STORY
Story: 100%
Script: 100%(First draft done. Still needs proofreading and revising, but the overall script is done and ready. )
Coding: 50%(Coded the first draft for the sake of inputing the visuals and messing with GUI.)
GUI: 100% (Thank you so much Shiro!!)
CGs:90% (One more!)
Proofreading and Revising: 60%(Hazel-bun agreed to help with this yay!)
Music: 100%
SCREENSHOTS
Story l Art: khanachi
Co-Writer: Hazel-bun
GUI: shiroisalva5
Programming: DragoonHP
Voices:
Woman: Cayla Martin
Axel: Ethan Nakashima
- Customed GUI
-No sprites just pure cgs with variations
-Voiced!
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(If you have time can you answer this..please...)
1. Do you find the story interesting? Are you going to give this a chance once it's released?
(I think we'll have to stick with the name Memoir afterall, thank you for those people who answered this)
3.I would like to ask if some of you are willing to give some feedbacks about the writings for this KN
this is a portion of the script:
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e"My name is Axel and I am eighteen years old."
e "I played soccer when I was in high school. Never was really good at it but that never stopped me from trying."
e "I like salty foods like french fries and potato chips. Anything with a nice kick to it, real classy dishes that are good for your body if you know what I mean."
e “I’m also fond of pop music. A pumping beat turned up to eleven gets me moving. Nothing beats it. Nothing tops it..."
e "As I write my "top ten list' down in my battered notebook, I can’t stop myself from smiling."
e "I never thought I would be so happy remembering things that I once took for granted. Happy fleeting moments, little insignificant nothings really that mean so very much now that they are gone."
e “Erased. No more.”
e "Those simple experiences, tastes, sounds, feelings I never imagined would be of much relevance to me. So faint as if to be an illusion."
e "Now they've been so easily forgotten once It had taken over me..."
e "Even now it holds my memories hostage and I am helpless against It. The slow, inevitable corrosion of those precious moments."
e "I fear that I’ll forget that what makes me “me”. Never in a million years did think experiences which had been ingrained into my very essence, been my foundation, would one day fade away, become nothing."
e "Until now."
is there something off about it?
UPDATE:
No this game is not dead, just got caught up with some real life issues(university stuff)
So I hope you guys understand why I can't release this just yet.
But I'm back now and actively working on this again. And for some news shiroisalva5 made
this cool website for status infected you may want to check it out if you have time.
http://www.status-infected.blue-tsuki.com/
Gonna update some of the stuff in here whenever I can.
again thank you very much to Hazel-bun and Corynth for helping me to set this WIP thread up.