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Help for a quick proofreading of the content warning message m(_ _ )m
I wrote this;
"Content Warning
This software contains some pornographic images of characters who look young.
One who feel resistance to them, or who live in region where bans them should not play this software.
The author may not liable for any claims, damages or liability caused in connection with the use of this software."
Could someone make it in better English? Also, I prefer a simple, short message. Can it be more simpler?

I'm thinking to rate this game 17+. It's 15+ in Japan but I think it should be set higher in English countries.

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I completely removed the second phrase because it sounds babysitting... not just that, more like an irony to idiots, heh.

A test play costs me several hours and not finished yet, but it must done today (・∀・)

ok, now I have a thing to determine. How to rate this game in this forum? The function of the costume break just shows nude graphics, no relation to any sex acts though. It can be R15+ in Japan, but I can't make sure how to rate in this forum.

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CONTENT WARNING
This software contains drawn images of sexual activity including characters that may be seen as below the legal age of consent. If your local laws against pedophilia include such images, the possession of this software may carry legal repercussions.

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Scriptwriter and producer of Metropolitan Blues
Scriptwriter and director of Daemonophilia
Scriptwriter of Zenith Chronicles
Writer for Pet Project II: Heavy Petting
More about me in my blog

Thanks so much (・∀・)
I've done all script checking now, and the other work have to do is license and legal notice. I'll implement that in the splash screen of the first play.
The next update will be on the completed games.

edit: while making this warning screen, I'm getting to think this phrase may fit in the download page more than in game warning. My game is on the edge of the line where it's adult or non-adult.. hardly define

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Hey, media fire doesn't accept a upload form Opera12...

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Hi
I tried upload something from Opera12 on media fire and it work.
So try it again. If it not help, use rapid share.

I can't wait to download and play it.

Thanks.
It's already done. (using firefox. I still had got an error with opera.. weird ) Download page is here

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Thank you for making this game, it is very good. I really like the effects and free exploration. I am still on level 1 but a map would be very handy whilst exploring. Reminds me alot of Raidy. Great work!