[Magical girl RPG] Star Maiden Astraea Rio v0.99 (R-15+)

[nyaatrap]

Speaking of which, I always recruiting a Japanese => English translator. I'll translate the game into English nevertheless, but I'm really inapt in English writing (´・ω・｀)ｼｮﾎﾞｰﾝ

[nyaatrap]

It turned out kinda like this (・∀・)

[redeyesblackpanda]

Speaking of which, I always recruiting a Japanese => English translator. I'll translate the game into English nevertheless, but I'm really inapt in English writing (´・ω・｀)ｼｮﾎﾞｰﾝ

Hm... if you can't find a Japanese translator, the alternative would be to find an editor that can straighten out the text. It should be a bit easier to do that. Heck, I might even be willing...

[Azura]

I'm fairly able in terms of Japanese, so I could try my hand. However, I encourage that you do as redeyesblackpanda suggests-- have an editor iron out your English version. If you would like my help with any of that darling, just PM me. ^ ^

In other news. I am absolutely adoring this game so far. Downloaded it right before a two-hour internet blip, so I was at it for most of that time. Admittedly I did get hopelessly lost in the labyrinth-like 'dungeons' more than once, and if I have to see one more meido I might hurt something. Haha! However, the idea was sound, the interaction between the characters interesting and amusing, and the general concept very cute and....well, adorably loli!

I will give more feedback once I work my way through all of it. ^ ^

[nyaatrap]

Thanks for suggestions.
The problem here is if I translate by myself, I have to spend a bit more time to learn English (especially "foul language" thing which my English teachers never told me >_>) and its translation may be postponed in the future. Anyway, it's the thing I have to consider after I done Japanese version.

Admittedly I did get hopelessly lost in the labyrinth-like 'dungeons' more than once

If I have a time, I'll implement a "return to a home point" script.

[EroBotan]

It turned out kinda like this (・∀・)

Looks good! Are those stars going to be animated? it will be cool I think, gives us feeling like we're inside a spaceship cockpit!

Oh, and I just realize that your game title is similar to mine XD (Star Maiden and Galactical Maiden part)!

[nyaatrap]

Oh Thanks. The idea of animate is good, but I'm not planning to do it now because of the deadline.

And, lol the similarity of the titles, but no wonder they're similar. It looks our tastes are close

[nyaatrap]

The game was completed, but I decided to rewrite the final chapter to make more dramatic. Then the final release may be a bit postponed, so I released the semi-final version instead. It contains all except the final chapter. If you can't wait the final release, download it from the top page of this thread (*╹◡╹*)
The R-18 function (costume_break) is disabled in this version because I didn't implement a content warning screen, but you can turn it on toggling the variable "show_costume_break" in the common.rpy, at your own risk.

[EroBotan]

I'll be waiting for the costume break version ... (blush*)

[michi 18]

wow cant wait

[nyaatrap]

Ew.. my keyboard is partially broken and cant write double quotation mark
No way to write scripts in the current state ;_;

[nyaatrap]

Bought a new one (｀・ω・´)
Last spurt Go Go (･｀ω･*)ﾉ

[EroBotan]

A while ago, my friend's keyboard broke. In order to type, he open one of his document files then use the mouse to copy paste the letters that he needs one by one to create a new sentence. I can't tell if he's genius or stupid XD

oh, and grats on the new keyobard

[nyaatrap]

(」・ω・)」it's (／・ω・)／ done!!
It's going to be released tomorrow after the finale check and has no critical error

[Nuxill]

Congrats on getting it finished!