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Egressus
PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2012 5:00 am 
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Yeah, sorry about that. Well, Utau does seem like a girl who'd use that sort of name but I'm pretty sure her Shugo Charas are angel and demons, aren't they? I don't really remember, given I've only read fanfictions. I remember her being a bit punkish, so that names aren't surprising.
But you seem to go for a nicer take, so I figured I'd say it.

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Cue-san
PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2012 6:59 am 
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michi 18 wrote:
wow it seems cute the name luna reminds me of sailor moon. Well goodluck with it !

Aww, Thank you ! Yup yup. Let's hope to be finish it clean and nicely.

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Katty16
PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2012 7:29 am 
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This game looks nice
Good luck with it ;)
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michi 18
PostPosted: Tue Jun 12, 2012 7:50 am 
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well im soo excited!!to play the game wish u luck again!

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Arelune
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Cue-san wrote:
Uu,, Thanks Arelune. You're a big help ! I now changed it to yours, and I edit some weird sentences (You say.) Thanks again :D.
(You can ask me too for help if you're making VN. )

Oh, that's quite alright. I'm still just tinkering around with my stories. ^^

There are two things you still might want to change though:
'she will met a man who will make her happy.' -> 'she wil meet a man who will make her happy.'
'she can transform into different person, aside from her true and normal self.' -> 'she can transform into a different person.' (the last part is a bit redundant)
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Cue-san
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@Egressus : Yeah, i just search it right on wiki... so maybe that's her name representing her character over.
thanks!

@katty 16 : thanks ! I hope you'll be able to wait and play it! :D

@Michi : Haha! thanks again !

@Arelune, thanks again. You're like an observer XD. Thanks for your support :DDD. I really adore you *o*
BTW, Fuu ~ I'm sketching 4 chara's already and none of them are linearted already. XD ! Please just w8 more a little. :). School days are very busy D:

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Cue-san
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Fuuu.. ~ Sketching is harder that I think XD.
*Busy busy*

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maya-ya16
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Ha, So this is it ? .
Fine. Long haired character boy is enough okay ? :)
.. The Story is already fine. Don't change it anymore ..
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Ah, and one more time, Anne .. Message me about the Backgrounds and the colors. Wish us Luck ! :)
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Cue-san
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@ Maya-chan , Yup !. Sorry for the bother. But please do it, I'm in a rush mode :DDDD

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