted to let you all know that there is a new updated demo I posted on 28/06
You can download it here<<<It contains the same lenght of the previous demo, but it's already proofreaded by Mink. Also it's a little bit more pretty...ha!
Things that I will present of a future release:
+First chapter will be shorter and I will chop tons of things.
+Cut off some cg scenes, they will be now some small frames indicating the action instead.
+Work more on how fluid is the story also if the endings are going to be...understandable..orz
@Camile:
Thank you so much for letting me know! But I'm with you that 2 slots on The Elevator was enough. I think the number of slots on THW are also enough, but if more people disagree with this, tell me! This is part of my stupid obsesion to conserve some elements of old gaming. Like having a stupid ps1 memory card with all the slots full, and if the game allowed to overwrite other games slots, having the time of your life figuring out which slot was less worth than the other XD.
btw sorry that I'm taking so long...@Egressus:
Thank you for your support! XD Hopefully the GUI will stay like this, save from some little things I need to change.
@Anarchy:
Oh gosh, I understand what you mean! And now that you mention, I don't remember if there's any distintive on each star like a hover state *checks*......Nope there isn't lol..I suck. New thing to add to the list.
@sapiboonggames:
Ohohoho...Luckly this only happens
two times in the game.
@Cinnamoon:
Hey! I'm glad you liked it! I wanted a scream that
sounded more like it was shout by a teenager..but I didn't found it.
Thank you for playing!
@TheTourist:
AHA! you found out! I figured it out too late that, the girls acted far younger than 17. Maybe it's because my way of seeing things is childish, but I could tell mostly because of the level of independence they had, and the kind of activity they did. Also I may be wrong, but I think children mature faster on other countries than in my own country, I mean in the way of independence. Please note this are not excuses as much as they sound...I'm trying to figure myself why I did not figured it before when I was writting them!
about that sentence I can tell now It sounds weird:
Quote:
"Today, school was very tiring... And the sky is bright, which is unusual for an autumn day."
maybe it could be like:
Quote:
"Today, school was very tiring... And the sky is bright, unusual for an autumn day."
I always get confused with times when writting sentences, thank you for letting me know about those parts.I will fix them!
for the reveal:
Well, he isn't ment to be scary. Mean is what I wanted him to be. Lol I just wrote a spoiler and I just also errased it

-What I wanted to say is that even if the game is mystery, I like to add some humor bits on it. As well as some "what the hell parts" like Lois seeing her own face and teleporting etc etc
Thank you for playing it and for giving this valuable feedback!
distorsion wrote:
Hey Clua, any updates on this?
yep! well..sort off! There is a demo, although is not that new..orz