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#7231 Post by sherberrie »

Just drew this today! I tried to color hair differently, except I forgot to add some highlights. Oh well~ TvT
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#7232 Post by Aviala »

Didules wrote: I wonder if I should put the character and the rocks a lil bit more to the bottom so that the sky seems bigger...?
That really depends what you're going for. If you move the figure lower and maybe make her a bit smaller, it highlights the enviroment and the scene more, and maybe focuses slightly less on the person itself. It'd create a feeling of "a small person in a big world".

If I were you, I'd probably move the rock and the person a bit lower and more to the right side. But I'm not an expert, and it's just my opinion :')

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#7233 Post by Tempus »

@konett: Whoa some nice stuff there.
@Laniessa: Looks nice. I think the extra effort in presentation pays off w/ the BG and text.

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Haven't been doing much art lately. We need a code dumpage thread, damn it! Anyway here's a WIP BG that I started approximately just after the Big Bang:
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#7234 Post by Ulalaria »

@Tempus Wow, I love the hazy, atmospheric lighting in that office bg.

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#7235 Post by trooper6 »

Tempus, you BGs are so gorgeous there would need to be some very special sprite art to go along with them.
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#7236 Post by Tempus »

@Ulalaria & trooper6: Whoa, thanks you two!
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#7237 Post by Didules »

Aviala wrote: That really depends what you're going for. If you move the figure lower and maybe make her a bit smaller, it highlights the enviroment and the scene more, and maybe focuses slightly less on the person itself. It'd create a feeling of "a small person in a big world".

If I were you, I'd probably move the rock and the person a bit lower and more to the right side. But I'm not an expert, and it's just my opinion :')
First if all, thanks a lot for the feedback!! I'll probably do what you suggest because reducing the character seems like a bad idea as she embodies the feeling I wanted to represent (happiness/freedom when all seems to go along with who you are and how you're feeling). The character has to be important but here she seems to central... + I want to train on environnements 8)
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#7238 Post by Harliqueen »

This thread is seriously motivating- seeing everyone's work and different styles is really inspiring :)

Was kind of fed up with drawing people, so did a fawn for my warm up :D

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#7239 Post by Lesleigh63 »

Working on a background.
I need to get faster at this.
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#7240 Post by ofdawnandtwilight »

Currently working on an Alice in Wonderland themed picture in between all the other stuffs I have, I'm really loving my new colouring style 0v0
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#7241 Post by LeonDaydreamer »

That's a really nice design, nero279!

Presenting my first background for the game (which took way too long to finish :P )

THE DINER

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#7242 Post by DarkSin »

@Tempus - Very nice :o Love the lighting and texture work.
@LeonDaydreamer - That's a very good looking BG. Must've been a lot of work!


A test render for a background I was making for this Violet Hill video that isn't happening anymore. I also did some very quick post processing, just as an experiment:
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I'll probably finish this later on and then do some proper post processing, complete with a paint over, for it to be used elsewhere.
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#7243 Post by Lesleigh63 »

@LeonDaydreamer - cute bg, has a 50's feel to it.
@Tempus - your art is lovely as usual (has a soft hazy feel, but the solidness of the chair and desk gives it a real sense of power/authority).
@Darksin - sorry to hear your bg won't be used after so much work. I like the sense of space.

Finally finished my bg (only another 17 to go).

Definitely need to get faster at this.
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#7244 Post by Auro-Cyanide »

I finished Amnesia recently, so fanart!

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#7245 Post by truefaiterman »

I had some time to make some traditional inking with brush-pens, and went for the "brutally bold" way. Then I toyed with it and made a comic-book cover mockup.

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