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Letters From an Angel(GXB, Drama,Romance,High School)

#1 Post by Fenrir34 »

Info-This is a game I've actually been working on for a while. After stupidly deleting one of my other games,I decided to go back to this one and use some of the characters from Sakura Blossoms. For example, Jun was the original main character and Minori was Sora's(mc name) sister. But since it's gone, I decided to add them to this game.

As for Letters From an Angel, I've already finished the prologue. For the moment things are staying as is but I might get rid of one of the guys. Writing five characters is very difficult (yet fun for some reason). I might ask for a co-writer but I'm not sure.

So the game is a common high school romance story with a dash of tragedy. I'd rate it for thirteen and up as well. It's of course a free game.

Also, since I am the farthest with this game, this will likely be finished before Lover's Mountain.

Anyway, here's the plot and characters


Features:
~Five Obtainable Guys(For Now)~
~Three Endings for Each Guy-Friendship,Romance,?~
~Many Choices~
~Hopefully a good main character~
~Over 60,00 Words~
~Soothing Music~



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Plot-Riku has always kept her distance from people. With no friends, her only contact is her older sister Minori. But Riku has a little secret; for the past year she has written letters to an unknown person who helped her through a life threatening situation. Now a senior, she has made it her goal to try and find her Letter Angel in order to thank them for helping her survive high school. But when she learns of the possible candidates for her Letter Angel, Riku's life will spiral back into a whole new world of drama.
Riku
Birthday-November 12
Personality-Sarcastic,Depressed,Weird, and Kind
Hobbies-Playing video games
Likes-Anime,Sleeping,Eating
Dislikes-School and annoying people
Bio-Our Mc. Riku is a loner in her school and keeps to herself with either her psp or some type of book. Funny thing is that even though she's a loner Riku is constantly around people who either want to know her or are her enemies. She has a bit of a bad luck streak and at times eats to much, thus causing her to get sick. Though a little negative, she's actually a very nice girl and wants to forget her horrible past

Minori
Birthday-December 6
Personality-Helpful,Clueless?, Sneaky
Hobbies-Partying
Likes-Drinking, Taking care of Riku, Blueberries,Romance Movies
Dislikes-Rude men/people,Riku's laziness, Dogs
Bio-Riku's older sister and caretaker. Minori is an extremely attractive woman who dreams of having the perfect romance. She has a secret life style that Riku doesn't know about and enjoys partying. Minori does give advice but it usually backfires in some way.
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Kaiji
Birthday-January 1
Personality-Quiet,Intellectual,Shy, Kind
Hobbies-Reading
Likes-Writing, Studying, and His own space
Dislikes-Loudness,Cats, Dumb People, Laziness
Bio-A quiet boy who often appears out of no where. Kaiji enjoys reading tremendously and his peace. Though he may appear cold, Kaiji is actually very sweet. He's very around girls and tries to keep away from them, which is hard because he's rather popular. The one girl however, that he seems to be able to stand is Riku and that's because of how she to likes the quiet. Kaiji is also very superstitious.
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Birthday-July 16
Personality-Short-Tempered, 'Aggressive', Gentle?, Impatient, Loyal
Hobbies-Cooking
Likes-Baking,Fighting,Having Fun
Dislikes-School,Yusuke,Needles
Bio-Jun is the delinquent of the school and likes to spend his time relaxing on the roof. Since elementary school Jun has made fun of Riku and has basically made her life more difficult then needs be. Though aggressive and short-tempered, Jun can be very gentle and would never attack the weak. His best friend is Croix.
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Yusuke
Birthday-August 9
Personality-Vain,Rude,Generous,Romantic,Insecure
Hobbies-Sports
Likes-Girls,Basketball,Swimming,Art
Dislikes-Croix,Jun,Being Ignored,Bugs
Bio-An athlete who will do anything to be on top in sports. Yusuke is very popular in school and has dated many girls. Though vain and rude at times, Yusuke is quite a romantic and believes every woman should be treated like a queen (even if it means dating more then one of them). Though handsome, Yusuke is secretly insecure about himself. His life also, is not as perfect as it seems to be. Is friends with Kaiji but enemies with Jun and Croix
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Croix
Birthday-March 5
Personality-Cheerful,Funny,Lazy
Hobbies-Sleeping
Likes-Relaxing, Acting, Television, Animals
Dislikes-Working,Being Bored,Rainy Days
Bio-Croix is a happy, go with the flow guy. He is best friends with Jun and usually gets in many fights alongside him. Though he goes to school more then Jun, Croix is often either sleeping in class or on the roof. He's very lazy but does well in stuff he likes; example being acting. He believes to look for the best in everyone, even in his enemy Yusuke.
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Hiro
Birthday-September 15
Personality-Mature, Cute, Kind, Wise
Hobbies-Working at the cafe
Likes-Helping others, giving advice,computers,sweets
Dislikes-Being called shorts, being call a kid, heights
Bio-Though it may not look like it, Hiro is actually an adult. He works part-time at the cafe and the rest of his time at college. Hiro's very mature but is constantly mistaken for a child, which pisses him off greatly. He's known for giving good advice to the people who come to the cafe and this has made him very popular. Hiro is also one of the few people Riku get's along with.
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Naru
Birthday-October 3
Personality-Cheerful,Determined,Naive
Hobbies-Dance
Likes-Music,Clothes,Cute things,Candies
Dislikes-Sadness,Riku's stubbornness,Fish
Bio-A cheerful girl who wants to get to know Riku more. Naru is a popular girl yet is very kind to all of her piers,which always prompts others to take advantage of her. Though naive and clumsy, Naru is very determined and believes that having a goal will make one's life happier. Is also the younger sister of Yusuke.
Mio
Birthday-January 27
Personality-Rude,Impatient,Devious
Hobbies-Singing
Likes-Clothes,Exercise,Boys
Dislikes-Riku
Bio-An uptight girl who feels nothing but resentment for Riku. Attractive and cute, Mio uses her looks to get her way. Her job is to basically to make Riku's life a misery.
Credits
Story-Fenrir34
Script-Fenrir34
Pictures for characters- Blue Forest and tokudaya (I can't draw so they really helped)
Logo-IIStarCandy
Cg-By Ellestril. Her art is really pretty and I'm very grateful for her help :D




