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So I'm about to get the final character art for my KN Dust to Dusk and decided I could do with a little critque.
I'd also like to know which of the males is most attractive. Same for the girls (I like Scylla most). Strangely enough, soi far Doom has the most fanservice shots.


Name: Doom


Name: Hiro Noyabr




Name: Haruka



Names: Cherry and Rose Voltsfeild


Name: Seven



Name: K1n



Name: G1n



Name: Scylla

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For "most attractive" I'd vote Cherry. Uh... I'm not sure I'm qualified to vote on guys, however...

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For the guys, I'd say Doom is most attractive to me.
As for the girls, I like Cherry as well, or Seven. C:

Honestly, Scylla is quite attractive too but the size of her breasts scare me O_o

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i agree with doom being more attractive drawing wise, but concept wise i prefer Hiro (minus those lovehearts on his clothes)
Cherry is drawn nicely but i like seven's style

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Doom and Scylla look pretty badass (aside from lacking in the left-eye department), as does Kitsune-thing. Seven'd look better without the odd stitching stuff, though maybe it'd work if you kept just a plain short skirt and had the stitching stuff on both shoulders rather than on the elbow of one sleeve. Not feeling Cherry, too many different things going on at once. It'd be better if you made her jacket more military-style to go with the boots, not frayed (Scylla's got that covered and it works better with her) and made the chain around her waist hang to one side like a wallet chain. Haruka's torso is fine but the lower portion could be more interesting, maybe more of that netting stuff. The coolness of the rest of Hiro's design is sort of neutered by the heart motif he's got going on, but I can appreciate the fact that he's got both eyes.

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So, my old artist seems to have quit me, so I'm looking to commision artists now (finally have money). I decided to take this as a chance to try redesigning some of the characters. So I decided to revive this thread with my postromancy powers. So what do you think of something like this... I kinda wanted to make Doom's clothing more...I dunno. I thought of replacing his current jacket with a knee length coat with a huge cross cut out of it so you can see his chest and stomach. A white line would trace this cross, and he's have two gold buttons in the upper two right angles of the cross. The crosses on his shoulder are removed and one like it is placed on one pant leg on his thigh. I want to change his pants to black. It's a little bit more fanservicy than his last one, but I think it's a bit cooler too.

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Not sure if you're still looking for an artist considering its been a few months but I'm open to doing character commissions for you. Feel free to check out my DeviantART page for examples and such. I know I contacted you in the past about drawing some fanservice pictures of the guys from your vn. And that offer still stands if you're interested. But I suppose it wouldn't hurt to have the same artist doing all the characters for consistencys' sake.

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