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PostPosted: Sat Apr 06, 2013 11:59 pm 
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SO SORRY GUYS I HAVE MID-SEM EXAMS/ASSIGNMENTS DUE SOON AND I TOTALLY BEHIND MY SCHEDULE. I'LL BE BACK I PROMISE!!!

GreenTea Productions presents:


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Brief plot: On the way to a school excursion an unexpected earthquake shakes the place. Reme, a highschool girl, falls into a large river and is mysteriously transported to an unknown city called "Farland". There she becomes trapped between a war between the Kingdom of Farland and a large crime organisation called "RedClaw"

Farland: A large ancient yet modernized city where thousands of citizens call it their place home. The City of Farland is ruled by a respected princess who is the remaining survivor of the royal family.

What is Tricross?: Tricross are a people with special abilities. They are born with a colored cross tattoo somewhere on their body. The color of the cross determines their elemental power. E.g. Blue = Water. (DUH!)

RedClaw?: A large and feared crime organisation, planning to slaughter the remaining royal ruler. The members are filled with S-ranked Tricross criminal users.


Heorine:
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Name: Reme Shin
Age: 16
An unpredictable girl who acts before she thinks. Has a major obsession with cute things.

Characters (order of appearance):

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Name:Minah Lee
Age:16
Reme's bestfriend. She is the last person to see Reme before she fell into the river and disappear.

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Name:Care
Age: 17
A bad-mouthed grumpy jerk. Hates being distracted and ordered around.

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Name: (Princess) Pearl
Age: 20
The ruler and last of the royal family. Mature, respected, strict yet kind. She started to rule at the age of 12.

Name: Gadget
Age:20
Pearl's bodyguard. Doesn't talk much but does not tolerate anyone being rude to Pearl.

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Name: Kat
Age:???
No idea what this "thing" is.


Name:???
Age: ???
A mysterious guy.


Name: ???
Age: ???
A wild and aggressive lady that appears outta nowhere.

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Progress-
Script: 9%
Programming: 7%
Story: 90%
Sprite: 30%
Music: 10% (Thank you lovely composers <3)
BG: 15% (Thank you to the lovely free BG givers.)
CG: 2%


#Update 04/09: Just wanted to say I didn't upload alot of info as an experienced vn gamer, I usually found the game heaps fun when I had NO IDEA what it was about. But I'll update from time to time.
Just a heads up for any hardcore otome fans, I'm considering romance like a sub-plot (maybe even less), cause I find centering around romance can be sometimes really boring and unrealsitic. This might even turn into a series! :)
[Pearl's previous pic was too horrible for me to consider, so I tried a new style :)]


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PostPosted: Sun Apr 07, 2013 12:25 am 
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LOL "Has a major obsession with cute things." Love the heroine :))
I like your plot, the art is sooo cute (wish I could draw like that) <3
Wish you luck on this project :D (Wait, are you a one-person team?)


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PostPosted: Sun Apr 07, 2013 12:28 am 
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Mimi_Melody wrote:
LOL "Has a major obsession with cute things." Love the heroine :))
I like your plot, the art is sooo cute (wish I could draw like that) <3
Wish you luck on this project :D (Wait, are you a one-person team?)


Thank you :3
Yep I am for now...

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 07, 2013 2:26 am 
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Your gorgeous artwork and a nostalgic (for me) premise just got my attention! There may not be much here right now, but I'll keep an eye on this to see where it goes in the future.

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 07, 2013 8:03 am 
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Blane Doyle wrote:
Your gorgeous artwork and a nostalgic (for me) premise just got my attention! There may not be much here right now, but I'll keep an eye on this to see where it goes in the future.


Thanks :)


#Just an Update on more sprites :)

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 07, 2013 8:04 am 
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Such clean lineart!
I wish I can draw that neat lol..
anywho this looks really interesting I'll be keeping an eye on this thread then. good luck. :mrgreen:

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 07, 2013 9:15 am 
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I'm liking the sound of this! >w<

Also really like the art style! *A* Keep it up, I look forward for this one!