Current Progress:
Story: 10%
Script: 20%
Sprites: 70%
BG's: 10%%
CGs:?
Music:TBA
Game Length-TBA
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Re: Letters From an Angel(GXB, Drama,Romance,Tragedy)

#2 Post by soraibi »

The art looks so pretty and the story seems interesting. I'm not too in to tragedies though D:

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Re: Letters From an Angel(GXB, Drama,Romance,Tragedy)

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soraibi wrote:The art looks so pretty and the story seems interesting. I'm not too in to tragedies though D:

Arts from tokudaya and blue forest but, after buying one of there packs, I was able to create Croix

And thanks :) .

But maybe I shouldn't put tragedy in the tittle...Doesn't really make much sense....

Bad stuff happens,
and maybe even death
, but it's not that depressing.

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The concept sounds interesting, and I like your logo. The plot sounds a lot like the manga Dengeki Daisy, though, except with multiple possible senders instead of one. Have you heard of it?

Two other questions:

Will you get a bad ending if you don't find the mysterious letter sender?
Features:...
~Soothing Music~
Just out of curiousity, who's doing the music? I didn't see it in the credits...
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Sounds interesting~
I'm looking forward to it!
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#6 Post by Katta »

I think you should choose one project (maybe two) and finish it before creating more WIPS, maybe it's just me, but I'm getting a bit confused with them...

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Haze wrote:The concept sounds interesting, and I like your logo. The plot sounds a lot like the manga Dengeki Daisy, though, except with multiple possible senders instead of one. Have you heard of it?

Two other questions:

Will you get a bad ending if you don't find the mysterious letter sender?
Features:...
~Soothing Music~
Just out of curiousity, who's doing the music? I didn't see it in the credits...

I have but haven't really read it. This idea just came up in my head. I hope it's not to similar :(. As for the ending well you actually get to pick the guy in the beginning and then see if he is the sender. Basically you have to choose the right choices for him to be the Letter Angel. There are either going to be 2 or three ending for each guy. Depends on how it goes.

As for the music I'm not sure what I'm using yet. I'm looking for soothing music since the game is a little dramatic. :)

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Kyra10 wrote:Sounds interesting~
I'm looking forward to it!
:D

Thank you so much :)

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Katta wrote:I think you should choose one project (maybe two) and finish it before creating more WIPS, maybe it's just me, but I'm getting a bit confused with them...

This game is actually a retelling of one that I completely lost and was planning to do. Characters like Jun and Minori were the main characters of that game but after losing it I decided to combine it with Letters From an Angel and change things up a bit.

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#10 Post by NeoAngelique »

The game sounds interesting. The art is also good. I'll be looking forward to seeing it complete.

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