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 07, 2013 11:09 am 
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Eunbin wrote:
On the way to a school excursion an unexpected earthquake shakes the place. Reme, a highschool girl, falls into a large river and is mysteriously transported to an unknown city called "Farland". There she becomes trapped between a war between the Kingdom of Farland and a large crime organisation called "RedClaw"


The notion of a character going from the real world to another one has existed since at least the original Alice in Wonderland novel, which was written about a hundred and fifty years ago. Back in the '90s, it seemed there was a bunch of anime-manga stories about teenagers being transported into fictional worlds, including but not limited to El Hazard, Fushigi Yugi, Dual! Parallel Trouble Adventure, and Escaflowne. They ranged from almost-never-serious (Those Who Hunt Elves) to half-comedy (Rayearth) to dramatic (The Twelve Kingdoms) to downright depressing (Now and Then, Here and There).

That said... I recommend making sure there's a reason why Reme ended up in the other world. What will she learn and gain from being there? Can she go home? If so, would that be a good thing for her and the world?


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PostPosted: Sun Apr 07, 2013 3:16 pm 
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Your art is way too cute! :D The plot and characters overall sound interesting, I'll be keeping my eye on this~


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PostPosted: Sun Apr 07, 2013 3:23 pm 
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Not sure if you used to be MelonCandy or I just need sleep, if so then don't mind me :'D

I honestly don't have anything to say now but the art caught my attention, the linearts are so clean >u<
I'll be looking forward to any updates :3
Good luck on your project! :D


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PostPosted: Sun Apr 07, 2013 8:07 pm 
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khnachi wrote:
Such clean lineart!
I wish I can draw that neat lol..
anywho this looks really interesting I'll be keeping an eye on this thread then. good luck. :mrgreen:


It's not that neat...
but thanks anyways :D

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I'm liking the sound of this! >w<
Also really like the art style! *A* Keep it up, I look forward for this one!

Thank you and thank you :)

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Eunbin wrote:
On the way to a school excursion an unexpected earthquake shakes the place. Reme, a highschool girl, falls into a large river and is mysteriously transported to an unknown city called "Farland". There she becomes trapped between a war between the Kingdom of Farland and a large crime organisation called "RedClaw"


The notion of a character going from the real world to another one has existed since at least the original Alice in Wonderland novel, which was written about a hundred and fifty years ago. Back in the '90s, it seemed there was a bunch of anime-manga stories about teenagers being transported into fictional worlds, including but not limited to El Hazard, Fushigi Yugi, Dual! Parallel Trouble Adventure, and Escaflowne. They ranged from almost-never-serious (Those Who Hunt Elves) to half-comedy (Rayearth) to dramatic (The Twelve Kingdoms) to downright depressing (Now and Then, Here and There).

That said... I recommend making sure there's a reason why Reme ended up in the other world. What will she learn and gain from being there? Can she go home? If so, would that be a good thing for her and the world?


Yep got that all planned out, thanks for the advice.

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Your art is way too cute! :D The plot and characters overall sound interesting, I'll be keeping my eye on this~


Thanks for taking interest :)

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Not sure if you used to be MelonCandy or I just need sleep, if so then don't mind me :'D

I honestly don't have anything to say now but the art caught my attention, the linearts are so clean >u<
I'll be looking forward to any updates :3
Good luck on your project! :D


Uh, pretty I'm sure I'm me! (Im guessing MelonCandy is someone else's username?)

Thanks, hopefully this vn goes turn out interesting .



[This quoting thing is messy phew~)

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I love the plot and the art *--* I'll be waiting for this~~ ♥


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Sora-Kuroi wrote:
I love the plot and the art *--* I'll be waiting for this~~ ♥

Thank you!


I really should be asleep but got excited and screenshot-ed a little preview for you lovely people!
(Yeah sorry the CG isn't done yet :/)
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Ahem, anyways...
GNITE EVERYONE!

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Nero, you know what I'm thinking. They have same first name (it is quite common,yeah) and both came from Austraylia (did I spell it right?)

Nevermind, a promising project with a fine concept. I will checking this out when I've time and hoping for more. I've seen your art styles a lot. You must have a lot influence then. o ^ o Well, good luck.

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 09, 2013 6:51 am 
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Nero, you know what I'm thinking. They have same first name (it is quite common,yeah) and both came from Austraylia (did I spell it right?)

Nevermind, a promising project with a fine concept. I will checking this out when I've time and hoping for more. I've seen your art styles a lot. You must have a lot influence then. o ^ o Well, good luck.


(Y) Don't know about influence but thanks! I shall not disappoint you! (hopefully)

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